Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: poppylove (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
I knew Alice would know!!! How could she not??? :)
Reviewer: poppylove (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
HMMMMM. Wow-- so far so good. :) How is Jacob going to take care of new born Bella. Will Alice see Bellas transformation??? I cant wait to see what will happen.
Reviewer: mayzieprides (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
This story is great. I like the concept of Bella changing this way. It is also very well written. Can't wait to see what happens with Victoria.
Reviewer: Souillet (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings
Awesome!
Reviewer: dmokrasi (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
I LOVE that you played with the precognition idea. It always bugged me that a bigger deal wasn't made of it in the books, too. I figured SM was playing it off as her perceptiveness, but some elements couldn't be picked up subconsciously. It's great to be able to read the exploration of those powers.
Reviewer: bunbun81 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
awesome awesome awesome. i really should review all of them but i quickly hit next and read the next chapter. i have to say there were at least 3 times i would stop reading and fume over the characters actions. but then i would i come back and you took care of what was annoying me about them. i really loved it. like last night i was reading up to the part where bella and edward first made love. i went to bed mad thinking...how could they do that! its too soon! i don't believe edward. yes he loves her but come on! then when he asked her to marry her so soon...i was like UGH!!! its like watching a scary movie and yelling at the screen "DON'T GO IN THERE!!! HE'S BEHIND THE DOOR!!!" ugh...this is a really good story. i'm so loving it. i know you are a busy woman but get to it...you can't just start and not finish!
Reviewer: Tasha083 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
i want more i cant stop reading your mind for this is completly brillent please please write more soon thankyou
Reviewer: gkk (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
I'm so glad you're updating again. I love the triangle you've created with Tanya. It's just so intensely satisfying to have Bella stand up for herself against her, and have her publicly claim Edward. I'm looking forward to the scene when she puts that ring on.
Can't review much more than this. I'm too anxious to read the next chapter! LOL
Reviewer: LostCullen5 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Bring on the storm!! Great story, I just devoured all these chapters in one sitting and must say that I am really enjoying this story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us humble readers. Keep up the great work and know that I eagerly await the next update. :o)
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
I never noticed the future telling dreams -- I'll have to go reread. Very exciting, fulfilling chapter!
Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Well I must admit that I very pleasantly suprised with how this story is playing out. I find that I have spent A LOT of time on the edge of my seat. I am very much looking forward to the continuation of this story. It is exciting to read about these characters and see them from a totally different perspective. I am anxious for the rest of the story, however I am patient. Good things take time.
Reviewer: silviababy (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
i loved it brova
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
Hate Tanya!! Love you!!! Pocketing the letter was typical Bella.
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
Fantastic! I love the two major plot twists - Bella being turned by Laurant and Victoria's path of revenge. They write a whole new fabulous book. Thanks so much for your work!!!
Reviewer: divagils (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
I love that you incorporated Bella's dreams into this! I've always wondered why SM didn't do something with that!
This is great! Can't wait to read what you have in store!!
Reviewer: mineFanatics (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
lalalalalaaaaaaaa
Reviewer: mineFanatics (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
SUCKAAAAAAAAAAA!
BELLA DOESN'T KNOW JACOB'S A WEREWOLF SO SHE WOULDN'T HAVE GIVEN INFORMATION AWAY THAT QUICKLY! :D
Reviewer: mineFanatics (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
SUCKAAAAAAAAAAA!
BELLA DOESN'T KNOW JACOB'S A WEREWOLF SO SHE WOULDN'T HAVE GIVEN INFORMATION AWAY THAT QUICKLY! :D
Reviewer: mineFanatics (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
insert review
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 11: Alaska
I'm so grateful for the chance to keep hearing these characters. You do them great justice!
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings
Yummy!
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
Really enjoyed the family meeting and her anger, frustration and hesitance at Edward and the family. It had to be addressed. Great story!
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 8: Reunions, Part III
It's so realistic that you continued the animosity between Edward and Jake. It's great reading and accurate to how they would really behave. I hate when other authors attempt for them to become friends, even for Bella's sake. Come on! They are madly in love with the same woman and mortal enemies. Nothing would have Edward call Jacob a friend or "son" as in BD. Love your additions!
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 8: Reunions, Part III
My favorite line: "The boyishness was gone, having been replaced by the fierceness of the man intent on saving his own life. " How poignant!
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
So sweet - *sigh*
Submit a Review
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
| 
