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Reviewer: Maxi Brux (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
I'm really enjoying this story. I'm hoping that Bella and Edward get back together (after he crawls because he was such a jerk). I thinkCarlisle and Esme need to apologise too because they changed their mind about something that affected Bella the most without discussing it with her demonstrating a complete lack of respect.
Please post the next chapter soon!
MB
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
No offense because your story is well written, I just don't care for it because it's too far off the happily ever after.
Author's Response: Uh- that's alright, why would an opinion offend me? Personally, happy ever afters aren't my cup of tea, as life isn't happy always either. Some people are into angst, other's arent.
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2011 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
I missed being loved.
The sad part is... the Cullens NEVER really loved her, did they? If they had, they would have kicked Assward out of the house and kept Bella until the piece of crap they call their son/brother grew the fuck up. Sorry, but I hate this Edward.
I'm half hoping this turns into a Tanya/Bella story. They both deserve better than Edward.
At least tell me that Bella has some sex with another guy! It would be great if she turned into a succubus!
Author's Response: When I started this story out, I had two very clear ideas on how I wanted it to end- since then, i have have four ideas.
I'm working now and I started writing again- for awhile, I had another story in the works and even had a Beta for it, but I decided to put that aside and focus on this one. I was able to piece together (while working the other day) 7 pages which for me, as you can tell, wouldn't even fill half a chapter, lol. I happen to write in smatters- I have two chapters already written and a third half written and now a fourth also half written. However, they aren't in Sync. One of these (which i'm trying to get to- my husband re-built my system and it wasn't entered into google docs- and it's on the old system) is an actual confrontation for AFTER Bella leaves the Denali's complete with Edward's POV which I swore I wasn't going to do.
Being a succubus is a very intriguing idea, but one I probably won't go with. This IS all about Bella's humanity, so her having sex isn't too unlikely. I refuse to have her meet edward in three chapters and them ride off into the sunset. I expect this to be a long story, and have PLENTY of angst.
Anyway, forgive my word vomit, run ons, and the like, it's tired and I have work and zumba first thing in the morning. I hope to get the chapter I started at work submitted, soon.
For those who were following me and still read this, my son unfortunately became very violent and had to go into a home- so I have more time on my hands.
Jen
Reviewer: stark (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Prologue July 2008
Have you given up on this story?
Author's Response: No. I have a very high needs child- he's bi-polar and autistic. Because of this and his behaviors getting worse, I only have time lately to maybe eat for 3 minutes.I don't expect people to understand unless they are in my shoes, but trust me, autism isn't as easy to deal with as some people think. I'm sorry if I've disappointed- but my child and family come first.
Reviewer: cellophaneice (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Prologue July 2008
Still one of my favs! I always swing by to see if it is updated!
<3s
Author's Response: Yes. I'm in the process of writing on this and one other story I'm attempting to get submitted. I have friends and attempting to secure a pre-beta- since I prefer to do that for any chapter I submit anyway. If you are looking to pre-read a story, let me know!!! I'd LOVE to send you it to look over! Also- my husband locked me out of my google documents after begging me to transfer all information on it. It took him 6 months to remember how to get back on so the past few weeks I've been a busy bee. PLEASE let me know if you'd like to beta for me!!!
Jen
Reviewer: blue_eyes (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
Hi, I loved reading this, but when is the next update?
Author's Response: It's truly not easy having a special needs child- his behavior has worsened this year and we can't seem to keep help for the life of us. I started writing tonight, so, HOPEFULLY It should be soon. I have chapters written out of order as the mood has struck me, and it's this next particular chapter that is giving me the most difficulties. :)
Jen
Reviewer: cellophaneice (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Prologue July 2008
OMG I love this one! I hope you continue!
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 2 Beginnings
This story disturbs me. I don't want to think that Edward can ever do this to Bella. But of course I haveto keep reading! Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 1 Betrayal
oh I am so angry at Edward right now!
Reviewer: twilightedgurl22 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
i love this story so much please update sooner than you did the last one lol. i can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry- Son is in hospital, It might take awhile longer. I'm alone the next two days during the day, so I might have time to do some writing in peace.
