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Reviewer: swhile (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 31
AWESOME CHAPTER, AS USUAL! SO DOES THIS MEAN YOU'LL BE UPDATING FASTER NOW THAT YOUR BLOCK IS GONE? I HOPE SO! I HATE WAITING! HA HA!! SO, SERIOUSLY, WHAT IN THE WORLD IS BELLA THINKING BY NOT TELLING EDWARD ABOUT JAMES? I MEAN, I KNOW SHE WANTS TO PROTECT HIM, BUT I THINK TWO AGAINST ONE ARE MUCH BETTER ODDS THAN HER AND HER BABY AGAINST A PSYCHOPATH! ANYWAY, I HOPE SHE COMES TO HER SENSES. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
THANK YOU!!
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 31
Lovely lemon chapter! Have to love that...
A few things - still confused after everything they've been through that she wont tell Edward - esp after being with him in CA. Also - the fact that James can somehow see them - is watching the house - that would be enough for me to tell the police, Edward, etc. That would freak me out - and I esp would be worrying about how much access he has - can he hear them? How much can he see? And then I would worry for Edward's safety.
Anyway - while the lemon was needed and nice - dont think I would have the sanity of mind to withstand that and the James terror if I were Bella...
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 31
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I didn't even want to leave a review because I'm so mad at Bella for lying. Yes, I'm that mad at her. It was stupid of her. And I hate her a little for it. No matter how she rationalizes it to herself.
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 31
This chapter was great!!!! please update soon! Does Edwrad's mystery of his past have anything to do with him having too much to drink?
Reviewer: tattoochic911 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 31
Another great chapter, as usual! This is a great story! I can't wait to see what James could have on Edward! keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 31
Ooooh I HATE James!!!!! You definitely write a good bad guy, he makes me so mad! I adore groveling Edward, silly boy can't hold his liquor - but he is very cute actually. And Bella, I can't figure out if she has balls or is once again stupid for not communicating with Edward about what the hell is going on! I am so rilled up after readng this, urgh! I am so happy this story is back, I hope things settle down at home for your sake, and of course for us adoring fans of yours :-) Drama-rama! Awesome!
Reviewer: livin_it (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 7
I was an emt for 17 years...you pretty much nailed it. In fact, the call that sealed my retirement deal was a 3 year old v/s swimming pool. 17 years of that type of stress was more than enough.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 31
Great chapter. Bella is so dumb, Edward gave her an opening talking about how much he drank at their engagement party. Why didn't she just ask what do you mean about drinking too much and bad things? Simple--would have the Ace in the hole with James and he couldn't do any further damage. She should also contact the police if he can see what she is wearing and what Edward brought home for dinner, James is too close for the restraining order from the courts. Violating restraining order is against his probation and would cause him to be back inside. Bella biggest problem is she thinks too much, has to handle everything alone, has to protect the ones she loves with at times NO common sense at all. But the chapter is good. Let's hear what James' demands are besides retracting her charges against him. Which will be hard with the video tape capture of his conversation with Victoria. It's already shows his intent and guilt all in media. Update soon, would like to know if she does ask Edward about past or even ask Alice about it.
Author's Response: Bella thinks way too much,but remember, she is the daughter of a police officer.....she isn't stupid, not by far. She wants to find out what James has first before laying her cards on the table and nailing his testicles to the wall so to speak. Have faith! Thank you so much for reading!
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 31
Great chapter! Welcome back!
Reviewer: Souillet (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 31
I am so glad i got to read an update from you! I was worried this story would be left unfinished.
I cant wait to read more and hope you update soon :)
Reviewer: naeo99 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 31
no james!happy times please!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 31
UGH! James--Again!! Ohh she SO needs to tell Edward!! No secrets!! Just needs to straight-out ask him about his past -- if there was ever anything shady
Reviewer: swingate (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 31
Yeah!!! I am so glad you are back! I hope things are better on the home front for you.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 31
Hooray for you! Writer's block is over. :))) I was so glad to see an update - I love your paramedic Edward. He can put bandaids on me any time he wants to!! :)
Wow, fiesty pregnant Bella is a sight to behold! Good for her - I hope she rats James' ass out HARD. I would be on the tele to his parole officer, on the phone to E! or Extra! or any other of those rag shows, I would be getting airline records, I would nail his ass TO. THE. WALL. I am not a fan of blackmail! And for god's sake, tell Edward. Doesn't this Bella read fanfic or watch TV? giving in to blackmail never works! haha :)
Hope things have settled down at home for you - no drama for August, ya hear? :) Enjoy the rest of your summer!
Thanks for the update, Tammy - you and your Twi crew are da bomb :)
Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 13
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 31
great chapter! i just hope that bella, edward, and baby arn't in too much [preferably any] danger.. and i wonder about the dirt that james has on edward... keep writing =]
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 31
glad to have you back! I hope she rips that james asshole to shreads and her and Edward will end up ok and happy!
Nice build up to the tension!
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 31
wow! I love this Bella.
Reviewer: jordanmac (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 31
I hope that Bella talks to Edward about what James says he has on Edward. Please update soon.
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 31
Great job! I can only imagine what James has on Edward. Can't wait to find out and how he'll be stopped. And hasn't Bella learned, secrets are BAD, no matter the intention, they always come back to bite you in the ass!
Reviewer: Lina (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 31
My ex dropped some heavy news on me on Valentines Day one year.....*sigh* I'm not big on V day but damn! he coulda waited til february 15th lol
Cant wait for an update
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 31
Yey!!!Great chapter...Let's hope Bella is one smart, hormonal, pregnant bitch... ;) Can't wait for the next chapter..Just awsome..
Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 8
oh no!
Reviewer: tan (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 31
i hope she rips james a new asshole.
Reviewer: Sylvia Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 31
I can't wait to see what Bella actually does about James... what I'm trying to figure out is where is he??? I think he got an apartment somewhere around there.but who knows....can't wait for the next chapter.
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