Sorry I didn't read this chapter and the previous one until today.  I don't know where I was for chapter 2.  Out in left field I guess.  Anyway, I am back on track now.  Both chapters were really good.  I enjoyed both, but I think I liked the last one the best.  There was just something about Bella and Edward kissing under the bleachers that got me all worked up.  Not sure what exactly it was that I liked so much about that sequence, but I did like it alot. 

I really enjoy the soliloquy you create, especially from Bella.  Her thoughts are witty but yet have a hint of dolefullness, especially when it comes to the notion of anything more than friendship between she and Edward.  She cares for him deeply, loves him even, but she has it so engrained in her mind that he could not care for her the same way that she can not see what is right in front of her.  I am not certain what exactly she thinks of him kissing her so passionately under those bleachers.  I believe she is confused as to what it means to him.  I also believe she is afraid to ask what it means to him because she has a fear of what he will answer.  Perhaps Bella is confused about what the kiss means to her as well.   

I'm not sure how I feel about Jacob involvement.  I am on the same page with you in that I don't really like Jacob's character in the books.  However, if written just right he could prove to be a convincing antagonist.  Not sure how you could do that without having Bella "involved" with Jacob, but then again I'm not the creative mind that you are.  I'm sure whatever you decide it will be awesome.  Update again soon if you can.  I am so intrigued by the fact that Bella and Edward are going on about their usual business like they didn't swap spit on more than one occassion.  Is it just going to become something they do but don't discuss?  Surely they won't become friends with benefits.  Bella's heart is to invested for that to not rip her to shreads.  I can't wait to read more.

i LOVE this story...i didn't want this chapter to end because i knew there wouldn't be another one. i can't wait to read more! :)

and as for adding jacob...i vote yes! (i'm always up for a little edward/jacob competition--as long as edward wins...hehe)

i like your story. but please, no jacob!

thumbs up! continue on with your awesome writing : )

OMG!!!! Your writing is AMAZINGGGGG!!!!!!! Please, please, please!!! Next chapter NOW!!!!

too serious, in case you’re curious- that like my fav line right now happy holidays!!!! and right after update

once again, i love the story.

and in my opinion, the only way the adding jacob would make the story better is if LOTS of bad stuff happened to him. bella should not have any feelings for him WHATSOEVER! i hate that stupid little triangle :(

i'm thinking edward has some right hot feeling for bella! am i right? or am i right? ;)

excellent chapter!

*gasps, i love it!! *cheers for more... you just made my christmas!!

..:Taylor IS Jacob:..

I like it.

If you area going to add Jacob I think it might be a good way to get Edward talking to Bella, or push him away for a little while longer because of the whole insanly jealous thing. I don't even know why he was that jealous anyway, Edward wayy better. :)

But i do like that they aren't talking.

Merry x-mas.

Another good chapter, but like Bella, I never see the kiss coming.  I'm reading and then all fo sudden you talk about lips moving together and I have to go back and read the previous paragraph to see what I missed.  I guess it throws me off just a little bit.

As for Jacob in the story, I don't really care if he is in or not.

I don't particularly see how Jacob would fit in this story (and it's Bella's fault that Jacob's in love with her, she led him on!), but it would be interesting to see how you incorporate him. Anyways, I love the story and would definitely enjoy an update soon. :)