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Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 13
That was so friggin' hot. Loved it! I adore this whole story.
Author's Response: Thank you, there will be lots more hotness to come....
Reviewer: MrsRobertPattinson (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 13
Dick in a box! Dick in a box! Yay!
I will admit to going into happy convulsions when I read the author's note, btw.
I'm glad your husband likes me again as I lifted the strict sexbargo, and, obviously, someone, not that I'm pointing any fingers *points directly at YOU*, got some inspiration from somewhere. I can't imagine where, but I'm just saying.
I'll probably read this again later and leave yet another review as my brain is tapped from doing graduate level reading for my classes for two days straight. Boo to reading for academics! Yay for reading fanfiction!
Author's Response: You make me laugh....dick in a box was inspired baby! INSPIRED!
Yeah and Andre says thank you to lifting the sexbargo. After staying up til 4 am writing and ignoring his pouty faces I finally made it to bed. Inspiration for the lemon *blushes* hmmmm....he's tall, dark, handsome and french......LOL!
I'm hoping to get the next update out by mid week. Watch for it, it's gonna be a fun one!
Tammy
Reviewer: Morganville_Vamp (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 13
Victoria's Secret never fails.
Author's Response: Long live Vicky's!!!!!!
Reviewer: tartar le freak (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 13
Oh la la!! Je l'aime!
Like I mentioned before, nice turn out rate. Keep churning out those glorious chapters Venomousgal! It seems as if everytime I just try to check in quickly there is a new installment for Rescue Me and then I absolutely must stop everything and read, read, read! Not that I am complaining, just the opposite.
Chapter 13 ushered in the "curled toes era" of the story! I loved every part of this chapter....but why do I get the feeling that the milk jug didn't wander off on its own? And oh, another parallel with the crystal heart necklace within the context of "forever" that is a hand-me-down. Sneaky sneaky!
Much love to you and your story!
Author's Response: Thanks Tara!
I was glad to see que vous aime le histoire! No the milk jug didn't wander off on it's own.....wait til the next chapter, more hilarity will ensue!
Tammy
Reviewer: x_darla_x (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 13
Happy birthday indeed!
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 13
Now that was a birthday. :) Books
Author's Response: Don't you wish we could all have a party like that?
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 13
Whew, you certainly brought the hotness!!! Great job!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 13
i swear to god - that was the best ficgasm I've had in quite a while.
VERY nicely done!
LMFAO dick in a box. inspired, that was!
Author's Response: WOW....SubtlePen....I am honored that you are reading this. I love your stuff! Thank you!
Tam
Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 13
So good! A seriously nice way to wake up this morning, okay well this afternoon, long night okay? =) I was so happy logging on this morning and seeing an update to this story YAY! and then to read the sexing? awesome! lol
Author's Response: Hahaha! I didn't go to bed until 4 am. I was too busy finishing this and getting it posted! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: kelsey_jim (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 13
Great lemon. I love it.
Author's Response: Thnaks it was fun to write!
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 13
Because THE lemon deserves all the love we can muster, here's another review stating that I lurved this chapter! Mother's necklace! Oh Sweet Saveward...how I heart thee....
Author's Response: Awww, my fellow canuck! I loved the encouragement and thank you so much! I was worried the lemon would come off as cheesy, but I guess it turned out after all.....thanks for being one of my favorite reviewers!
Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 13
That was hot and well worth the wait. Great job!
Edward it just to sexy.
Great Chapter.... HAPPY BIRTHDAY BELLA!
Author's Response: Happy Birthday indeed!
Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 13
What a nice birthday - Edward truly does understand her. Nice chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: alicewhite3 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 13
i did enjoy both actually!!
and hahaha i just watched dick in a box! after jizz in my pants.
Author's Response: Christmas; dick in a box
Hanukkah; dick in a box
Kwanzaa; a dick in a box
Every single holiday a dick in a box
LMAO!!!!!! Thanks for the review!
Tammy
Reviewer: melanie (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 12
I don't know but it needs to be thoughtful and really sweet. Plus personalized,
melanie
Reviewer: melanie (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 11
I liked this chapter especially about her taking down the prince of hollywood. LOL!
melanie
Author's Response: Thank you Mel!
Reviewer: melanie (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 10
I didn't even read the begining so thanks
melanie
great job i have to catch up on reading all my favorite stories. sorry i didn't come online sooner
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 12
What should Edward get her for her birthday? How about him naked with a big red bow wrapped around his ... nevermind. I'm thinking an engagement ring. Maybe it's too soon, though. Great chapter, as always!
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 12
An engagement ring! What? Too soon? I'm a sucker for proposals. Another excellent chapter!
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 12
can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 11
Go Bella! Taking down James! :) I like how she was able to take care of herself in a lot of ways! I have a feeling we haven't seen the last of james yet!
great chapter!
Reviewer: Morganville_Vamp (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 12
How about an ENGAGEMENT RING
Hehe jk. or not. =]
Reviewer: MrsRobertPattinson (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 12
Soooooooo, I'm really sad. See ----> :( You see, someone promised me a chapter update today because she's home on doctor's orders. I can't imagine who that might me *looks pointedly in your direction and continue to pout in her corner*
I think someone might have been sexing her husband so much that she forgot to let Edward sex Bella. *again looks pointedly in your direction and continue to pout*
I think someone might have spent her sick days actually being sick rather than focusing totally on my needs to see Edward sex Bella. I mean, really, how rude! *continues staring pointedly and pouting in a corner, but stamps her foot for emphasis on "rude"*
No, for serious now. I hope you're feeling better. I really hope that you had the time to get another chapter done, get yourself on the mend, and sex your husband good and proper so he continues to lend you insight for this story. Hope to leave you an actual review soon!
Author's Response: I love it! Your anger is fueling me.......LOL! I actually went back to work yesterday and was forced to think of court depoistions.....blech! I will try to get the chapter finished today......for you of course *winks*
Your reviews make my day! Really! Sorry for the delay.....and my husband says hi! *with a BIG smile*
Tam
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 10
I love the James/Edward conflict!! I really like how different this story is and yet the characters are pretty canon! It is refreshing! You are doing a great job!
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 9
SO GOOD! Another great chapter! I loved how she was wearing Edwards shirt and all his coworkers cheered!!! Loved Seth: "Team Edward" comment!
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