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Reviewer: IloveTwilight (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 06:15 PM · On: To Have and Have Not
I totally love it. Will there be canon pairings?
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Guys and Dolls
Twists and turns...gotta love it. I'm really enjoying the story. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 07:47 PM · On: To Have and Have Not
I love this story! The engagement ring subplot was so cool - what kind of guy gives a girl a ring she'll hate unless he's such a jerk that he doesn't really know her in the first place. Moving on now to the next chapter...
Reviewer: Pastiche Pen (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Guys and Dolls
and Jake is jealous and Bella is on the road to lust
:-)
Reviewer: Pastiche Pen (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 01:20 PM · On: To Have and Have Not
okay the girliness is drawing me in like only estrogen can...
i like it... on to the next chappie.
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Guys and Dolls
Interesting idea. I await the rest!
Reviewer: aprilbaby19 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Guys and Dolls
Another great chapter. Totally hate James, So you did a great job with his character :) Cant wait for edward to come on the scene. I really feel for Bella and cant wait for her to find her happiness.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll be sending you the next chapter later on today, and some descriptions of how it's going to go. :)
Reviewer: aprilbaby19 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 08:25 PM · On: To Have and Have Not
Loved the first, It was different than most of the fan fics that i have read..was kind of suprised that mike was the fiance and not Jake..it was a nice change from the norm. Im going to read the 2nd chapter now and am sure i will like that one just as much.
Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 09:16 PM · On: Guys and Dolls
OK for a second there I thought you were going to have Bella and James get together. However I would understand if he looks anything like Cam Gigandet. Now I'm just waiting for Edward to enter the picture.
Author's Response: Haha! Well of course James looks like Cam--completely drool-worthy. But you won't have to wait long! Edward makes an appearance in the next chapter. ;)
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 07:56 PM · On: Guys and Dolls
Its understandable that she isn't trying to get into a relationship, but it really isn't cool of James to make out with some other girl in front of the one he is supposed to be at the bar with.
Author's Response: Right? I wonder what he's playing at...hmmm..guess we'll find out soon enough. LOL
Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 04:00 PM · On: To Have and Have Not
Great so far... and it's different, I like that.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Bumblebee (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 02:03 PM · On: Guys and Dolls
Nice! I thought there was more when I first started reading it and got all dissapointed when there wasn't! lol. update?
Author's Response: Lol! Glad you like it. I've got the first five chapters written, so I should be updating again within the next few days. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 12:28 PM · On: To Have and Have Not
And my guess is that with fun, she means she will met the true love fo her life, named, ahem, lets say....edward, and than make u wirte los of more chaps ?? LOL. 1st review, thats chick ! ;DD LOL
Author's Response: LOL...hmmm...we shall see! :) Thanks for reading!
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