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Reviewer: werucchi (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter Six

This was so good chapter! Can't wait for more! : D

Reviewer: werucchi (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter Six

This was so good chapter! Can't wait for more! : D

Reviewer: FrostedCullen (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter Six

Open mouth. Insert both feet.

Edward's is in for it now!.

I enjoy the complexity of your story, despite it's content. It is a difficult subject matter to approach and you do it so well.

I desperatley want Edward to lie and say that he saw it in James' mind but at the same time I already know he won't. Edward wouldn't lie to Bella is his life depended on it.

update again soon. xx


Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter Six

Uh oh spaghetti oh....yeah, I'm feeling immature atm, so sue me! Freaking amazing chapter, love it!

Reviewer: Cordelia (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Chapter Six

Ahh! This is great! :-) Great way to leave us in suspense!


Thanks for posting!

Reviewer: rebmatmak (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 02:36 AM · On: Chapter Six

That was great!!!  Update again soon!

Reviewer: msashlyjudd8 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 02:25 AM · On: Chapter Six

uh oh.... I see trouble in the future. I cant wait for the next chapter. Great job.

Reviewer: Unfable (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 01:51 AM · On: Chapter Six

Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! come on o.o -dies-

Reviewer: Sophz456 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 01:11 AM · On: Chapter Six

Oops. Big mistake, Edward.

I really like this story - I think James was sadistic enough to have done that to Bella if given the opportunity, and Edward and Bella... What can I say? I love the pair of them together.

Can't wait for the next update =]

Reviewer: Cordelia (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Chapter Five

Great story!

Reviewer: Unfable (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 02:27 AM · On: Chapter Five

Please add more to this xD I want to know his reaction to the tape and what not.

Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Chapter Five

Are you going to update soon??  Your story is so good, I just can't wait for more!!!!

Author's Response:

I'll try to have an update posted within a week. I'm sorry for the delay. Just got caught up with other things.  Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter Five

I love your story!  I actually read it awhile ago but was having trouble logging onto the site to review.  So I gave up for a few weeks and now I am back and able to review!!  Anyway, I love your story so much!  I am dying for an update....not that you don't have a life to attend to outside of Twilighted!!!

Reviewer: BreeCullen (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter Five

This is really good. I like your writing style and your story flows smoothly. You do a very good job of staying true to the characters. I'll be checking back for more.

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter Five

wel I'm glad she realises he still loves her, but I feel her pain.  She is worried about why he won't kiss her right?

And it took Newton to make edward declare his love?  WTG Newton!


Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Chapter Five

Loved it!  Update again soon!

Reviewer: twilightlover96 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter Five

Your story is very well written

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Chapter Five

This story-while heartbreaking-was really well written and amazing. 

So James didn't succeed in the actual rape...but he got close? 


More please. 

Reviewer: Alyxandria (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter Five

Whew! These 2 have a LOT to work through. Great chapter!


Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter Five

I love this story! I want to know about when Edward watched the video though!

Author's Response:

Yeah, I'll definitely flush that out more in the next chapter!

Reviewer: bella mcc (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter Five

Yeah for Edward!! Put that Mike Newton and his dirty thoughts in his place!!

I love this story. Please update soon!!

Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Chapter Five

Oooh, good chapter. Boys do think some pretty messed up things. I wonder when Bella finds out Edward watched the video...

Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter Four

yikes! such a heavy topic... sadness all around.

Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter Three

Very powerful & moving chapter.

Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter Two

Crazy protective Edward... makes the world better :)

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