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Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Shangri-La
Oooh! I want to hear the story how Alice killed Victoria! Awesome! Looking forward to the rest! :)
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Shangri-La
Congrats on finishing your student teaching:-)
There were so many lovely things in this chapter - her yawn was just so perfect! And his, "Sleep... and dream for both of us"
I loved when he told her why he was pretending to sleep - it seriously ripped my heart out and I got all misty-eyed.
Alice killed Victoria!
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Shangri-La
Yay, you still love us! ;)
Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: darkling (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Shangri-La
Yay! you haven't abandoned us! Thanks :) Loved this chapter, finally the walls are tumbling down.
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Shangri-La
great chapter. warm and fuzzy... great!
amy
Reviewer: addictivelyhopeless (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 03:24 PM · On: This Morning I am Born Again
write...write fast... write more!...I found this today read it all the way through and realized you had just posted a new chapter and now I am forced to wait?????????? NOOOOOOOOOO! THis is incredible stuff and I want MORE!!!!!!! like NOW! Keep it up!
Reviewer: letmesign (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Shangri-La
Man, I just love this story. You know what I noticed? You have very little dialogue. I always knew that there was something different about this story besides being fantastically well-written. That's what it is! There's a lot more descriptions of both their thought processes since it's in third person (which I love, BTW), and also it's like the story is being told from an outsider perspective, which almost allows you to give your own opinion on what is happening between them. i really like that a lot! Anyway, another amazing chapter, and I can't wait to hear the story about how Alice killed Victoria!
Bravo :-)
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Shangri-La
loved it but lets get bella HOME and let her meet the cullens again
loved it
write fast
Reviewer: shadesofgray (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Shangri-La
I love your words. I love the lives you've created for these characters... they're like friends to me and you've painted them well.
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Shangri-La
Wow that a chapter never saw that happen with alice way to go alice.... Lol
Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Shangri-La
Loved their intimate reunion--and I'm glad that Edward asked Bella about what happened to her after the Cullens left before the two of them went any farther. It's obvious they both still care deeply for each other, but there needed to be some serious air clearing before other things happened.
Anxious to see what happens next! Great update.
Reviewer: Telly21182 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Shangri-La
So, I copy and paste chapters in to a word document when I'm at work so I can pretend it's work and so anyway I copied and unfortunately saw the last line.... I was so happy with how the chapter ended even though I knew the Very very end. It wasn't what I expected. I love that it was Alice too.
Anyway, so worth the wait - great chapter.
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Misty Mountain Hop
I wanted to tell you that I loved this story from the start..... Great chapter :p.
Reviewer: Chestar (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Shangri-La
worth the wait. looking forward to more. absolutely beautiful story. can't wait for the return of Dr. R..... :)
Reviewer: addicttwilight2 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Shangri-La
OH MY GOD, that was so amazing!!!! I am beside myself with joy to read this. And I will read it again and again. So know that your hard work is not lost on me. I will not fly through it jsut once. I will enjoy it again and again. Your powers of description give me goosebumps. You put Dickens to shame, my friend, shame. Poor Charles Dickens is rolling over in his grave right now, saying "Ugh, why didn't I think of 'a bird's next made out of dynamite'? Why? Why? Why?!!!" I love your writing so damn much, so damn much, that it chokes me up. It makes me cry. It makes me laugh. It makes me want to be a better writer. Be a better person! I am so delightfully lost in your descriptions that they're like riding waves of emotion that take me places I've never been before, and I want to go back again and again. Thank you so so so so much. It was FLAWLESS. Utterly perfect in every way.
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Never Cry Wolf
nice
Reviewer: itunesx221 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Shangri-La
yay, thx for update
and go alice for killing victoria
i love how edward and bella are talking and getting through everything
i cant wait to see what happens when so goes back to the rest of the cullens
UPDATE SOON plz
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Shangri-La
I really like this story and hope you update soon. Please let Edward change Bella in the end!!! I love happy endings!
Reviewer: Cheyenne (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Shangri-La
Fabulous chapter, i'm so glad things are better for you and you've come back to this. I've really missed this story.
Thanks and i can't wait to read Bella's reunion with Alice.
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Shangri-La
Worth every bit of the wait! I am glad they took that time to get reacquainted.
Reviewer: KRo (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Shangri-La
Such a good story and I am so glad that you updated! Now when are we going to hear more about what the good doctor is thinking because he is entirely too perceptive!
Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Shangri-La
Thank you for comin' back!! I missed this story! GO ALICE!!! I can't wait to hear how she killed Victoria! That's gonna be good! Now, DO NOT take so long to update again!! lol ;o}
Reviewer: edward-bella70 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Shangri-La
Excellent chapter! Glad to see they're hashing this out. Can't wait for the next one. :)
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Shangri-La
I was kind of disappointed that Edward and Bella did not consummate their relationship, but their conversation was so much better. Bella's thoughts were very interesting when she awoke to the image of Edward apparently sleeping. I like the dialogue into what happened in Bella's life after the Cullens left and how the tone of the conversation and Edward's body language changed. It was awesome that Alice killed Victoria. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Randy (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Shangri-La
Wow, another beautiful chapter. You always make it worth the wait. It is going to be so painful awaiting the next chapter.
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