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Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 2
you go edward, make her your ;)
Author's Response: Oh, he will, and before too long! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 2
OOH! Edward moves....that's got to be something to see! Looking forward to reading what they are. I especially like that they've been friends for a year. No running straight into bed.
Author's Response: Their relationship will build some more before that happens. Remember, Edward is the consummate gentleman, and I don't want to cheapen their relationship by having things rushed. It will however happen before too long.....
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great intro. Can't wait to read more. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I will be updating soon.
Reviewer: letsgetGRAPHIC (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great job!
Adding to my favorites.
Reviewer: gordonfan74 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
I really like what you have thus far. You are off to a great start on the characterizations and I like the basis for the plot. Your writing skills are solid, including grammar and punctuation. I'm a sucker for stuff like that. I think this story has great potential. I hope you continue with it and can update again soon.
Reviewer: Ronsart (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
Like what I've read so far..can't wait for an update
Author's Response: Thanks for your support. An update is on the way :)
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
I sent you a review over at FF ooohing and awwwing all over it! I love the story. And from what you said over there...I want a chapter dedicated to me dang it! :)
Author's Response: Okay then...next one will be for you! Thanks for your support!
Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
love seems like a pretty strong word for alice to use at the end, from bella's reactions I would think she would have deduced just to a simple crush or just pass it off as bella's shy nature, i loved edwards reaction to alice trying to find a man for bella, are we going to see edwards perspective at all? this is a really great start i can hardly wait for you to write more =D
Author's Response: Well I think Alice is aware of alot more than she lets on......her intuition and all you know. You will see EPOV in the next chapter and it's good! Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: fearishowifall09 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 1
Fantastic start! Please update soon and make it a long one!!!!! :)
-Tabi
Author's Response: Next chapter is much longer than this. I hope you will enjoy it. Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: lambentness (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
really love this fic so far,can't wait for the next chapter to be out~
Author's Response: Next chapter is coming soon :) Thank you for your support!
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