Ohh!! So sweet! Great chapter!

Please, continue!!

Ok, I just stumbled upon your story after being disappointed about the whole Black and White fiasco, you know not really wanting to read an uncompleted story again only to be left hanging...... I decided to scan through the first chapters and thought...Hmmmm! this sounds good. Ok, I'll admit it.... I didn't comment on the previous chapters cause I coudn't stop reading. Yes, I finished all twenty-four chapters in one night (a little insane don't you think?) wow! WoW! WOW! Love it, all of it. More Please? Soon?

Author's Response:

Welcome aboard!  I am so glad you are enjoying the story!  I have had so much fun writing this and have been stunned by the respnse it has received.

I will update soon.  Thanks again for making my day :D!

Tammy

great chapter so ahhhhhhh i cant wait to read the next update.

How incredibly sweet.  I loved possesive Edward, throwing out Jacob.  Then when he proposed, aww.  He was just perfect. 

I'm glad this isn't the end.  I'm looking forward to the rest.

Oh.  Sneaky pixie!  That was not how I imagined our medic to propose but come on!  Bella had had enough and i think timing was good too.

Alright now, I'm looking for a sexy medic who'll give me a half a million worth of necklace.  A girl can wish, right?

 

Okay Tammy, you need to tell your husband that once this is over i will personally send him my original Nintendo with my games to show my appreciation not only for letting you write this amazing story but for giving us some great insight to what amazing EMT's do :) and i'm so glad that they're engaged!!!! ahhhh! hahaha i can't wait to see what Jake's reaction to that is gonna be. hmmm.... alright. until next time!

omj like absolutley amazing seriously.

i loved it i just started reading it today all 24 chapters and i cant wait untill you write the rest!

i love jaspers little drunk sayings the are so great haha

i laughed my ass off

the crash was like omj did she survive?

i was practicaly shaking

please write more soon

xx

 

i would review anyway, but the promise of half naked dancing paramedics makes it even more tempting ;) -- great writing, as always! i liked the semi-overlap, semi-new thing going on. and it's so great to see them getting past all the crap - now i can't wait to see how the next bit goes, pregnancy and album and all :)

LOVED getting Bella's pov on evertything that happened! Loved how she knew just what Jake wanted! Such an ASS! Love how edward proposed!!Cannot wait for more!

Wonderful chapter!! I can't believe that Alice did that to Edward but I guess he needed to get kicked into gear! As always I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!

hmm. so if i tell you i enjoyed catching up the last 3 chapters, can i put in my 2 cents about this review=half naked paramedics dancing for me? because you can take it or leave it but i totally think it would be hot, even if random, to force edward into some kind of medic tradition among his station that the medics perform a half naked routine on a bar top at some frequented dive in celebration of something (you pick) just in time for bella's hospital release. would lift some heavy spirits after some heav y chapters. i'm just saying. :)

Author's Response:

How about an engagement party?  It's tradition that the guy has to get up on the bar and put on a show for his bride to be!!!!!  That could be fun.....

hye omg sucha cool ending it was soooooooo sweet the proposal even thought it was like in a hospital it was still so soooooo argh =]

Thanks so much for Bella's POV and for not making us wait on what was in the pocket of the bag!  Can't wait for more.  I can't believe Jake, what a money loving asshole.