Okay you know what I am absolutely loving about your story? The immediate action and lack of self loathing. Yes Edward blamed himself, but Bella stopped that shit with just a sentence. This reads more like a real, honest relationship between mature people, not simpering emo's. You have action, romance, charecter depth and love.

 

I'm hoping this tale goes on and on and on. I'm left satisfied by every single chapter I read.

 

 

YES, we're spoiled rotten and we need more! Please don't starve us now! Oh this is maddening! I can't believe how fantastice this is. My heart is completely shattered for Edward and Bella. MORE!!!!!

ughhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!

i really want to hate you right now, but i most definitely can't considering how quickly you got those out, but it's driving me insane!

like honestly i'm so frustrated from that chapter ending, you have no idea. i'm so close to throwing a tantrum it's kind of scary :P

i'll be waiting for the update! ;)

Squeeeeee oh joy of happiness I love the lack of elusiveness when talking up! Yes!

We hateses James we do

I just spent the past couple hours reading this fic. It was a good few hours. Until just now. I was just plodding along happily clicking the 'next' button at the end of each chapter... and there's no next button here now. And I assure you, when I realized that I screeched "FUCK! NO!" Screeched. Evil cliffhanger is evil, I tell you. [Karma biting me in the ass for not reviewing sooner?]

That said, I can't figure out if Bella's going to lose the baby or not. Or how they're going to deal with either outcome. Or even which one I want. Curse you. I'm sitting here worrying about fictional characters at 1am on a Friday. And thoroughly enjoying it. Many props to you.

Also, chocolate covered lemons? Eww.

Is the baby ohkay???

Love it when Edward man's up like this *sigh*

No...I hope the baby is okay.  I srsly want to kick Bella's ass.  She needed to talk to Edward before jumping to conclusions.  And Edward should be mad, too.  Bella should trust him more than that.

Great chapter, I was glad to see how Edward was reacting to all of this.  And thanks for all of those updates!

 

 

Lol, I love me some southern slang like a stud loves his mare! XD

And More and more signs are pointing to a Bella pregancy... I'll be so embarrassed that i've been guessing this for so long, and it's not true hahaha

But she got signed! Wow! Yay for her! she'd better wake up soon! lol

after i finished this chapter i noticed that i was literally sitting on the edge of my chair.

really good chapter, looking forward to bpov

I just want everything to turn out right it has to! Grr...  I wish this chapter would of been longer.

Please, please, please - don't leave me hanging (Whine, Alice pout)  On the other hand, sweet Jesus, take your time because I do not want Jacob slinking back into Bella's world!  Knew the angst was coming because it just wouldn't be a good love story without it but Bella heartbroken and pregnant (cringe)  Have mercy and post the next chapter as soon as the muse hits you - pretty please with Edward on top!