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Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2012 10:07 PM · On: Ostentatious Part 2

I know you won't be back to this story but I wish you'd gotten out one of the POVs of the 3 way with Edward, Jasper, and Alice before it went caput.   

Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2012 07:06 PM · On: Emo Boy

Disappointing that the boys aren't willing the be together since they just want to swap girls and watch the girl on girl action.

Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2012 06:12 PM · On: Lots to Learn

I'm a sicko for enjoying this but I wish you'd also let Carlisle and Esme in on the playtime.  But I'm with Bella on not wanting to see Edward with any of the other females.  Bella with multiple guys however.......;) 

Reviewer: Momica (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2012 01:33 AM · On: Oxygen is Overrated

Oh I'm scared of Rose... what will she do. I love the cliff hanger.

Reviewer: MOMMATRI (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2011 06:21 PM · On: Ostentatious Part 2


Author's Response:

Lol, thanks for reading.  Real Life has been a bitch of mega proportions... can't promise when, just that I do promise that I WON'T LET THIS STORY GO UNFINISHED.  I'll try and get to it soon.  :)  Very glad you like it.  :) 

Reviewer: tpol (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2011 09:11 PM · On: Ostentatious Part 2


Reviewer: twisucks (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Lots to Learn

ive also just found this and it is my fav story by quite a margin on the whole fkn site! CHAPTER 9 GOGOGO!!!!


Reviewer: Lightning86 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 11:02 PM · On: Ostentatious Part 2

Are you EVER going to publish the new chapter??? PLEASE!

Author's Response:

Yes, actually, i plan to do a new one soon.  I lost my little boy in Janaury last year, and in my grief i haven't written a word since... but i am rereading this now in hopes of inspiring myself to start writing again.  Thanks for your persistance, i appreciate your enthusiasm.  xoxox :)

Reviewer: aabounds09 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Ostentatious Part 2

I can't wait to see Edward's reaction! : )

Reviewer: pennycocktail (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 06:16 AM · On: Ostentatious Part 2

Just wondering, don't you think Edward would have wanted to pop Bella's rear entry cherry first, before Emmett??  Seems like that might bother Edward.

Reviewer: pennycocktail (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 10:12 PM · On: Ostentatious Part 2


You write smut REALLY well, lookin' forward to future chapters.

Please write again soon!!


Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 06:39 AM · On: Let The Games Begin

So HOT!!!

Reviewer: Squirt (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 01:59 AM · On: Ostentatious Part 2

HOT! This is the first Twi-orgy story I've encountered. Even though I liked it, I'm having trouble with the idea of Edward being "open" to sharing Bella. Maybe it would've worked better as a dream concept?

Reviewer: aquamarine1990 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Let The Games Begin

you need to make it more clear about who is speaking

Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 07:15 AM · On: Emo Boy

That's enough sex for me tonight.

Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Let The Games Begin

So, God damn hot!!!

Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Lots to Learn


Reviewer: sparkytwilighter (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Ostentatious Part 2

Love the story!!! When is the next chapter coming out? Can't wait!! PLEASE HURRY!!!!

Reviewer: truelove4ever (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Lots to Learn

is there more? i cant tell you the number of times i have reread and reread this story haha i love it!!!

Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for your reviews.  I promised you in your last review, on Jan 19th 2010, that i would be working on chapter 9, but then a tragedy in my family meant that i haven't written a word since then.  It's now been a year, and i'm rereading this now to get the feel for it again so i can start work on a whole new chapter 9.  I know it's been a long time coming, and i hope you're still going to be interested in this story.  Thanks. :) Bec

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Ostentatious Part 2

Holy Crow I just found this story...hope you update very soon.

Reviewer: nanny t (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Lots to Learn

I just got done reading unwanted and loved it so I decided to see what this was all about. I started another story a while ago that was similar to this but never finished it, it was just to far fetched for me. I am quite excited about your story cause Esme & Cralisle are gone which makes it easier to imagine the crazy Cullen kids gettin a lil' rowdy when left alone! Let the lemons

Reviewer: edwardftw85 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Ostentatious Part 2

wow love it... hope to see what edward thinks of the scene he walked in on... update PLEASE

Reviewer: truelove4ever (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 07:33 AM · On: Lots to Learn

fav story ever, love it, so outgoing no one does this like you do, if someone else does pease tell me im obsessed and i have read and reread it sooooo many times cant wait for more xx

Author's Response:

Awww, thankyou so much.  I've started chapter 9... hopefully i will have it up in the next week or so.  There's plenty more to come! :)

Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Ostentatious Part 2

W.O.W..............that was........AMAZING!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you liked it.  I've been in a bit of a smutty mood lately, and throwing around ideas for chapter 9.  We'll see.... :)

Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Let The Games Begin

LMAO........I couldn't stop giggling through this story........very well written though

Author's Response:

LOL, you've got me curious... were you giggling at the scenario, the language used, the writing??  Just wondering. :)  Thanks for the review.  :)

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