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Reviewer: skittles (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Crouching Bella, Hidden Edward

I'm really enjoying this story.  Please keep up the good work..

Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Dashboard Confessional

There are no words to describe how wonderful it is to see a 'Woohoo the backbone graft took!Bella, and a 'Sweet Jesus, that old boy may yet be worth shootin' self-aware!Edward".   Sweet Tweedy lord, they can grow up, and everyone GETS IT!!

Choke on that, SM!

Really, though, you paint them so well, so strong and yet so very fragle and mortal. To see Bella become frontier!Bella to find her own self worth, and for Edward to FINALLY understand that his actions render him the monster he always believed himself to be is just splended. Thanks for all this!

 

PS RE:AN at the beginning of the last chapter: Vous roche de types.

Reviewer: Chestar (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Under the Milky Way Tonight

amazing. f-ing amazing.

Reviewer: Chestar (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Interview With a Mad Scientist

loving it! so unique and excellent character building with Reyerson.

Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Dashboard Confessional

"Romeo was a drunk, and Bella was a shrew

 

Juliette, love.

Don't know if that was the treasure. But mostly, I think your graceful writing is the gift. The best and only one I want. Thank you.

 

~Mia

 



Author's Response:

Yes Yes YES!!!  You found it!  I think it's hilarious that I Freudian slipped myself - I just tapped away that part of the chapter thinking "Oh, well, that was easy" and never caught the Bella/Juliet flub until a few people over on ff.net pointed it out.  Even then I found myself saying, "Wait, what, that's . . . right?  Oh, damn."  And then I left it in for posterity.  The irony is that it reads rather smoothly either way.  Not to mention it's a pretty good indicator of how much this story has taken over my poor, overworked brain.

*HUGS*

Reviewer: wendy_beth (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Dashboard Confessional

I wish I knew!!!! I really, really enjoy this story! I sat down and read the whole thing tonight!!!! It's amazing so please keep it up! And... I understand, my mom's a teacher! Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Dashboard Confessional

Incredible! No matter how long it takes you to update, this remains my favorite story, and I'm sticking with you :)

You're even more amazing since you nurture young minds all day.

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Dashboard Confessional

MORE!!!!  I love this story.  You are in my top 10 and I have about 50 stories in my favs!!!  I can't wait for more.  Longer chapters if possible?!?!?  :o}

Reviewer: The Brunette (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Never Cry Wolf

Simply brilliant! Why this isn't in the top 10 I don't know.

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Crouching Bella, Hidden Edward

Wow...that was intense. very good writing.

Reviewer: riverspirit (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Dashboard Confessional

You are so cool. The plot, the dialogue, the way you phrase things-- it's lovely, and raw, and powerful.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: alicecullenx3 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 01:12 PM · On: This Morning I am Born Again

It is very, very well written. Although, it was a bit confusing in the beginning and I had started to wonder if it was twilight related at all. However, as I reached the end of the chapter it all cleared up. Once again, very well written, and I'm continuing on reading as I am eager to see where you're taking this.

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Acteon and Diana

You have to love Emmett. Real and funny!

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Showdown at the Cullen Corral

It was nice to see the family give him holy hell for his deeds, but with a foundation in their love for him. Great story.

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 11:59 AM · On: As I Burn for You

Her little fantasy was hot!

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Marmion

Thank you, Dr. Reyerson. 

"...and the truth shall set you free"---Jim Carrey, Liar,Liar

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 11:30 AM · On: In Your Eyes

This was an excellent chapter. You can feel Edward's pain and Carlisle's remorse for his part in his son's agony. Touche!

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Under the Milky Way Tonight

I am glad that she got her pain out against Edward.

Reviewer: alicewhite3 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Dashboard Confessional

hidden treasure? i don't know what that means

Reviewer: gordonfan74 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Dashboard Confessional


That was an absolutely beautiful chapter, exquisitely written by you.  I will say that in all honestly the ending broke my heart just a little.  However I have no doubts that you will lead me toward the ending that will mend my fracture.  Bella and Edward are both grieving, but in somewhat different ways.  Edward is desperate to move on from his dispair, and he sees the only means of doing that within Bella.  She, on the other hand, sees her only recourse as being without him and avoiding any and all opportunity for history to repeat itself and Edward devastate her yet again.  I am finding solace in their parting words and thoughts, "I'll think of you."  "So will I be." 

I just want you to know that I admire you for the work that you will be doing in your role as a student teacher.  I, as a social worker, deal daily with the stress and frustration that comes from having little to work with in trying to help people who don't have the things they need in life, and thus I empathize with what you are going through.  Your work will be hard, with probably little in the way of monetary compensation.  However, take solace in the knowledge that you are acting selflessly and trying as hard as you can to make the lives of those kids better.  Even if you don't hear it or see it directly, day to day, know that you are making a difference in a life, and in the world, if you can help one child to reach their potential.  You obviously are very articulate and creative, as exemplified by your writing of this piece, so I have no doubts that you will do great in your career.  Don't fret if you can not update as often as you used to.  I understand that while I look forward to your updates and enjoy reading what you have created, you do have a higher purpose other than making me happy with your writing.  However, do update when you can and maybe use the writing as a means to channel your stress into something helpful for you.  Take care.

Reviewer: The Brunette (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 09:41 AM · On: As I Burn for You

Wow, one of the sexiest chapters i've ever read (ch.11)!! You totally had me going there, I really thought he'd bitten her. This really is superbly written!

Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Dashboard Confessional

Wow, that was a heartwrenching chpater.  Bella's words sounded an awful lot like goodbye, but I don't think Edward is going to let her keep him out of her life now that they've found each other.  Anxiously awaiting the next update!!

Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Dashboard Confessional

this just gets better and better. i cant wait to see what happens when she sees all of the cullens again.

Reviewer: WonderMama (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Dashboard Confessional

Amazing chapter!   Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: ChulaB (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Dashboard Confessional

Yeppie you updated!! I'm so hooked on this story, bella is to awsome... ok I'm done now onto what I think... damn, I don't even know it was a good chapter and its just so bitter sweet right now so I'm gonna wait and see how it all plays out ;-)

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