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Reviewer: Myheart (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Prometheus

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Reviewer: Myheart (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Prometheus

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Reviewer: enthralled (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Prometheus

Beautiful and moving and so excited that you updated.  The reunion between Alice and Bella was remarkable - and the mental image of Jasper joining them was poignant...you have a gift!

Reviewer: shadesofgray (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Prometheus

I can't breathe when I read this story.  You steal my air and replace it with beautiful words that hurt and heal.  I love it.  And need more of it.

Reviewer: earelen (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Prometheus

I almost cried. I love the reunion. I love that Rose is the one to be blunt. Great job and I'll be looking forward to more!

Reviewer: jewelsie (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Prometheus

MORE!!!

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 01:40 AM · On: Prometheus

I haven't been reading for the full year (only because I only really discovered Twilight last November), but I have loved and still love every second of this.  Happy birthday IGA. (I feel silly typing that, I used to shop at the IGA LOL)

This chapter was powerful, moving, sad, painful, full of love, trust, hurt and truth.  Thank you for taking us along with you on this amazing journey into these minds and letting us see what they do.  Please keep up the great work.

Reviewer: JeannieRoss (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 11:25 PM · On: Prometheus

I just cried a lot! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Prometheus

As I wipe away my tears, as I calm my erratic breathing, and as I come back to myself, I find that I am nearly speechless, only able to say this....this was SURE worth the wait.

BRAVO!

Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Prometheus

You wrote the homecoming so well. Not that that surprises me one bit! I can't believe it's been a whole year! Time definitely flies (especially when reading fic--lol)!

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Prometheus

That is absolutely painful, but a necessary step. All the memories of Bella and Alice happy together, they can make new ones now. Stay with them!

Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Prometheus

I just discovered your story and could not stop reading until I reached the end of this chapter.  Thank you so very much for sharing your writing gift with us.  I hope life and your Muse allow the rest of the story to come soon!

Again, Thank you!

Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Prometheus

I just discovered your story and could not stop reading until I reached the end of this chapter.  Thank you so very much for sharing your writing gift with us.  I hope life and your Muse allow the rest of the story to come soon!

Again, Thank you!

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Prometheus

Great chapter! I can't wait to read more. Keep it up!

Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Prometheus

Have I been reading things right. Does Bella have a Rogue (X-men) thing going with her hair? What about Jake? Did I miss something about him as well?

Wonder where Edward went and why?

Reviewer: KnoKnayme (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Prometheus

excellent!!!

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Prometheus

please write every week i'm forgetting a lot of stuff that happened inthis story so give a recap please other than that it was amazing but edward and bella need to get together please i trust you

well until next time

loved it amazing

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Prometheus

I'm always so thrilled to open my Favorites and see that you have updated. This is a thoughtful, lyrical, intense and moving story you have woven. Of course we all want our HEA, but trust you to create it perfectly, in its own time.

Reviewer: Gina2000 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Prometheus

What a beautiful reconciliation.  And Rose!  W O W! Who knew she would be the mender.  Thank you for letting her be the wise one for once.

No -- no shark jumping.  That means Bella will not look for Edward and find him in a piano bar and then she sings to him and someone overhears them and offers them a big contract to perform all over Europe and Alice makes their costumes, Emmett is the head of security, and Rose runs the books for them.  Nope...not this story.  :-)

Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Prometheus

By comparison, I mean! Geez, that didn't sound right....

Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Prometheus

That was by far the most beautiful, powerful and heartbreaking Bella/Cullen reunion I have ever read. Alice and Bella collapsing together was especially poignant. Nothing about this was easy or euphoric for any of them. It was real and painful and full of longing. These things NEEDED to be said between them, and you didn't back down from that.

You have no idea how trivial and just plain silly this fic makes Stephenie Meyer's work seem.

Reviewer: denisehawes (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Prometheus

it was good. but where did edward go, i hope he did not leave her again.when will there be another chapter.

Reviewer: mangler (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Prometheus

Beautifully written! My heart just crumpled reading this section...exquisite pain.  Thank you for your dedication!

Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Prometheus

I am so happy to see you are updating again. This is one of the first stories I read in the fan-fiction world and I love it! Great writing and I'm so glad you're back and that I never removed it from my favorites. Take care.

Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Prometheus

Please don't let him fuck up again! I'm glad Bella did not just run in with open arms and happy tears!!

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