Reviewer: gr8k8 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
YOU'VE BEEN GONE TOO LONG!!!! MORE PLEASE?!?!?!?!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
This chapter was great. Your writing is wonderful. I could see the places you described vividly. I am anxious to read more.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
I have missed this story so much. I was worried that you had abandoned it. Great update. I love that Bella is with Tanya!!!!! I can't wait to read how this is going to play out!
Reviewer: Lori01 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
O.o Tanya!?!? I hope this has a happy ending.... but at the same time I hope Bella gets a chance to kick Edwards butt for leaving... again....
I like this story so far! But of couse. miss the Cullens!
Keep the chapters rolling!
Reviewer: Michelle987 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
This story makes me so sad! im hoping your team edward because if they didn't end up together it would break my heart. I had almost forgotten about this story, i hope you update soon!
Author's Response: I AM team Edward. I promise!!!!
Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
Hmmm...
Reviewer: UnholyAngel (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
Good chapter.
Given that the connexion between the Cullens and the Denali coven, I think, Tanya should be able to catch on to Bella's real identity. Her reaction to that should be quite interesting.
I had almost given up hope to see this story continued. I look forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
very good but are we likely to see a reunion between b & e
Author's Response: I'm very sorry, but I don't want to give any of the plot points away.
Reviewer: Forbidden_Romance (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 2 Beginnings
I hope you update soon. I'm really enjoying this story so much.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
Ok, so I know you'll think I'm exaggerating when I say this, but I actually really missed this story. I found myself thinking about it randomly the other day, sad because you hadn't updated in so long. I sincerely hope that you begin to update more often.
Seriously.
I do fangirl happy dances when you update. I fell in love with this story all over again!!
and the end. HOLY CRAP the end. TANYA! AHHH!!!
More soon!! PLEASE! With a naked Edward drizzled in chocolate and whipped cream on top!!!
Reviewer: maddy green eyes (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
this is areally good story! well done. 1 question tho...... im getting a bit confused with the constant name changes. apart from that im loving it!
Author's Response: I didn't want to give it away, but I've had a few of these questions so far. Bella goes by two names. To people she'll rent/buy homes from, open accounts, go to school- anything that she needs identification for, she'll go by her legal name. In the case of Tanya, if there is ever a chance of her finding out it's Bella, she obviously doesn't want her knowing her legal name. There is a reason for this and I won't go into anymore or I'll give away key plot points. Sorry.
Reviewer: evrythingmusic1 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
Ooooh I. Love. This. Story!! hehe For some reason I love seeing Bella on her own as a vamprie it's so exiting!! Though I deeply miss Edward and the rest of the Cullens but when Bella and Edward see each other again (it is obvious to happen) he will have a HUGE heap of apologizing to do. lol Write, write, write!!! :)
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
I am so absolutely beyond thrilled that this is updated again --- one of my most favorite stories ever. You touch my emotions so very well with your writing --- you are so talented and should be very proud.
Fantastic chapter --- I feel so bad for Bella. I am hoping that she is reunited with Edward at some point, but I am glad she is living her life as well as she can. And Tanya! It should be interesting to see where this goes. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, so much. You made me blush, literally. I'm updating very soon. You REALLY made my month with this! :)
Reviewer: jattyca (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
I am truly enjoying your story. I admit, it took me a while to warm up to it. Edward's actions were so . . . dickish. He takes a vote, without notice to Bella or an opportunity for her to be heard, to rescind the earlier vote to make her a vampire, then is shocked when she does something drastic in response? And it's not like her act was premeditated. His actions in leaving her to transform without him were truly appalling. You've created quite a job for yourself to rehabilitate himself in our eyes, even if Bella doesn't seem infuriated with him. We might lose respect for Bella if she isn't angry at him in any way. That's not to say Edward isn't entitled to some hard feelings because she used Jasper so horribly. But that takes us back to the impulsive nature of her action; let the punishment fit the crime, Edward! I'm anxious to see how you write these conflicting emotions.
You've done a compelling job painting the picture of Bella's loneliness. We really feel how desperately she wants some kind of contact with someone, but because she can't have it, she tries to fill her time with music, reading, and sketching. The emptiness she feels just leaps off the screen.
By the way, I hope you tell us who the other vote was for Bella becoming immortal.
Well done!
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 4 Exile
I'm glad you updated, this is one of my favorite stories. Hope your next update is soon!
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