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Reviewer: Cat28 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 13
So far i love the story and I can't wait to see where you take it next.
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 13
LOL, that song is hysterical. Great update, I approve of the sweet sexing btw ;)
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 13
Whew! That was hot! And his mother's necklace! Oh, I got really mushy at that part ^_^ With as much as her things mean to him that might as well have been an engagement ring, haha. So I take it this isn't the last we've heard of James? Grrr, I really hate that guy, haha. I loved this chapter, Tammy! Tres sweet and I can't wait for the next ^_^
Reviewer: RhiannonCullen (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 13
That was fantastic. I swear I am gonna make my man read that and get some pointers lol. Seriously that was a good chapter and I am glad that bella had such a good birthday that she enjoyed.
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 13
I'm not sure if I want a cigarette or a cold shower after that one. :) But I do know that I am so happy right now that I decided to try this fic out cause it's soo worth reading. I loved the sweetness in this chapter....Edward arranging for Bella's b-day to be special. The girl time was terrific, especially them singing Dick in a Box and then when Edward said he didn't spend money on her present and they all started giggling...I was sitting here giggling right along with them. But his actual present was sooo sweet....it being his mother's necklace just was awwwww.... And then that lemon....mmmmmmmm......I think I'm gonna talk the cold shower option, lol. I'll definitely be adding this fic to my favorites list and waiting as patienty as I can for more!
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 11
James Cavanaugh may have balls, but Bella’s were bigger.
LMAO!!!! Love it! I just had to give you props on that one! Your Bella is awesome. I've noticed in a lot of stories Bella either comes across as too needy and weak or totally bitchy...it seems like a lot of times it is hard to find a medium with her, but you've defnitely managed it. She's just the right amount of strength and weakness. I'd probably say more here, but I just so anxious to read the rest of the chapters, so I'll shut up....for now. :)
Author's Response: I hate weak snivelling Bella......I think she is stronger than that!
Reviewer: Akalei88 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 13
So good!
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 7
I just started reading and I usually reserve comments until I get to the last chapter but I just had to review this one....after all a happy husband means a happy wife, so I'm doing you both a favor, right? ;) You can definitely tell that you had some real-life expertise writing this one. There's some things that even if you tried to research them...it still wouldn't give you those emotions. I don't really have any EMT experience at all, but I am a small town police dispatcher so I can totally empathize with Sue Clearwater in this chapter (except for her being a MILF, lol). It's just those kind of calls though where you have to keep being professional, but you just want to break down and cry or scream. And I can totally empathize with Edward there at the end of that call...I know I've had calls before that I would just sit there at my desk and cry after they were done and I wasn't even really involved in any of the action of the call. I agree that it was an important chapter....a profession like EMT is the type of job that does impact you whether you realize it or not. Oh and the joking around between Seth and Edward that you based on your hubby and his partner, totally loved it. Trust me....cops are just as bad, or at least the ones I work with are. They're all the time picking on each other and trying to one-up each other...or even worse picking on their dispatchers! Anyways, I just had to chime in on this one since it struck such a chord with me. Definitely a good chapter!
Reviewer: whynot (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 13
Very nice. Sweet and hot without going overboard. Well done!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 13
Thank you for making that as erotic and most importantly, as romantic as it should've been. You gave them a wonderful moment. And by extension, us as well. Thank you.
Dare I hope for an EPOV of this? PLEASE!
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 13
Nice job, Tammy. I thought it was really good. The birthday he gave her was so sweet, and it was nice that she was so excepting of the gifts.
Reviewer: The Night (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 13
Yay! awww the whole bday thing was so cute!
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 13
Damn! Hot lemon. Just the right mix of feelings vs. good sexing! Hope there's more where that came from.
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 13
*fans self* whoo that was some hot lovin' *snickers* now I have Billy Idol playing in my head...great...(yes I know that looks familiar cause I thought it again and wrote it again from the ff.net review *grins*).
The red bull fairy was a perfect add on for pixie-bell and I love the line about bella not being nice before her coffee cause that's so true about me. *snickers*
I can't wait to read more!
Jace
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 13
great chapter. i hope that the james mess is over.
Reviewer: edwardlover32 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 13
That was a very good chapter and you should continue writing because this is amazing so far
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have been really enjoying writing this story! I am humbled by the response it has received.
Reviewer: PawntoQueen (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 13
simply awh-sum.
seemed like Edward didn't know he was Bella's first..wonder how he'll react to that..?
Author's Response: Yes, a nice little revelation for him to be sure.....stay tuned!
Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 13
Awesome birthday party and birthday night. But what is Edward's reaction going to be about being Bella's first???
Thanks again!
~Sapphire
Author's Response: Keep reading and you'll find out! LOL! Thank you so much for taking the time to review! :D
Reviewer: Usagi-chan (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 13
YAY!!! AWESOMENESS!!! YOU GET A HUGE COOKIE OF AWESOME FOR THE SMUT OF AWESOME AND FOR YOUR OVER ALL AWESOME!
Author's Response: A COOKIE!!!!! Is it a gooey chocolate chip one? I can be a messy eater and maybe Saveward would have to come lick it off me!
Thank you!
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 13
"Dick in a Box" is one of my favorite SNL skits! I love that you incorporated it! That had me laughing hysterically! You did not disappoint with the lemony goodness! That was hot!
Author's Response: The thought of Alice and Rose humming it and the boys being clueless was my favorite part to write in this chapter! Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Lauribella (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 13
I love this story!
Your character development and prestentation are great! You feel that you want to know these characters or even be them.Keep up the great work.
Kudos to your EMT hubby for his support of you AND for what he does for others.
Author's Response: Thnaks so much for your wondeful review, it is really appreciated! I'll pass the message on to Andre....he is a great husband....
Reviewer: mailbox killer (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 13
yes sweet sexing great chapter
Author's Response: Sweet sexinf is always a good thing...thank you!
Reviewer: AJRimmer (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 13
That was a great sex scene between them. So full of emotion and hottness.
Author's Response: Thank you! Thats exactly what I was hoping for!
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 13
Love the chapter. hope there is more soon.
Author's Response: I will start working towards getting the next update out mid week!
Reviewer: Mrs Jasper Hale (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 13
Really great chapter. I might I say really great Lemon.
Keep up the fantastic work.
Author's Response: Why thank you....you always worry when writing a lemon that it doesn't come off too cheesy! I am glad you enjoyed it!
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