I found this website about a week ago, and found your story three days ago.  I must admit that I was wary of finding a story that would captivate me as much as yours has.  I am anxious to see how this will turn out.  Frankly, I am finding it much more interesting that the book and want more.  I am especially enjoying Edward's vulnerability, and the fact that he and Bella are more like equals, it makes the story so much more compelling. 

I am hopeful that you will have time to post more of this story, I have re-read it multiple times now and would very much like to see how you envision it to end.  You truly have a gift for this writing thing, I wish this stoy was in print so I could carry it places with me instead of having to read it online!

This is the very first review I have written on this site (or any site for that matter) and I was compelled to write it to show my appreciation.  Thank you for this wonderful story. 

You write beautifully.  Such passion .. I am love with your story!

Just W O W i'm speachless. Thank you very much for sharing that with us.

 

OH MY GOD! This is AMAZING! I cant wait for more!

Your writing is really great - I appreciate a story that has such extensive vocabulary and depth!

Poetry and lyrics, music and grace. You make your words dance. How is it that you manage to form black and white characters into so much more?

 

~Mia

*cheers* Wonderful!  I loved every bit of it. :)

Wonderful! Your words are just perfect. Mine are obviously not, but much much love!

Beautiful, just beautiful. 

I loved Bella's realization of her complicity in what happened between them when Edward left.  It was spot on.

And poor, innocent Edward, who never wanted what Carlisle gave him.  Tortured soul, finally to be saved, healed by his Bella. This part made me want to weep for him, too.  

My favorite line of the chapter:  "I'm not crying, not really. It's just . . . my heart is too full."  So beautiful!

Such a great story!  I absolutely loved this update.

So utterly beautiful and heartbreaking...this story takes my breath away.

Oh you write so very beautifully - I think this is my favourite chapter to date; the descriptive language was utterly gorgeous.

Just keeps getting better :)

Oh my, I don't know how to express how much this chapter has affected me. I's so beautifully written, and you have an ability to express the depth of their emotions and love in a way that is absolutely unbelievable. I cannot comprehend how you come up with such vivid, moving imagery. Just the mention of him zipping her jacket back up caused heartwarming thoughts. 

My heart stopped when Bella told him to shower and then come to bed. Such a simple concept, but it was chock full of emotion and meaning. I absolutely adored Bella's chants of "I missed you" against his lips. I'm cheering Bella on, thankful that she's given herself the time and ability to heal before welcoming his love and promising him forever. This entire chapter was amazing, and I just want to thank you for writing something that constantly makes me sit in awe of their love. 

This story truly is in a league of its own. 

 

Who freaking cares about Jake and Dr R at this point.  I love the reunion and their shared smiles and touches.  Sigh... I love this story....