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Reviewer: ekimmuh (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 4
It seems like I love each chapter more than the first. I love that Edward is staking his claim on Bella. I can't wait to see how she reacts to their first kind of kiss. And jelous Edward is always fun. ;)
Reviewer: ekimmuh (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh I loved this chapter. Edward and his little advances to try and show her he wanted more than friendship. The panio playing. *sigh*
And then Jacob showing up to tell them Charlie was killed in the line of duty... Edward was amazing when he pulled her into his arms and began comforting her. I love where this is going.
Reviewer: ekimmuh (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 2
Oh I love your Edward. :) I can't belive he told Seth he was going to marry her. It was so sweet and told so much of what he feels for her. So I'm getting that the reason he hasn't asked her out is b/c he didn't think she felt anything more than friendship for him?
Ok....on to the next chapter. :)
Reviewer: PawntoQueen (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 8
Naive little Bella...should have listened to Eddie. Now he will have to save her from herself. Lol
Reviewer: ekimmuh (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 1
So I marked this fic to read a while ago but...well I'm just now getting aroudn to it, sorry. This first chapter was very cute. Her walking into the kitchen in a towel with Edward sitting there was a nice touch. I liked that Edward came up to appologize to her and offered her his arm. That was a very Edward thing to do. And Alice now knowing Bella has fallen for Edward...well I have a feeling this is going to be very interesting.
Reviewer: pink_sapphire (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 8
I am loving this story! It's a totally different idea and well written! Awesome!
Reviewer: leslo (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 8
i love this story cant wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 8
I am enjoying your story. It helps that you know what you are talking about with the emt stuff. I am interested in where its going and cant wait to read more.
I am so glad you made edward likable in some of the stories they make him so brooding(spelling is it even a word) all the time and Bella so afraid that it makes me not even like either of them. Yeah in twilight they were both like that but they both took that leap.I love that you are also not a teenager you have life experience so your story makes sense and is fun to read!
thanks again I love reading the stories over here I can't write at all though! Wish i had your talent.
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 8
Sorry for not reviewing sooner, but I had to sneak this in at work this morning, and I'm just now getting a chance to sit down and review tonight.
LOVED IT!! Seriously steamy! *fans self*
And I can't wait to see what James has in store for Bella. LOL This should be interesting.
Great job hun!! :) *hugs*
~Cat~
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 8
The entire Edward and Bella encounter was HOT!!! I'd like to get my hands around James the Bastard's neck, though. Another outstanding chapter! I truly loved it!
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 8
James is deliciously smug. :) Well done. Books
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oh, Bella better get on the phone right now! I'm excited to find out just what happens - I get the feeling James is gonna milk this for all its worth and end up being rather persistent.
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 8
Ugh! That James! I like naked Edward much better, and I know Bella does too.
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 5
I'm glad he stepped up. Bella's insecurity was making me nervous.
Reviewer: MrsRobertPattinson (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 8
HHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT damn. That was smokin', lady. If I hadn't already taken a shower...
The stuff with James seems a little bit out of left field, but you had kind of foreshadowed it in the beginning having him seek her out and such. I know you'll get to more of the background of it (or reiterate it more in depth for everyone) in a later chapter, so I'm not all that worried. Of course not. You know, I don't know why I mention these things. We'll forget all about it the next time the EMT gets nekkid, so what's the point? :)
Have a wonderful weekend, darling!
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 4
I hope Bella took the kiss that way.
The funeral was sad, but Alice conspiring to get them together was priceless.
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 3
Wow! I did not see that coming. I love that Edward is there to comfort her and that he's already thwarted Jake. Powerful images--you wrote this chapter so well. It was very moving.
Reviewer: Twilight_Momma2three (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 8
well, he's crazy! you can't just now tell her your a couple, especially when she's got a boyfriend! jasper should have come with her, it wouldn't have looked like that in the media if there were two guys there :) poor edward, i hope he doesn't let this get to him!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 8
AH-Maaaazzziiinnnngggggg chapter. AMAZING!
Did I mention that I absolutely love this story lately? Your last chapter was really intense and this one was just really steamy. I really like how you balanced the story like that. I'm happy that your husband got the reviews he wanted =]
Even though Bella and Edward's hormones are ready, I'm glad they're taking it slow...although I wish they had done the deed before she met James. I've got a BAD feeling about him. Just the way he met her at the airport made my stomach turn. YUCK!! James has never once, in any story, been a good thing.
More SOON please?
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 8
LOL, Poor Bella. Great Chapter! Hot Chapter! :)
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 2
Awww...adding this story to my fav's. Cute!
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 8
Amazing chapter! I can't wait to see what happens with James and Bella during her little visit to LA.
Reviewer: Greenever (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 7
Great chapter....you feel the tension and understand how stressful and emotional the job can be. I liked the banter too.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 8
Nice chapter. I like how they are taking it in stages. What's going to happen with James..I can only guess. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 8
I loved this chapter! you always seem to satisfy my fanfic need so i will def. be nominating a LOT! lol. I am a little worried about James and of course the territorial Edward to come with that... gosh, i wish i had a sweet saveward!
Keep up the great work and a quick hello to your Mr. Medic and a request that he will hopefully keep helping you in future chapters :D
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