ok so post it already lol

NO! I freakin wrote this really long review and accidently pressed the back space when I clicked the page!!!!! AH! O well, guess I'll have to re-write it....

WHOOOOOO SETH!!!! and Renee, too. He is officialy my 2nd fave character. But not #1 cause nobody can take Edward's spot in my heart :) Bella, seriously? Come AWN!

GO. AWAY. JACOB! You have NO right what so ever to criticize Edward. You did much, MUCH worse. Edward didn't even freakin cheat in Bella. So jacob, just shut up and crawl away with your tail between your legs. Bells will Never EVER take you back.

Which brings me to you lil missy. Bella, do you need help? Do you think Edward is the type of guy who would cheat on the woman he is in love with? Do you believe that Alice, your best friend, would betray you? NO! Jesus Chrsit, girl! What's going on in that head of yours? Your lack of faith, trust, and self esteem are not going to help you. Edward can though, but first, you gotta believe in him.

Now lil Edward or Bella Jr., you stay safe now. You hear me? Your mommy loves you and your daddy will love you. Bella, don't die yet. You've got a life to save in you and don't screw it up. The baby needs you. So girl up and be strong for the child. You and Edward will be great parents. Well, at least Edward will if you don't over react again and leave him with the baby. That wouldn't be good cause then you'd be a nervous wreck and a not-so-great mother. Yep. I actually see Edward as the better parent.

Ok. I'm done :)

~ B

ohh just when things wer getting good this sucks!! but i cant wait to read the next chapter =]

There was something SO thrilling about that quick thrust during the beginning. Oh, good lord of all things beautiful.

Where do I get me one of them Edwards?

OH MY GOD!  One, I know Bella's scared, but she's being selfish as well. Yeah, being preggo is scary and yeah she saw something that wasn't true, but hello... you can't hide forever!

I can't wait for the update!  :)

Oh noooooo. I totally thought they'd find her in this chapter and now the suspense is killing me even more. :( I'm still wary of Jacob, but maybe he's not so much of a jerk anymore.

Do the people who threaten your life realize that if they kill you, there's no more story? =/

tammy, I'm glad you didn't do any worse with Jacob. And you got to love that Seth! He is one of my favs in the books and in your story

I have a bad feeling about James...

This chapter was so intense. The poor little girl.

And the men are sooo funny together. Maaaan. I loved it. The comic relief was much-needed, so thanks! Most enjoyable!

Personally, it is SUCH a turn-on to see a man do his thing and do it well. MM mm MM MM MMM!!! The circumstances were unfortunate, but he did it so well and he was sooo calm despite his internal fears. I want to kiss him hard.

Let's get him home to Bella = ]

O.M.G. eeeee I'm glad Bella was on her way to sort things out, but I'm still on the edge of my seat anxious about what happens next.

Seth was brilliant in his directness without being overly aggressive :)

Can't wait to see how this goes next!

Well at least she seems to realize she was a dumb ass because she seriously pissed me off with the running away and not speaking to anyone.

AHHHHH!!! *dead*

I love ur story please I need to know if the baby is ok, great story

Great chapter, but you must not leave us here too long!