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Reviewer: AnnieBella (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Pandora
All I can say is WOW.
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Pandora
I love that she had to go after him. AGAIN! I just want to be like - "wake up and smell the obvious, Edward!" But then he does! And he does it so well!!!
Love the "just be Edward" - perfect!
What did Emmett NOT say that Edward is so thankful about?
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Pandora
Wow. I feel like I just ran a mile reading this chapter! Great job.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Pandora
GOOD CHAPTER
HE NEEDS TO CHANGE HER LOL
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Pandora
Dost thou believe in half vamp babies? =3
Author's Response: They belongeth not in this story. Verily I doth reckon that Jake-Dog would snacketh upon them.
Reviewer: windchime (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Pandora
That was beautiful.
Reviewer: AnnieBella (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Of Revelations, and Resolutions
YESSSS way to go Bella hahaha. That had me seeing it visually in my mind . I could see Edward afraid for the first time and boy does he deserve it. On to the next chapter .
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Pandora
I said it before and I will say it again. You didn't disappoint at all and I look forward to more of this story.
Can't wait to find out the specific behind Emmett's comments and all.
Please update soon.
=-D
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Pandora
Very nicely done. And you have done something I never thought possible; you made me like Rose. I loved the whole break his heart and "I'll kick yoru head" and then that it would be Edwards if he hurt her. So prefectly rose.
I'm glad Emmett didn't just pick Bella up. I'm glad that as anxious as he would have been to get to Edward he chose to show that he too realises that Bella has changed. His decision to go at her pace said a lot about the fact that his view of Bella has changed. Well done.
Glad that Bella was able to save edward. Loved the hobbet cave :)
As for the consumation? Excellently done. Pure dead brilliant! Not too smutty, more natural and loving for loves sake rather than sex for sexes sake (I hope that makes sense I know what I want to say, just not finding the right words).
Sorry that I am caught up with everyone else now. I want more. I NEED more, please update this fantastic story again soon!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Prometheus
Holy shit! U made me cry! Big ugly snot ridden tears. Arrggh
This was a great chapter to read. Loved Bella and Alice together and the way that Jasper interacted with them? Pefect!
Loved the visual of Emmett tearing down the mountainside to get back home.
And loved Rose for voicing the question that had to be voiced.
Basically, I just loved this whole chapter. Sorry I'm not very eloquent.
K, I'm reading on....
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 12:03 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus
Another great chapter, you are fantastic at building up the tension.
Surprised at Rose being the first choice to meet her at the door, but somehow aptly appropriate. "Abotu fucking time". Excellent choice of words!
Can't wait for more, so glad I'm still behind....
Reviewer: Audrella (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Pandora
Thank goodness! Glad this finally happened! Can't wait for more. :-)
Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Pandora
Can't wait for the mext chapter. I think I voiced my curiosity about Jake's whereabouts in a past review. He's just going to love the fact that his human smells funny, and what are the Cullen's going to thinkwhen the 2 lovebirds reappear?
Reviewer: AnnieBella (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Never Cry Wolf
OMG OMG OMG I've cried more reading this then any other story EVER. This is WOW . I think I just found my favorite Twilighted story. You are totally the BEST . Ok now back to the story and my tears.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Intermission: Electrocution
Wow! This was an epic tale. Very vivid and visual. I'm glad Alice was the one to kill Victoria. I hope she found peace as she helped Jasper to do the same.
What a downward spiral Edward was on eh? And Bella too. To knowingly go out, allowing death to come to her because she'd had enough? My heart broke :(
Another fantastically written chapter. I'm so glad I'm behind so that I can read the next chapter....
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Pandora
I am glad that the family and Bella realized that he was hurt by this too. He had no malicious intent in lying to those he loved. It was sad to hear how he retracted into himself. Rosalie surprised me by standing up to Bella about her motives for going after him. That line was a great break in the somber tone of this chapter. Bella and Edward seemed to get their relationship back on track with their conversation in his little hovel. That eye thing was really gross.
I really enjoy this story and eagerly look forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Lenore (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Pandora
Please update again soon! I really love this story and it's been to long without an update!
Reviewer: shadesofgray (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Pandora
your words steal my breath until I'm dizzy.
Reviewer: mangler (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Pandora
Yikes is right! It's working! Thank you
Reviewer: McKenzieMac (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Pandora
Perfecto! And a lovely start to my day.
Reviewer: lynne2 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Pandora
good job. sensual without pure out smut. very good job. left my imagination just a wondering.......
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Pandora
God I love this story.
Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Pandora
Not YIKES.. More like WOW.
It was real good. Better then good. As Tony the tiger would say .. It was G R E A T :)
Reviewer: candycane323 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Pandora
It was so sweet I want to cry. You did a wonderful job! I hope the next one comes soon...? :)
Reviewer: azafrinah (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Pandora
Omg, what a poweful and amazing chapter, especially the ending. Thank you, your story is amazing!
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