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Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:54 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

Just GORGEOUS writing, my Dear. Absolutely wonderful chapter. I completely loved Edward's reluctance to confront the future that awaits him at home. After now, finally, having his Bella at his side once again, after finally finding his relief from all those years of anguish and detriment, and after embracing the hope he has found in his Bella's arms, our beloved Edward is now forced to face the music he so woefully composed in his foolishness and arrogance.

I am thrilled that you are back to updating this masterpiece. Writing is a true gift you possess, and I am incredibly thankful that you have chosen to share that with us. We are truly blessed. 

Reviewer: Gina2000 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 03:26 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

Welcome back!!!  This chapter did not disappoint!  I loved it! 
Her wake-up call was just lovely.  I really enjoy the balance that Bella has between her wanting to stay in the moment forever at the cabin and then not being afraid of Rosalie anymore.

My best to you.  I look forward to more -- Especially since Trust in Advertising  ended last night.

Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:06 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

Nice to see you posting again! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 11:24 AM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

I am glad that you are continuing this story. It really shows a stronger Bella and Edward working toward redemption of their past actions, but yet still so in love with each other. I love the imagery used in this chapter and the use of T.S. Eliot. This was very well done and I look forward to what happens with this reunion.

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:30 AM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

I freakin wanted to cry at the end. I can't believe she is fianally home. I can't for the next update.

Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:39 AM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

I absolutely love your writing style. I have no adequate words to describe how much love I have for it, so I'll leave it at "love". ^_^ I stick with this story because it has substance, and it a realistic take on Bella had Eddie never returned. Fantastic!!

Reviewer: kelmikmag (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:41 AM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

Great chapter - really loved the first scene reaching home.

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:45 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

Oh, thank you so much for taking time to write again, and so very lyrically and thoughtfully. I love the whole notion of your story and look forward to reading more. I've been with you since the start!

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:31 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

This story is great! I can't wait to read more and see where the characters are heading!

Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:59 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

Thank You for another beautiful addition to this story.  There appears to really be a lot going on in Bella's Mind, heart & soul.  I for one an looking forward to how this all plays out.  Not everything needs to be roses & rainbows to have a happy ending.

Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:48 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

Ok, I'm up way too late, but once I started your story, I couldn't stop!  It was compelling, well written, and unique.  I've caught a few typos here and there, but don't really mind them much.  The only one that threw me for a loop was when you called Juliet "Bella".  It was an understandable slip up.  Can't remember which chapter it was in, sorry...Keep it up!  BTW, I'm starting my second to last class next week to receive my master's in education! 

Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:43 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

So happy to have you back. Your perfect eloquence never fails to leave me speechless after each new chapter. This chapter did feel like progress. I'm eager to see what Alice will have to say. All in all, another amazing chapter. Good luck with your thesis!

Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 07:46 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

an update. oh thank god............ *HUGS*

Reviewer: sabr101 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 07:36 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

please write more awesome story

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 07:24 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

loved it

 until next time

Reviewer: mangler (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 07:12 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

So good, thanks for the update.  Just love it.

Reviewer: enthralled (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 05:07 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

What a wonderful surprise to see you updated...I was again reminded why I amso in love with your writing...and look forward to seeing even more.

Congrats on finishing your thesis...what a feat!

Update as quickly as possible...I'll be waiting.

M

Reviewer: shadesofgray (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 04:45 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

you move me in ways that make my former motion seem static.

Reviewer: gordonfan74 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 04:41 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

I will make this review short and sweet, because I do not want to douse the perfectness of this chapter with silly words.  You have written something of beauty.  This chapter was so fluid and eloquent, it was like a magnificant piece of poetry.  Beautiful.  Thank you.  I missed you. 

Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 04:24 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

I so loved it thank you...

Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 04:17 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

Alice would always be our perfect little sister.

She and Bella would always be BFF.

Good chapter.

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 04:08 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

Wow, another wonderful chapter.  Well worth the wait.  Seeing the love and intimacy Bella and Edward share in the cabin is a wonder to behold, I almost felt a little like a peeping tom looking in through the windows, but at the same time, it was too beautiful to pull away.

Glad to see the family is finally all going to be together again, but it shall be very interesting to see where they go from here.  At least Rosalie seems like she's thawed out a little over time!

Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 04:08 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

Wow, another wonderful chapter.  Well worth the wait.  Seeing the love and intimacy Bella and Edward share in the cabin is a wonder to behold, I almost felt a little like a peeping tom looking in through the windows, but at the same time, it was too beautiful to pull away.

Glad to see the family is finally all going to be together again, but it shall be very interesting to see where they go from here.  At least Rosalie seems like she's thawed out a little over time!

Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: dazzled22 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 03:59 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

Love it love it love it.  Please hurry with an update.  I can't express how much I love this story, and your writing especially.  It's so sensuous and beautiful and amazing.

Reviewer: letmesign (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 03:18 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus

Your words are unbelievable. Never too flowery or drawn out, never overcompensating or decadent...simply lyrical and gorgeous. I love to read your chapters, and I never let one of your updates sit in my inbox unread. As disappointed as I am sometimes when it takes you awhile to update, I look forward to each new chapter, and you always make it worth the wait. This chapter really did feel like progress, and I'm dying to actually see this reunion with the Cullens play out. Hopefully, once you finish this story (how many chapters do you think you have left?), I will have time to go back and read it through. Over the time, I have forgotten some details of your tale, or confused it with others', and I hate that. I wish I could remember it pristinely. So I'm hoping to be able to do that, read it all once it's complete.

 

That being said, once again, fantastic update. I hope you can give us the next installment soon; I will be anxiously looking forward to it!

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