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Reviewer: TheLionandTheLambx3 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 6
Awwwwwwwwww that was the sweetest thing ever!!!!! I loved it!! Please post asap!!
Author's Response: I'll try my best to get the update out soon!
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 6
I love this story. I was sitting here reading it with a big goofy grin on my face!! My kids already think I'm insane, so they just shake their heads and walk away. You are a really great writer and I look forward to reading more when you update. Thanks!!
Author's Response: Awwwww shucks!!!!!! Thanks so much! I'm going to start the next chapter tomorrow so I'll try to update really soon. Keep an eye on the AU-Human forum, I always post a teaser......
Reviewer: bella rayne (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 6
i did catch the dedication.... thank you so much!
Author's Response: Your welcome! Thank you for your encouragment, it really means alot to me!
Reviewer: bella rayne (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 6
..... wait. let me catch my breath..... ok. that was great! i love that youve made them wait, it is so bella and edward.
you are doing a great job with this story. i wonder what james will be like??? hmmm....
just as bella is counting the hours until she sees edward again, so am i counting the hours until you update again! *sigh* i know perfection takes time but patience never was my strong suit.
amazing, amazing, amazing...
rayne
Author's Response: Thank you Rayne! Did you catch my dedication?
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 3
Wow that was great! I loved Edward/Bella sharing the music together, what a fantastic idea. The plot twists are really good. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 2
I love this chapter!! You really set up some great plots here and I can't wait to see how things turn out.
Reviewer: GoldenGirl115 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 6
Perfection!
Reviewer: inlovewithavampire12 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 6
This is so good Edward always a gentlemen,,,,,
Author's Response: I know *sighs* I am going to have to smut him up soon though.....
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanx! :D
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 6
ok...so I need to know where EMT's live/stay while they're waiting for calls because as of right now, hot EMT men became my new fantasy.
GEEZZEEE. Now, if I can find someone whose name is Edward, has green eyes that liquify my brain functions, and bronze hair...then I think I'll have died and gone to heaven. HOLY. SMOKES. That lemon zest was HOT.
Alright. Down girl. ha. Anyway. I don't have a good feeling about James (he's never EVER a good character to encounter)...especially because Edward and Bella JUST got together. URGH!
Another fabulous job =]
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I thought the lemon was good too. EMT's usually stay at the firestation they work out of, or in Canada where paramedics aren't affiliated with the firestation their own ambulance base. Plenty of room for fantasy in that......ambulance bays, equipment rooms, linen storage, back of the ambulance......the possibilities are endless......I'm married to a medic and have had lots of time to fantasize on it!
LOL! Thanks for your review! You make me smile :)
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 6
Love it! Love it! Love it! hope there is more soon.
Author's Response: There will me more, and we will meet James soon, although he won't be the "bad" guy in a traditional way......
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 5
“I missed you Bells. I never meant to hurt you. I was so stupid.” She mimicked in a sneering tone. “What we have here are all “I” messages. I, I, I. Didn't hear any mention of your thoughts, feelings, or desires for the future. Just “I need forgiveness.” What about what you needs? ARRRGGGGHHH!”
I really like how you made the distinction with the "I' language that Jacob used when he should have been saying a lot of "you" instead. I like it when Rosalie is fleshed out and smart. Again, another well-written chapter. :) Books
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 4
You're walking a delicate line here with Edward not wanting to take emotional advantage of her particularly when she's grieving. Well done.
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 3
Very well written. Poor Bella. Jake being jealous at a time like that? Well done.
:)
Author's Response: I agree, Jake is a putz!
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 2
You write a very sweet Edward. And Seth was one of my favorite bit characters. It's good to see him being used - and you write him well. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 1
Poor Bella. You captured her humiliation really well in this chapter. I can't wait to see what you do next. :)
Reviewer: bella rayne (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 5
i have to tell you... this is my first review ever. so feel special. this story is amazing! i loved you when you made edward the caffiene junkie, hated you when you killed charlie off, and loved you again for this chapter. bella and edward belong together and always take the road less traveled to get there. i am an emt myself so that is why i originally decided to read this story. i love it! the only thing that could have made it more emotionally charged is if it had been edward that was initially called to take care of charlie before he died, but the plot with jacob is great too! i cant wait until you update again,,, so please hurry!!!!
Reviewer: melanie (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 5
i love this story. It has character and shows hwo much i hate Jacob Black. All my friends think i a, crazy for not liking him, but mostly all they like about him is the werewolf thing and the fact that in the movie he is played my taylor lautner. I really can't wait to see what happens next, also Charlie dying is really sad. Hope to get a reply,
melanie
you are the second person i have given a rating of ten, those are hard to come by from me! : D
Author's Response: Wow! Melanie thank you very much! I always appreciate reviews and quite frankly I like to know that people are enjoying my story. I am going to start writing the next chapter tomorrow, so please keep an eye for it, I hope it doesn't disappoint!
Reviewer: melanie (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 3
I love this story so far. it had great plot and i love the change to the characters SM created. Hope you write more soon! : D
melanie
Author's Response: Thanks for your review.....I am burning up my keyboard to crank out more.....
Reviewer: natlee (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 5
I'm quite enjoying this one! Loved the way Edward was comforting her throughout the events of her father's death. It was so cute... I love a loyal, caring Edward. And of course I'm happy they've finally given into their desire for one another. Can't for the next chapter! Update soon! =]
Reviewer: melanie (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love this story so far and really want to see what happens next.
melanie
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 5
*squee!!!* Yay!!! Woot!! Go Edward go Bella!
Great Chapter, can't wait to read more!
Jace
Reviewer: Marjojo (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 5
Lemon next? Yes?
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 5
IhaveachapterdedicatedtomeandithappenstobethebestchapterEVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was so excited that I literally SQUEALED =D Seriously.
I'm so happy that you dedicated this chapter to me-because like I said in my excited squeal, this is the best chapter you've posted YET!!
Edward is absolutely perfect when he's handling Bella. You took the way that I think Edward would've acted IN Twilight (seriously-your characterizations are SPOT on) and it seriously made me smile. I sincerely hope that if anything happens to someone I love, I have someone exactly like the Edward you described.
Anywho, the Bella part was like EXACTLY what I wished for. So not only did I get to read an update (and yes, after THE world's LONGEST day of classes, this was EXACTLY what I needed to make my day), I got to read EXACTLY what I was hoping for. Stupid Jake though, Rose was completely right. Jake didn't take Bella's feelings into account ONCE (very un-Jake-like but since he is a douschebag in this story it serves him right).
And I think I emitted the world's highest frequency of fangirl squealing in the UNIVERSE when Edward kissed Bella at the end. YAY!!!!!!! Thank you for fueling my imagination for the next century. Edward is a sexy EMT that can be LOCKED in with me for...you know, FOREVER!!!
This update was fantastic, stupendous, and AMAZING!! I seriously can't say enough good things. Please keep updating...and thank you =] I'm very very honored!!
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