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Reviewer: Jynxx (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 11:48 PM · On: Occam's Razor

I really like the story - very original and indepth!

Looking forward to seeing how it all works out.

Reviewer: Bled Dry (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Occam's Razor

Once again, love the chapter.  I think one of the best descriptions of Edward was here - "he was an angel made of sin."  Fantastic.  I also really liked the idea that the Gift could be passed on during the change. 

Thanks for another great chappy!

Reviewer: addictivelyhopeless (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:11 PM · On: Occam's Razor

so I just wanted to be number 1000....I love this stoory!

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:09 PM · On: Occam's Razor

I've loved this story since the very beginning. Thanks for not rushing it to a conclusion. It's absolutely beautiful!

Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Occam's Razor

bipedal limpet, blissfully sniffing her hair lol loved that description of edward.

really liked you explanation of really how 'lonely' the cullens are. never really fitting in, living on the edges kinda of thing. It really would be very sad.

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Occam's Razor

great stuff... can't wait to read more :)

Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 02:22 PM · On: Occam's Razor

I like Bella's power.
I also liked the bonding between Rose and Bella.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:55 PM · On: Occam's Razor

A++++

Reviewer: earelen (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:27 AM · On: Occam's Razor

Thanks so much for another fantastic chapter!

Reviewer: sunshinegirl (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Occam's Razor

So happy for the update! It was worth the wait!

Reviewer: AbruptlyChagrined (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Occam's Razor

This line is so incredibly awesome, it had me laughing out loud from the visual it gave me: "Edward emerged from under Bella,s shirt, looking like an angry Cockatoo, and shot Alice a sour glance."

This was an AMAZING chapter!  I don't know how you managed to encapsulate so much story and so much emotion into such a small space. This chapter took us from tenderness, to humor, to sadness, to hope...all over the place and back. The problem is, it just made me hungry for more, lol.

Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 02:41 AM · On: This Morning I am Born Again

I love the chat with the professor!

Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 02:30 AM · On: Moonlight Sonata

Awe ... I love the talk between her and the professor

 

Reviewer: EmmaBrooke (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Icarus I Have Loved

Quick question... Maybe I missed this somewhere, but who is Diana, and why does Edward keep calling Bella Diana in his thoughts?  Color me confused...

Beyond that little question, however, I'm loving this!  Glad I stumbled across it!  Thanks!



Author's Response:

In Greco-Roman mythology Diana is Goddess of the Hunt; and a virgin protectress of chastity.  In the story of Acteon and Diana, the human Acteon stumbles upon Diana bathing.  He is enchanted by her beauty, but Diana does not think so favorably of him discovering her nakedness, so she turns him into a stag, and turns his hunting dogs against him.

The metaphor here is a bit of a stretch, but I think it fits, all things considered.  :)

Reviewer: nadia2706 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 07:25 AM · On: This Morning I am Born Again

i really thought this was a finished story when i started reading it, now im done and i see its not complete, im dying to see how it ends, i love this story it gives a whole different take bella being strong and edward being the weak one, please please please finish it, please please.

 

Reviewer: fadingembers (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Moonlight Sonata

Take as long as you need. Good stories, like fine wine, need time. That said, I always look forward to this updating. And just so you know, you never disappoint.

Reviewer: quirkyquad (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Moonlight Sonata

This story is so good!

Reviewer: itunesx221 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 10:04 AM · On: Moonlight Sonata

great chapter!! update soon i cant wait aahh

Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 11:44 AM · On: Moonlight Sonata

Nice chapter - I do believe Edward has developed a sense of humor.

Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Moonlight Sonata

Awesome chapter...I wonder what the Doc has to say to Edward...

Reviewer: gagator (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Moonlight Sonata

Still reading this. Still loving this. Thsnks for the update on my birthday. It was a nice surprise :)

Reviewer: blueeyeddemon (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Moonlight Sonata

I want to savor it too, but it's kind of hard if I can't read it. Com'on, please get the next chapter out sooner. I'd forgotten this fic even existed I had to think really hard to remember where the amber neckless came from. Love it as always, great charicter deph and really well written. Don't make me wait who knows how many weeks for the next instalment, I want to know what happens next soon.

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Moonlight Sonata

I miss Jake dog.  Thanks for the Bella and Edward lovin.

Reviewer: dazzled22 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 02:54 AM · On: Moonlight Sonata

this story is still one of my favorites and i'm so glad you are continuing it.  please do finish, please!

thanks.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Moonlight Sonata

Well, this chapter made me happy, happy, happy!  I love playful Edward.  I love cocky Edward.  I love gloating Edward.  And I love humble Edward.  Could anything be better?  I just wish I could actually see Rose's face!

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