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Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 29
wow ! what a way to end this chapter I can not wait to see what will happen next
Reviewer: Starla Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 29
I so love this story! Keep up the good work.
As for the answer to your poll question: Anonimous phonecalls that keep on ringing for 5 minutes straight if you don't pick up and if you do, they immediately hang up on you.
Reviewer: freckles9399 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 29
awesome chapter !! love sexy drunken Edward !!!
creepy stalker activity ,hummm i had a guy that would call my house all day long and then every time i would go somewhere he would be there or driving by my work all the time creepy !!
Reviewer: Jalice (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 29
Great chapter. I love seeing drunken Edward, he is kind of awesome and pathetic all in one. I can't decide if I want to shake my head and give him pitying eyes or give him a high five and hang out with him for a night. I also love your use of Mike... Only he would think to hit on a pregnant chick. Him I actually do pity. Oh, and dramatic James (re)introduction. I know he is going to show up and I'm going to be screaming at Bella to "not open the door". Anyway, keep the chapters coming I absolutely adore this story!
Worst stalker-like behavior
Well, mine is real life anyway. I dated a guy in the beginning of my freshman year of high school for about 6 months and then I broke up with him. He has a lot of emotional problems, but he was always a very nice guy that was fun to hang out with. We stayed friends for about a year after the breakup, but it was always awkward so I gradually just stopped talking to him. I thought all was fine at the beginning of this year and we could resume our friendship; I was happily single and in his first year of college he had gotten a girlfriend and his life was looking up. I didn't get the same awkward feeling while around him and I though he had finally gotten over me. However, at the end this year he called me to tell me that he still loved me and he would do anything for me. He said if I asked him to drop out of college, move to Florida, and have 3 kids and a dog he would. He started crying on the phone, telling me he didn't think he could live without me and that he knew that we were soulmates. It's gotten back to being really awkward and a tad scary.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 29
poor Edward - lucky he had Bella to look after him with being so very plastered lol
And... it seems James is going up the ante now :S
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 29
Ok, why don't people believe in looking out the window before opening their door?!
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 29
Drunk Edward is funny, but hung over Edward is just...ewww. Mike's lines were hilarious! And Edward falling asleep when they're going to have sex is just too funny.
And it was James at the party and the he's the one who left the rose right? That's just creepy!
Hmm...creepy stalker behavior...I'd say photos like that Robin Williams movie..."One Hour Photo"...CREEPY!
Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 29
this is so not good.... for real.... james is a freak..... and I hope that Bella says somehting to someone and doesn't just think it's her imiganiation...... cause taking that kind of chance being preggers is not a good decision.....
looking forward to seeing what will happen next.....
Reviewer: mkeup1 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 29
It was james get her inside don't let her get hurt
even thought i gave you the idea to make james beat her up and make her a miscarage
i was wrong oh my god i'm so right
Melissa thanks so much for the story it is so awesome
Reviewer: xmouth (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 29
Love it!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 29
James strikes again... and I will continue to believe it's James until you tell me otherwise.
Don't know about any stalker behaviour (although Edward's habit of sneaking into Bella's room as she slept comes to mind, nor that I think that would work here); but drunk Edward funny. Hungover Edward... not so much. Ew.
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: lifesaver918 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 29
Great update... hmmm the creepiest stalker-like behavior i have ever heard of??? well there are two things... either cloting items go missing, usually panties... or photos taken while the subject is completely unaware are mailed to the house letting them know someone is watching, but not knowing who
i'm sure there are other ones that are better, but i figured i'd put my two cents in.
I hope you'll update soon and I hope that when you do, Bella will be telling Edward that she's feeling creeped out. Thougn I gotta ask you, if it is James, how could Bella and Edward not have been informed that he was either a)let out of police cutsody or b) escaped police custody.... I believe that as the victim she has a right to know, but i'm just curious
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 29
Great chapter!!!
I can't believe Edward told the whole bar that he popped Bella's cherry. Wow. I also can't believe he passed out right before she had an orgasm. That sucks.
It was James who left the rose, right? Creepy!!!!
The most creepist stalker story I heard of was this guy who was obsessed with this girl. He followed her around, called her when she didn't give him her number, e-mailed her. One night he called her and said that her bed was so soft and he hoped to experience that softness with her. (Creepy, right?)
Please, please, please update soon? *begs on hands and knees*
Reviewer: LVB (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 29
Ummmmm stalker behaviour...photos. Photos are definitely creepy.
I once got told that I looked like I'd be wild in bed- creepy creepy co-worker...
Drunkward is hilarious!
Reviewer: chrissy_tigger (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 29
omg...james is such a creap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i know he was really at the bar...lol
keep writing...i was so excited today when i found a new chapter to this story :D
Reviewer: RiRi (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 29
oh oh oh oh!!! Hahaha I like how Edward passed out! Typical man! :D lol.
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 29
I would be SO MAD AT EDWARD!!! that was just mean lol
I can't wait for the next chapter!!! :)
Reviewer: twilightlover90 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 29
ohhhh god please tell me its not james ohh god it is isnt it damnit he is just soooo creepy!!!!!
Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 29
That was fantastic! Drunk Edward was hysterical, poor guy! LOL
I don't know if James is back or not, but Bella's prego this time. So, if he hurts her, Edward's going to prison for murder. That just wouldn't be good for anybody.
Now you've got me anxious, I can't wait to read what's next!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 29
Phuck me!! I know it's James!! I knew way back when that he'd be back to haunt them :((((( He'd better not hurt Pregella! :((((
Edward naked, Edward dancing, even Edward drunk, sweaty and hurling...they're ALLL good. She's very gracious to clean his barf bucket. :) I don't know that I'd be so friendly!
Seth sounds pretty delish too!!! I wouldn't mind a peephole into the shower room at that fire station, that's fo sho! >:>
Next chappie, s'il-vous plait! (Hammer, don't hurt 'em! pleeze!!)
xoxoxoxo
Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 29
I was once semi-stalked by someone with a foot fetish. The first time I encountered him, he asked me to tape his driver's license to the bottom of my shoe and walk around on it. There were several encounters after that. The events spanned several locations and several years. The last time I encountered him, I saw him in my rear view mirror, motioning for me to come back. Needless to say, I kept on driving.
Poor Drunkward. Poor Bella for having to help him. I'm a sympathy puker and would have been too busy throwing up to offer any assistance.
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 29
Hehe....Drunk Edward is funny as hell... ;D Hmmm...I guess James is back after all. Please update very soon, don't leave us hanging for too long.
Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 29
Oh my gosh! Where is the rose from?
You never have to thank me, love. I'm here for ya! Who else would hash out the fic and the real life with me on so many occassions!
Great chapter and I cannot WAIT for the next one!
Ellie
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 29
YOU...fucking suck james!!! Way to ruin a almost happy ending!!! Cowardly Bastard!!!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 29
The creepiest stalker behavior would have to be when mine broke into my house and stole 2 pairs of my victoria secret panties. That still pisses me off and creeps me out. Great chapter! Poor drunk Edward. Please update soon!!!!
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