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Reviewer: Jojo3508 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 23
I just came upon your story. It is amazing and emotional. I couldn't stop reading. I was up all night. I can't wait to find out what was in the bag. :)
Author's Response: I am hoping to finish the next chapter tonight. I am so thrilled you are enjoying the story!
Reviewer: tahliaa hale (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 23
omg you cant leave it liek that i dont know what it is
AHHHHHH PLZ PLZ DONT TELL ME THIS STORY IS FINISHED !
I WILL CRY !!
Author's Response: Not finished yet! No worries! Don't you want to see baby Masen/Swan?
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 23
oodles of love you, girl! I took your story to work with me to read and I was totally engrossed. I'm hooked:) Keep up the wonderful work!!
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 23
glad to have you back!!!
Reviewer: daniellew (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 23
Its the ring, isnt it?
Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 23
Oh Alice, you little minx! Got your paddy-paws on the ring huh?
So how will Safeward propose? Does he cry? (yes) Does Bella say yes(yes!)
Does Bella cry? (yes again!)
Ah, the happy ending...if only real life were as sweet...Lovely, lovely
Reviewer: mrs_cullen26 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 23
OMG.... I am in love with this story. I normally don't read all human stories but this one sounded really good. I started it and I didn't stop until just now when the last chapter so far ended. You're really a very talented writer. I just can't get over how good this story is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 23
If it isn't a ring I'm going to cyber strangle someone!!!
Reviewer: vampgirl138 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 16
Let me guess.... She took the antibiotics for the ear infection and it cancelled out her BC pills??? HHHHMMMM.....
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 23
I'm so glad they talked. They need to be open and honest with each other.
Now I'm curious as to what was in the bag, though. I also was wondering when Edward planned on proposing. He has the ring, time to get it on her finger (Carlisle is never wrong!).
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 23
love it! this started is such a different place than it has ended up. did you always have this in mind? i love it!
amy
Reviewer: allira_k (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 7
wow, i just started reading this story, and i'm hooked! It's absolutely fantastic. Love your mcdreamy edward!
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 23
I sat down and read this entire story in one sitting! I am absolutely entranced with it! Please, please, please with kinkward on top, post again soon!
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 23
It seems funny to me that Edward didn't do anything wrong, like at all, and he's still the one who feels like he's in the wrong.
Author's Response: But isn't that always Edward? He likes to shoulder everyone else's baggage. That's why I wanted Bella to be the one doing the grovelling and apologizing. She was in the wrong and must face the music.
Reviewer: CharzP (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 23
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! is it the ring??!! it's the ring isn't it!!
omg!!!
Reviewer: cullenboys4ever (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 23
hey. my name is tammy too! and wat did alice give Bella???? I really want to know. I've been checking the story for updates every day since the past update. You can't believe how much I was waiting for an update. Please, please update soon!
Reviewer: ApplesForEve (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 23
oh tim's and its healing powers!
i have major love for this chapter. as much as a i heart angst and drama, the resolution is always what gets me every time! i was so so glad that edward didn't get too far before bella jumping to his defense so he could hear her true feelings, as if the song wasn't enough! jeez.
is what's in the bag really what i think it is? i'm hoping with my fingers crossed over here!!!
Reviewer: TayMo (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 23
Hahaha the meddling pixie indeed....love the story!!! Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: aunt468 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 23
please update soon. Is the thing Bella has in her hand is it the engagement ring
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 23
i cannot believe tht DOG had the nerve 2 ask Bella to go bak 2 him. i mean rlly? she is pregnant and in love w/ Edward. the fabulous, AH-mazing, perfect EDWARD! Jesus Christ!
Wht's in the box? Wht's in the box? Huh? Pleeeeeaaaassssseeeeee! I wanna kno! Pretty please w/ Edward on top? hehe! :D
~ B
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was an excellent chapter.
I enjoyed how you handled Edward's reaction everything. I also appreciated that Bella and Edward are going to work together to get through everything. They love each other. I want them to work it out. I'm also BEYOND excited about their baby!!
More soon please!!
Reviewer: debbieg (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 23
What a great Cliffhanger... What was Bella holding?? I am so glad she gave Jacob the boot... Now the story will get better with Bella and Edward... I hope that they will find there Happy every after..
You should have them work on a song together... I think they would make beautiful music together... Maybe he can have a spot with her on her new album... Thats a good thought for your story... I am really enjoying this story.. Thanks Tammy...
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 7
I do love a man in uniform...
Reviewer: book_lover224 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 23
awww that silly alice! im guessing its the ring but who knows...
Reviewer: mailbox killer (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 23
OH its a ring , that sounded so girly, great work. I wish i could leave more reviews but this site is not iphone friendly so i can only do it at home. I cant wait to she what she says
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