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Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 8
Ewwwwww. James is icky.... "Ms. Swan" my ass!
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 6
I want a chinchilla!! Jealoussss.....
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 28
Gahhhh! That was fabulous... and oh my gosh, I completely FORGOT about James!
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 28
So, is that dance something that your hubby and his co-workers did for you when you got engaged? If so ... damn! You lucky girl! I loved this chapter! Absolutely loved it! Why can't James just slither away and die? Seriously!?!?
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 28
Ok, I am in LOVE with this story. I read the entire thing today and it is amazing! I can't wait for more! Please update again soon, you are an amazing writer!
Manda
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 28
Whoaaaaa..james?!
"/ nooo
but i loved this chapter..its not what i was expecting
Ohh..and Maybe Im amazed is so amazinggg!
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 2
Um, yeah. I would appreciate Edward wrapped in a big red bow with a smile. But wearing ONLY the bow, of course ;)
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 2
Um, yeah. I would appreciate Edward wrapped in a big red bow with a smile. But wearing ONLY the bow, of course ;)
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
HaHA! Go Alice!
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
HaHA! Go Alice!
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 28
Uh oh! I hope she was seeing things and that really wasn't James! Great chapter! Got a little hot in here while reading that one! Wish I could have my own Edward to do a dance like that for me! Maybe the hubby will....
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 28
This chapter had me laughing so hard my sides were killing me.
But the end literally gave me chills.
James. He gives me heebie jeebies ontop of my heebie jeebies. *shudders*
hahaha. Poor Mike. He's always a creepy loser.
More soon please!!
Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 28
And then... and then... and then Edward crawled across the floor, shirtless, sex dripping off of him, and then... and then... and then Edward slithered onto Bella's lap and they had dry, fully clothed sex in front of all of their friends and neighbors, and then... and then... and then all the fangirls fainted.
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 28
Too freaking hot!!!!!!! OMG if they do that I am totally going next time! With a cliffy like that, please don't make us wait long!!!!!
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 28
Wow! This was awesome! Edward and the others in their uniforms..dancing...was so hot! And of course James would come back now to ruin Bella and Edward's happiness...ugh
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 28
of course james comes back into the picture. of fucking course.
~ B
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 28
Wow...I guess she really saw James...Nice with the Edward seduction dance, can't wait for more...please update again soon. ;D
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 28
OMG this was such a great chapter!!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 28
LOL That was ace lol i wish i would have been there with all those men in uniform yum XP
Reviewer: UR_PERSONAL_HEROIN (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 28
this was a great chapter. i cant wait to read more.
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 28
i love this story. i cant wait for the next chapter. i hope its up soon.
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 28
So fucking amazing! I had the song playing in the background while reading and it couldn't have been any more perfect (ok, it could have been happening for real with me sitting in Bella's seat)...but still! W-O-W!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 28
wow hubba hubba awesome chapter! I want some hot EMT's for myself now :(
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 28
Cheesy Mike pick-up line? "I'm a professional bra-fitter. My hands have been calibrated for measuring the perfect cup size. Can I measure you?" Yes, it's sad.
What a wonderful dance those boys do! That would have been something to see! I was getting all worked up just reading it.
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 28
Interesting tradition Edward's station has there...
And my guess is that Bella did see James there. Can't wait to read more!
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