Excellent!  I smiled the whole time.

I think I gained 15 pounds reading that one... Delicious!!!!

Author's Response:

Lol! I've never heard that phrasing before... I like it ;)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Excellent! That gives me a shitload load of holiday spirit and it's August lol

Author's Response:

Well, there's always Christmas in July, right... you're a month late, rather than four months early. How does that sound to you, eh? XD

thanks for reading and reviewing, dearie!

lovely.it's how i would love to spent my holiday!!what's the name of the song that edward sings to her?

Author's Response:

It's called "She's Got a Way" by Billy Joel... Such a sweet song ^.^

Thanks for checking this one out! It's one of my favorites, and a reason I'm proud of my penname, what with muffin buttering going on ;)

Ok.. this story is AMAZING!! (and I thought the muffins were yummy, but Edward.... *drool*)
I love Ailce and her family.. It really reminds me of my crazy family, and your Renee is the Renee I always imagined!!! *lol*

Author's Response:

Well, hello there! I'm glad you enjoyed the muffins and Edward. Edward enjoyed YOU, I'm sure ;)

I always wished I had a crazy family like Alice, and i loved talking to my coauthor for this story, trying to get the family right (but I take full credit for Mrs Brandon and Alice's dog!!! XD)

And Renee... She's so spastic. I wouldn't have her any other way... thanks for reading sweetheart! If you're bored, I just did a mini continuation to this story at the top of my head in a review reply right before yours... Lol!

I have read this before and your other stories. I wish you would continue with this one. Or if you did I missed it.

Christmas Spirit is that what the kids are calling it now? Too funny.

Author's Response:

Lol, howdy! Welcome to this story as well! XD

I have no plans as fo right now to continue this oneshot... first off: it was co-written with another author, and we live in VERY different timezones, so it was hard enough coordinating just THIS oenshot to write, what with our time constraints.

second: a continuation of this would have no plot! Bella and Edward's lives are easy after this story ended, so there wouldn't be anything interesting to write about them!

If it helps, let me make up a vague story right now, and you can feel free to add in all the details you'd like with your imagination :D

Hmm... after breakfats, Bella proclaimed the need of a shower before they headed over to the club for Edward's gig, and to save the environment via water conservation, Edward joined her under the spray, nearly causing her a heart attack with his sudden presence. She, of course, didn't mind him joining her, but was just surprised. Once inside, they made use of the shampoo in creative ways until Edward's crappy water heater gave out, a cold spray suddenly drilling into their skin. they left the shower in a fit of giggles, and he dried off her body as best as he could... with his tongue. Bella gladly returned the favor.

At the club, Bella nearly came when Edward stepped up to the piano to play, remembering their glorious time on his private one at home the night before, and Edward smirked at her, recognizing the cause of her delicious blush. They both knew that they couldn't survive the whole evening without touching each other, but were still aware that Edward had to play wholesome music for the room full of holiday patrons, so they kept it in as long as possible, attacking each other in the back seat of Edward' volvo that he had parked in a nearby alley during his dinner break, at which point in time they were interrupted by someone knocking on the car window. Bella hurriedly covered herself up, Edward doing the same, only looking up when the person knocked again.

"Fornicatign in pulic is against the law in the state of New York," the police officer said in a brisk, professional manner (I'm assuming it is, though I don't know for certain...).

Bella and Edward spent the rest of their christmas day in the slammer, waitign for Alice to bail them out. Edward didn't get another gig at The Flaming Torch, considering his abrupt disappearance with no warning, and as that was his main source of income, he was left virtually unemployed. One would think this was a bad thing in normal circumstances, but not for our favorite couple. Edward's lack of income caused him to be evicted from his apartment, coincidentally on the same day that Alice decided to move in with jasper, leaving space to spare at Bella's place, where Edward moved in and they lived happily ever after.

How does that sound from the top of my head? XD

Hmmmm Very nice, Thanks for the Lemon!!! ;)

Author's Response:

You're welcome for the Lemon, hon! We had way too much fun giving it to you :P

That was HOT!! Getting into the Holiday Spirit on a top of a piano...is there anything better?? LOL

Loved it!

Author's Response:

Hahaha, YES! Because pianos are sexy as hell, haven't you noticed? Damn... Now I want to get myself some Holiday spirit... :P

Thans for taking the time out to read this so much!!!!! ^.^

lol butter your muffin! i like that you provided a back story. you have to keep writing this story. pleeease?  

happy holidays!

xoxo

Author's Response:

hahaha, yes. Buttering Bella's muffin. I love making innuendos out of bakes goods, but then again, who doesn't? lol... As of now I do not intend to continue this story. It would feel like I'm leaving out half the puzzle if I didn't work with my co-author to continue it, and I don't have the luxury of enough spare time to work with someone else right now to collaborate and hash out details. Eventually you mmight see a continuation of this, but not for a wee bit.

Thanks for taking the time out to read this, and I wish you lots and lots of Holida Spirit!

Wow!  Loved it!

Author's Response:

Thank you dearie! I'm so glad that you actually went through the effort of reading this long-ass shit. We hope the hour of you life you just used was considered a success :P

Gah...  I'll never be able to look at a piano again without blushing...

Great story!  The kind of experience we all wish we could have :D

Author's Response:

psh! I haven't benn able to look at a piano without blushing for a decade... when I saw Pretty Woman the first time that I realized that *whispers* (sex!) was had on the piano... I just didn't get that when I saw the movie in my younger years hahaha

And yes! I want to experience Holiday Spirit like THAT. That would make my... lifetime. lol

This is my favorite holiday lemon. I liked how it wasn't just about two people ravishing people right of the bat! Very nicely done. And of course, I have a new inside joke about "Holiday Spirit". I swear, I won't be able to stop from snickering when someone asks me to get into it. So THANK YOUUUU! I also think, that since these characters were unique and interesting, that you should make a sequel type thing. A lemon, over New Years!!! Yay! I really think you should continue it in some way, shape or form. :) Since you did such an awesome job with the first.! :))))))

Author's Response:

Oh yay. I wrote something that qualifies as a favorite! XD and yes! I love calling sex "Holiday Spirit" now... I keep making jokes about it, but people don't get it, mamking it all the more entertaining for me hahaha

As of right now, I don't have any plans to make a sequel to this. I'm extremely swamped with other projects as it is, but considering how well received this is, it's now being taken into consideration. So I'm thinking on it. Maybe. lol.

Thanks for your encouragement!

Nice! Not too much smut, there was background to it as well.

Author's Response:

Indeed there was! We didn't want to just get right into the down and dirty without knowing our characters properly... Plus the fact that we had 10,000 words to words with, and even the two of us together couldn't make a ten thousand word lemon! hahaha