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Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2013 12:49 PM · On: Ouroboros
Will there ever be any more chapters to this stoyr? Will there ever be a proper ending for it?
I have always looked forward to it, but it has been much, much longer then 6 months, so I guess there will be no more chapters and this is it. I hate to see this story left hanging without a proper ending.
caligula42, if you are still out there somewhere, I hope you want to give ths story an ending of some sort. If not, then I guess we will have to be satisfied with what we have here, an unfinished manuscript that needs a great ending.
This has been a terrific story. well written and so easy to love and read.
Here's to you coming back and finishing it if you are still around thes parts! Give it a proper ending as it so deserves!
Reviewer: Kendra (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2012 06:32 PM · On: Ouroboros
Oh, the torture of the WIP! This has been the best thing I have read in such a long time. I won't waiste the typing space telling you how your story should go. This is your masterpeice and you are doing a fabulous job with your own ideas. Keep up the phenomenal work and post regularly.
Reviewer: Kendra (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2012 03:59 PM · On: Pandora
I actually really like how you played this. I thought it was very true to your characters and very believable in the context of your story.
Reviewer: Kendra (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2012 09:50 AM · On: Never Cry Wolf
Oh my heavens, that chapter is so delicious. Such a gathering of fierce creatures. Bella's abundant strenghts are made aparent by her weaknesses. Thank you for bringing Emmet into this with such depth. Who doesn't love that guy to pieces?
Reviewer: Kendra (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2012 08:54 AM · On: Showdown at the Cullen Corral
I have got to tell you how much I am enjoying this. Your descriptions of events, emotions and situations are a joy to immerse myself in. I find myself deliberately slowing down my reading so that I can savor the flavor of each paragraph. I absolutely love Dr. Reyerson. He is as real to me as any character SM ever created.
Reviewer: Kendra (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 09:47 PM · On: Don't Wanna Be Your Monkey Wrench
This is a great story, so far. I love the description of the dog, and B's inner commentary. You give her a great voice. You write well enough that I think that even if the story will loose momentum in the future (no sign of it yet, but happiness can breed boredom sometiimes) it will still be engaging and humorous. I look foreward to this.
Reviewer: irishravenx (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 05:53 PM · On: Ouroboros
I don't suppose an "oh please oh please oh please update, I must know how this confrontation goes" would make a difference?
Reviewer: irishravenx (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 11:29 PM · On: This Morning I am Born Again
Cliffhanger of doom going on here.
Reviewer: GeezerWench (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 07:36 PM · On: Ouroboros
Oh man! Can't wait to hear what Reyerson says to Edward!
I don't think dog Jake is ever going to like Edward, so he can' live with Reyerson.
Reviewer: GeezerWench (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 08:40 AM · On: Intermission: Electrocution
Yay Alice!
Reviewer: GeezerWench (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 08:43 PM · On: Showdown at the Cullen Corral
Satisfying? Pretty much. I'm glad they beat the tar out of him.
Of course, they're all practically indestructible.
Reviewer: GeezerWench (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 08:02 PM · On: Intermission: Policy of Truth
whoa
Oh no! ?What has Reyerson guessed!?!
Reviewer: GeezerWench (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 07:36 PM · On: As I Burn for You
Holy moly! You had me going there! You'd think Bella would be too mad to let him just "take over" like that.
Then, it was a dream! He wasn't really there. (You wrote that well.)
But then, there's the bottle cap! So he WAS there! Next chapter!
Reviewer: GeezerWench (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 06:49 PM · On: Under the Milky Way Tonight
Oh my! Perhaps she spoke too much when she told Edward he had ruined her. But I'm going with it.
Good job.
Reviewer: sain84 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 05:49 PM · On: This Morning I am Born Again
Interesting start. Not sure how I feel about it yet, but I'll let you know next chapter.
Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: irishravenx (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 07:21 PM · On: Ouroboros
Looking forward to the next chapter. I'll admit that I have been looking forward to this moment between Edward and Dr. Reyerson for quite some time! :D
Reviewer: MissBings (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 01:14 PM · On: Marmion
I can't believe how much emotions this is bringing out in me.
It's amazing!
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 03:31 PM · On: Ouroboros
Thank you for sticking with this story. I love this Bella more than you know. Jake is hilarious.
Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Ouroboros
Poor Edward! I can almost feel him squirm!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Ouroboros
Thank you so much for updating your masterpiece again. When so much time passes between posts, my heart panics a bit. Sigh. What a relief to see you return.
And thank you for giving our beloved E&B such a beautiful proposal. You outdid yourself my Dear.
Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 08:23 PM · On: Occam's Razor
I like your Rosalie! You have fleshed out her character making her "more" than a cut-out paperdoll.
Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Moonlight Sonata
You have taken over a year of your time weaving this beautiful tale giving me a delightful winter day of romantic escape! Thank you for sharing your time and talents with me!
Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Pandora
Well done!
Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 05:50 PM · On: The Resurrection of Lazarus
Yeah! Alice!
Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Intermission: Electrocution
You don't disappoint!
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