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Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Big World
Wouldn't you like to know what Edward is thinking?? Haha. Yeah, me too.
yeah what is he thinking.
Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Big World
Oh wow. I loved this one, but god I wish she had not barged in so we could hear Edward be like "Edward out, bitch" to Tanya.
He wants them to go to the same college. Alone. Together.
OMG HE LOVES HER
Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Tuesday
Loved it! Another cute chapter that makes me fuzzy on the inside! =)
Please please please don't make them drift apart after high school and "re-connect" years later only to realise they still love each other....GAG! I hate that stuff, for reals! Let 'em get together NOW and be blissfully happy.........please!
=)
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Big World
Hehe, fun stuff. I like the tree insident, and seeing lore of their ups and downs growing up. So curious as to Edward's thoughts, can't wait for more to be revealed later.
Reviewer: AppleDarling (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Big World
this story makes me giddy, for some reason. im smiling hardcore right now. teehee.
i like the two different Edwards you have. it makes me more curious as to what he is thinking when he is BFF!Edward and when he is Kissy!Edward
^___^
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Big World
Well, I have to admit that reading the part where she remembered the tree and knocking him out of it, was a bit boring, and hard for me to get through. :( SORRY! I don't know why, but I didn't enjoy that very much. *shrugs*
And dammit, why'd she have to go and open the door and stop Edward from answering Tanya?! *smacks her upside the head* Crazy girl! LOL
And Edward wanting her to go with him to Chicago, just the two of them is so sweet! Gotta love him. LOL
Great job, can't wait for the next one! :)
~Cat~
Reviewer: TheLambToHisLion (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Big World
lol i love how you end chapters(:
they're always so...quirky(:
as for edward applying to chicago because of the brochure, that is brilliant(:
overall: a perfect chappie(:
update soon please(:
Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Big World
OMG, keep it coming!!!!! I love this story.
Reviewer: antiaol (Anonymous) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Big World
Well, hello stranger indeed!!! Do we get to read of that encounter in the next chapter???
Reviewer: gordonfan74 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Big World
This was a really sweet chapter. I know that probably sounds lame, but I can't think of a better term to apply. I really liked everything about the chapter. The flashback of them as little children was great. Even then they were meant to be together. Edward wanting he and Bella to go to university together, without the others, was so endearing in my mind. I will admit though that I am a little bumfuzzled about the interaction between he and Taunya. Why does he continue on with her? Even if he's too afraid to confess his feelings to Bella, he doesn't have to remain with Taunya. I have several theories about the direction of this story. They are probably all way off base. A couple of them have me really worried though. I am concerned that Bella won't go to Chicago with him, and they will pull apart. That may or may not happen. Only you know the answer.
Anyway, great chapter once again. I was so happy that you updated. I hope you find time to update again soon. Take care and have a great new year.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Big World
"If I'm a butthead, then you're a poop face." Possibly the funniest line in fan fiction history! Love the pieces of their history you give us.
But why the Hale is Tanya still around? It's not that your Tanya is evil or anything it's just that she's in the way of my HEA! It's just that Edward is sending so many mixed signals and I am having trouble following them. I just want him to take a stand and let Bella know how he really feels. What did Edward say to Charlie?
Looking forward to more ... I have such a soft spot for the stories in which Edward and Bella have known one another all their lives. Great chapter btw!
Reviewer: Anne (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Big World
Another great chapter - I'm very much enjoying this and the plot seems to be thickening here - seems like Edward may be on more of the same page with Bella than she thinks. Looking forward to reading more!
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Big World
Great chapter. I could throttle Tanya! What is up with Edward? Can't wait to find out!
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Big World
Yay, good New Year's Resolution! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: kms1979 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Weak
What the hell is Edward doing? What the hell are they both doing?
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Big World
She should feel really loved that he wants to be with her!!
Reviewer: RedChevy (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Big World
Hear I am, being good with my review!!
LOVED the chapter and the little flashback story was so cute. This kind of answered one of my questions from earlier chapters about them going off to college, so thank you :-)
I really think that Edward has been in love with Bella for a long time...please tell me I'm right...LOL
Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: soxmuchxmorexx3 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Big World
i love it!
so freakin much!
its my favorite!
hahah.
i diffenitly want Edward's thoughts here!
i hpe he ends up breaking up wit Tanya because it's making Bella seem like the second woman or something.
but please udate soon!
Reviewer: Momstheteacher (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Big World
Ok, I have not reviewed this one yet because I wanted to see a bit where it was going. I really hope Bella stops settling for Edward the way he is acting. She needs to have more self respect and he needs to have to work for getting her. Things are too easy for him, with her forgiving him everything and just drooling at his every little token of attention. He is taking advantage of her and she is too clueless to realize it. I just really hope she grows up, and he mans up. If he wants her, he needs to do the right thing by her, not only going after her when no one is around while hanging with his "real" girlfriend the rest of the time. It's almost like he is ashamed of Bella. And Bella doesn't respect herself enough to want better for herself. So far I am really disliking him, and I feel like slapping her. I really hope this changes.
Reviewer: barbiedoll123 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Tuesday
edward and bella belong together more than tanya
Reviewer: Sap (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 07:07 PM · On: Weak
I need more. As in, I clicked the previous button at the end and then got really confused why it had linked backwards because I honestly thought (hoped) there was more. Awesome story!
Reviewer: justbitemeplease (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 07:59 PM · On: Weak
Awesome..Im loving it! Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: antiaol (Anonymous) · Date: December 30, 2008 04:22 PM · On: Weak
Well, my goodness... I haven't been this enthralled with a new story for quite some time.
So, I know Bella is all head over heels for her best frriend, but how is she OK with the fact that he is smoochin' all up on her, yet calls someone else his girlfriend??
Reviewer: soxmuchxmorexx3 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 10:13 AM · On: Weak
i freakin love this story!
its my all time favoreit!please update soon!
:]
Reviewer: mischeivious1 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 09:51 AM · On: Weak
Can I take a wild guess here? First of all, I love how your not only gonna follow the song -no matter how much I love it- but your going on with your own idea's also. Your writing is amazing. You have true talent. Second, I think I know why Edward is staying with Tanya and you may or may not put this in the story. But I think it's because everyine expects Edward to live up to their expectations so he has to follow the whole jock and clique thing. Third, GET TANYA OUT OF THE WAY ALREADY!!! THAT IS TECHNICALLY CHEATING ON TANYA BY MAKING OUT WITH BELLA AND NO ONE WANTS EDWARD TO BE THE BAD GUY!!!!
Otherwise, keep on writing!!!
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