Thank you for the update! So heartwrenching...

I was so excited that you updated!  The way I read it - I thought Bella wanted Edward back - but at the end - it sounds as if - she is giving him  up?  Tell me no!  This must have a happy ending!  She loves him!  Tell me - please - that she will say she takes him back!  Please update soon!

OK OK OK really not cool leaving us hangging like that... i mean  thats just evil man, GOD PLZ UPDATE SOON IM GOING CRAZY

and i dont get what bella meant when she said "ill think of you"... does that mean she wont take him back?.....if it does ill be PISSED

PLZZ LET THEM BE TOGETHER

What am I missssssing??

I love this story.  It is such a great plot. I can't wait they are able to move on from this point.

 

or its a well.. I don't get this chapter.. I LOVED IT THOUGH!!!!!!!!!

 

Maybe I'm way off base with my comment before but hey.. um yeah.. its ur story.. it could happen.. or not.

loved this!

You know, I read what you've written here and site here, staring at my wall, unsure as to what to say that could possibly convey my admiration for it all.

Your writing is exquisite. Lyrical. Poetic. And oh so wonderful.

What transpired in this chapter is exactly right in it's flow, process, and developement.

So beautifully touching and sad. It's a long drive home, and of course, it would provide the perfect backdrop more a moving and gorgeous love scene. And even though no kisses were shared and no desire was quenched, it was still a beautiful love scene.

If this at all foreshadows what is to come, then God help us. Our hearts will explode. INDEED!

I hope theres more coming  soon, I haven't gotten a thing done all day for reading!

This is I dare say one of the BEST stories I've read on here!!  You have completely captured my imagination and my mind with this story.  I LOVE how you made Bella strong.  It's so VERY addicting!  I do hope you post more soon, I'll feel like I'm going thru a withdraw if I don't get to read more soon!!  Post ASAP!!!!  Love love love your work!!!!  :o}

Yea, you're almost caught up here on Twilighted. I can't wait for a new chapter!!!

Bloody hell.

You're such an awesome writer it's unbelievable. Otherrs try to show Bella becoming this hardened tough girl but you make it believable. You show the pain that's still there and at the same time you show how she fights to live. And have I mentioned how aesome Dr Reyerson is?

Edward was such a complete and utter bastard. I love Alice and Jasper, and to do that to them is just... ugh. I think you dealt with Jake [Black] beautifully, and Jake the dog is so wonderful! I want a dog like Jake! He is now officially my dream dog! (Aside from my Rusty, but I know there'll never be another dog like him. Rest in peace, my beloved golden retriever) Emmett is so cool too. He's always seemed like the world's coolest big brother to me.

Anyway. Your writing is so beautiful. Your descriptions, they flow like poetry. As I said, beautiful. You describe Bella's womanhood as compared to her awkward girlishness so perfectly. I love how you dealt with her clumsiness. The sexual tension brimming between them has me yearning to yell some sense into them and push them together and into a bed. All this misunderstanding and self-doubt... sigh. I love how you describe your characters, both the canon and your original characters (like Bella's mentor and her dog).

This is such a cliffie! You simply cannot leave us hanging like this! I demand an update! XP Seriously though, you and your writing rock big time.

love it.i want to know what happens. which home? cullens,forks,who?

Ah--so good!  The car scene was just right.  I love her strength and her passion.  I love how they both realized their mistakes and doing so helped set them free (or at least freer).  I'm looking forward to the whole family reunion and whatever smackdown she might have in store there too.  I envision her apologizing to them all, but especially making Jasper feel that she doesn't and never blamed him.