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Reviewer: wannabebella (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 17
omg bella's pregnant already - way to go edward
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 17
Jasper's closing line was ROFL great! I loved Alec's attempt to see Bella, as well as the slut brigade! This chapter felt so relaxed, and carefree. They were really able to enjoy eachother and Bella's friends. It was nice.
Reviewer: JESSABELLA (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 17
Love It. Can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 17
Slut Brigade?? Muah hahahahahaha!! Love it. Also, Edward is a bit possesive, isn't he, with all the "mine" talk. Yup, that's kind of hot. And Bella is preggy, isn't she? I know you can't tell me, but I keep thinking she is with the little things you're mentioning. Can't wait for the drama.
Reviewer: bankeelg (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oooh, I love this story.....!
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 17
*claps loudly* This chapter was everything I was hoping for and more!!!! I loved what Bella did with the um...sex recording! And Jasper's response at the end was priceless!!!! I love the confident, sexy Bella. Edward really does bring out the best in her!
I can't wait for more!!!!
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 17
Wah! This is one of my favorite stories and I was so stoked you updated! Please please tell me you're all inspired to keep writing 'cause I want more!!
Great chapter :) Fun interaction, loving the B/E citrus-y stuff :) When will they realise she's obviously pregnant!! So excited :) :) :) Can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 17
Hey great chap lol the jasper and alice song was funny. The bella song thing was sweet and i thought the mine thing was good to =]
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 17
Woohoo! Was so excited when I got this notification in my inbox - read it before bed and it was a great way to end my day ;-) Loved the extreme PDAs in this chappy - both of them staking their claim, lol! And Jasper's last lines were just pure awesomeness, I had to re-read them several times because I was laughing so hard half-way through that I couldn't see straight!
Lookin' forward to the drama-rama :-D
Reviewer: kimmasen (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 17
OMG!!!!! This chapter is awesome. Wonderfuly written and fun to read. Jasper's last words had me rolling on the floor. Thanks for sharing and keep up the great writing.
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 17
This was a wonderful chapter!! I loved every part of it!!
Reviewer: LadyinRed (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 17
Great story!! I really enjoyed seeing Bella in her element with her friends. I thought your characterization was great. For the major drama in upcoming chapters...is Bella pregnant??
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 17
Great update!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 17
Oh tammy!! I love that song!!! Bella up there performing it and stunning the guys was fantastic!Fucking fabuloso chapter BB!! Love that Bella put Gianna and Jane in their place! The LOUD sex was ung!! Edwards gripping handshake to Alec stating that Bella was his!! GOD ! The sex is fantastic! I believe our Bella is preggers! Cannot wait for more!!
Reviewer: ekimmuh (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 17
Yay a new chapter! :)
Poor Edward getting cornered there at the car. lol. Loved how Bella placed claim on her man. ;) The loud afternoon sex was funny and it was amusing how everyone heard them although I was thinking how could you not with them screaming. lol.
It seems like Gianna isn't going to give up on Edward that easily since she was still making a play for him in the hot tub.
I hope we get more of the weekend. And I'm curious if Alec is going to try and make a play for Bella.
Great job as always. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: lovesbcmc (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 17
No major drama (unless she's prego)!!! I LOVE your characterizations and need constant fluff for them.
Reviewer: tisaveeone (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 17
you're forgiven...now bring on the drama!
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 17
Slut brigade, hahaha! With that kind of friends, who needs enemies ? Edward's and Bella's nittle afternoon "nap" should have shown loud and clear (haha) that the slut brigade is out of the game permanently!
"When the record execs hear this they are going to keep me busier than a rooster in a two story henhouse.” Hahaha, funniest quote ever!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 17
LOL Can't wait for more! :D
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 17
loved it loved it loved it, but its starting to sound alot like Bella my be pregnant. I can't wait to see what happens if that is the case, should make for a very interesting reaction from emmett and edward.
Can't wait to see what happens next on this little trip. please don't keep us waiting for too long
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 17
This was fantastic! Jasper's last line was brilliant! I'm still laughing about that! I LOVE that their little afternoon session was so loud that everyone heard them! I really can't wait to find out what you have under your sleeve for us coming up!
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 17
lmao, that was brilliant, hun! Jasper's last line has me cracking up ^_^ You know how much I love this story. Edward definitely has Bella breaking out of her shell now doesn't he ^_^ Okay, so I don't know if I mentioned it in the last review or not, but I have a theory on Bella's odd behaviors. I won't say it in case others red the reviews though. That and I could be wrong, lol.
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 17
ahhhh that chapter was great. i cant wait to see what drama is happening. i see bella pregnant though...just a hunch. LOL
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 17
Terrific chapter! Loved Bella getting to show off her Edward! And their little afternoon "nap" being heard by everyone. You definitely had an interesting array of characters and pairs in this; it was nice not seeing the same minor characters with the same groups and same relationships as always though. For me the major important characters relationships and grouping need to stay pretty close to cannon, but the change up with the lesser characters is nice. Can't wait for the drama!
Reviewer: tartar le freak (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 17
Another fun chapter and a very fitting song, I might add! Hopefully, Christmas isn't too far off in the future.
You have created great build up of the suspense of what ails Bella during the last chapter. The suspense is cleverly masked by all the fun going around at the same time. I feel as if it is the calm before a storm. Once again, my compliments on another chapter well done!
Tara
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