keep this story alive. It's wonderful. I'm not sure where you're heading with it, but your writing is amazing. :)

I'm so glad to see you're back!  No matter how long you take, it's always worth the wait, and you always leave us wanting more.  I can't wait to hear about Alice and Victoria and to see the progression of B & E's renewed relationship.

the fates hate Bella

AAAKKKKKK!! The queue takes tooooooo long. AAKKKKKKK!!! :)

this is my first time reviewing your work, not because I have deamed the prevous chapters unworthy of my attention but because I am hooked. therefore I am getting on my knees and begging for the first time in my life... all this for a couple of words set on paper.. or screen, or whaterver.

HOW LONG HAS IT BEEN SINCE YOU LAST POSTED AN UPDATE??!!!!!!!!

if you are trying to make me suffer you have accomplished your goal. so STOP IT NOW and get to work. i'm begging you here (well trying to beg) but what diference does it make you tok it upon yourself to write a story that captivates your audience and the audience also has it's demands: DO YOUR JOB AND GET EDWARD AND BELLA TOGETHER AGAIN.

Author's Response:

muah hah hah.  go look on the forums.  specifically for IGA.  you shall find out all you want to know there.

I gotta say I love your story!  I usually don't like ones that take off in New Moon, but I really enjoyed the situation you created.  I love how Bella sees Carlisle first instead of Edward.  I love this womanly Bella you've created I think she is awesome!

How much longer do you plan on making this story?  I can't wait for the next update!  I can't wait to see Bella reunited with the Cullens.

Hi i saw this recommended on a forum and came to take a look. I love it. Ignore the idiot below who obviously wouldn't know good writing if it jumped up and bit their arse.

On behalf of myself and i'm sure many others, please don't leave us waiting too long for an update, i'm desperate to see Bella reunited with the Cullens.

Thank you xx

This is stupid. I'm giving it a one.

What a great story.  EAgerly awaiting the next chapter.

I've read this story like 4 times now already. The first time I read it, I couldn't go to sleep: I just read it straight through until 4 AM. I can't get enough of it. I know people like you, who write with such precision and capable focus on description and detail maybe don't get the love you deserve (because you aren't focusing on smut), but I wanted you to know that I LOVE IT, and I cannot wait for the next chapter. I choked up on every sad moment. I thought it was so sweet the way he sat with her all squished in the car, and it was magical the way she slapped him with her bloody hand, and the way she fell apart on several occasions was genius. I loved the stupid dog who drives her crazy and chews up her underwear. It's like he's Jacob, but not really, and I wonder what surprises that holds for us. And I totally get why Alice couldn't see Bella, you know, because she sort of died inside or shut down. Or maybe it was the wolves, but I don't care. I f-ing love it. Please continue to write. Your words are captivating and magical, and so original.

OMG! This is the longest I've ever had to wait for an update!!! I NEED the next chapter.

Author's Response:

so do I!!!  Trust me, it's coming.  :)