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Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
So I decided to pick this up while waiting for The List and man am I glad I did --- proceeding to the next chapter!
Reviewer: JeannieRoss (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Love that added Bella power. And cannot wait for yet another action packed chapter!
Reviewer: annaciambellina (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
Hi! My name's Anna, I'm an italian stdent and I really love your stories, I love every single line you write!
I just wanted to tell you I' really am a fan of yours! can't wait for your next chapter.
Bacio! (=kiss)
Anna
Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
Excellent!!
Reviewer: Bella19011918 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
wow. i never caught that dream on page 68. it never registered. mybe its because i read it to fast idk but its kinda cool. Cant wait for the next chapter. I hope its soon.
Reviewer: celticstorm08 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Great update!
Reviewer: twilighter_87 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
Loved this chapter with the northern lights... We have them in the winter here in Norway, and it is truly beautiful... :) When it's really big, it truly is amazing to watch it, with the colours, bur also the life and movements in it....
By the way, I really like ur story...I always wondered of what could have happended if she got turned by Laurent or Victoria...and I like ur version of it :)
Reviewer: Tasty (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
I LOVED this chapter!! It was giant and chock full of details and utterly captivating. It was genius to go into the precog dreams from the books, and I have read no other fanfic so far that gets into that. I really enjoy the evolving control of power you are placing in Bella. You could tell after their earlier brawl that Tanya was going to do something to get back at Bella, so now we know what that is. I am so glad that summer is affording you some time to write this thing, because it's a superb adventure and I truly enjoy the characters and plot.
Reviewer: Dariana_ronia (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
WOW!!! I like the idea that she can have such visions about the future! I also noticed strange dreams from SM's books and believed that something will be in the BD... but...:) So, it's really awesome that Bella has this ability!
I wonder, if she is able to hear thoughts like Ed and see future practically like Alice, will she able, for example, to feel emotions like Jasper? It seems to me that she kinda steals others gifts!XDDDD
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Phew - Alice to the rescue! I'm glad that Edward was being a dolt too. Helps them both to realize how destructive they're being by keeping things secret.
I like how you worked her precog dreams into her powers, I think this is the first time I've seen that in fic.
Tanya-what a bitch.
Yea for getting engaged!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
Mad love for Bella taking down Tanya! Poor Charlie:-(
Why in the world is Bella keeping this secret from Edward? Did she not learn anything after Phoenix and James? Besides, Victoria didn't say anything about coming alone. What a doof.
Reviewer: Realname24 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
This is a great story so far. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Reviewer: sabr101 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE U STOP AT A GOOD PART!
Reviewer: appleberryhale (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
excellent chapter !! I'm so glad that tanya finally got what was coming for her and backed off, well done eleazar ;] . And edward's proposal and the ending were especially sweet, i loved it. Can't wait for the next update!
love, appleberry
Reviewer: lea2009 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
omg!! im so addicted to this!!! i love how you made tanya a bitch and that she was still so into edward and that her and victoria were in on it together!!! very good plot!!!
im like bouncing up and down right now cause im dying to know what will happen next!!! this is sooo good!!! please continue soon!! as i might just burst!!! loved it!
Reviewer: Lee Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Hi Laura, it's been ages since I reviewed an ep, sorry about that. I HAVE been reading, though. I can tell it's going to be a good day when I see a new chapter for one of your stories :)
What both Bella and Edward did is SO their characters. Stupid pair, always trying so DAMN hard to protect one another, they forget to share and communicate, they forget to be a team. I love how your story keeps in canon with that fact, but how they are trying to grow and change their over-protective ways. Jake rules, sorry, he does. Even in the series, he is always the straight-forward-no-bullshit-honest-to-the-bone guy, even when I don't always agree with him, he always makes sense.
You truly have taken over these characters, you understand them and make them come alive. Maybe even better than in the series, seriously. They just seem much more three-dimensional in your hands. I don't mean disrespect to SM, I just mean to compliment you and your talent.
Thank you, girl!
Reviewer: Gypsylady (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
I've really been enjoying this! I've read the series several times and never noticed the precognitive dreams. Very perceptive!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
EW! Way creepy threat letter!
And it's sick that I think it works, here. I know.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings
So, things are...well?
That's just so Carlisle. ;-)
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Aw, gotta feel sorry for Emmett! Very nice scene.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
I had to give it up for Jacob. He really did try. Poor guy.
Hope you're having fun with your novel! :)
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Wonderful< I love your story please write more!!!!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
This is awesome! I read ALL the chapters in 1 sitting! Alas, it is now 4:00 in the morning & I'm gonna be hatin' life when it's time to get up...but oh so worth it!! :-)
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
YES!!!
Reviewer: xFeathersxx (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
I totally didn't catch the precognitive dreams, and I've read Twilight more times than I can count!
This story is so awesome! My daily dose of fluffy angsty goodness. :D
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