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Reviewer: Wil_80 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
I love this chapter,but i feel bad for jake!He had to leave *tears* but i really enjoyed this chapter!!!
Reviewer: NicciCullen (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Your such an amazing writter. Everything is plotted and planned so well.I can't wait to read moreeee(:
Reviewer: abw2442 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Hey! just wanted to say this was a great chapter! I love seeing Bella with all these powers! You're doing a great job!
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
So glad she got pissed at him! Those were the slaps heard round the world! I absolutely love Edward, but I always thought SM's Bella gave in too quickly.
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Loving every minute of it so far. :)
Reviewer: starla_1979 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
Oh goodness! Even though I have throughly enjoyed reading The List, my curiosity was peaked even more with While You Were Gone! I think you are an amazing writer and I can wait to see how both of your stories end. It didn't surprise me that you were a history professor. Only a true academic and a lover of literature could write as well as you do. Keep it up, you are doing great
Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Come on, lets hurry up and kill Vic!!
Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Sorry I haven't reviewed till now. I've been so intrigued by your story my hand automatically hit the next button. Awesome story...better words of describing this are failing me sorry.
Reviewer: rfreeman16 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
time for another chapter! PLEASE!
Reviewer: bornem (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
fantastic story! please update!
Reviewer: sminnick (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
I love this story please update soon.
Reviewer: pattinson_robertlover14 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
this is thee best stories i have read by yhu its amazing they should really make these into books
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Reviewer: kristis35 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
You are awesome!!!! I love how you have expanded the Twilight series into new directions. I can't stop reading! Keep it up. I can't wait for the next installments in your stories.
Reviewer: Rossandra1 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
I like it so far..But where is Charlie? Surely you have to come up with an excuse to give him..Its been 2 days no? I'm looking forward to reading more :)
Reviewer: rgb (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Hi Laura, my name is Rose and I have to tell you that I was told about you by a friend who had read "The List". It was my first experience with the "Twilighted " site and I was blown away. I read the entire story and then submitted a great review but I think I messed up and you didn't get it. You are on My favorite list though and my comments there are" Great Writer"!!!
I loved the detail amd the intensity in the story and thought that is was amazing, but I have to tell you that I have just completed this " While you were gone"and it is absolutely the best that I have read to date! I could not stop reading and that is why I couldn't take the time to review after each chapter!!! I apologise for that, however the intensity in you writing would not allow me to stop reading. Even now as I am writing this review I have tears in my eyes and I can't wait for the next installment. You have a great gift and thank you so much for sharing.
Best wishes Rosie B P.S Rating 10 ++++++
best wish
Author's Response: Hi Rose! Thanks for the review--glad you are enjoying my stories so much! More soon!
Reviewer: LucyLu (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
What a great chapter, no story! I love the twist on Bella's powers. It completely makes since, especially the ability to mimic. And yes, I thought she would have powers similar to Alice as well. You've done a wonderful job with this story. I just found it today and have added it to my favorites. I am also very glad to read that you have been working on a novel and would love for you to share updates regarding your progress. Based on your writing here, I would buy it as I'm sure your other fans would as well!
Thank you for taking the time to share your story!
Reviewer: HiediCoe (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
I love it!!!! Can't wait for more!!!!!!! Soon?
Reviewer: Edward_love (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
All I can say is WOW!!!
Reviewer: Edward_love (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Re: Chapter 6- I really like where this is going. I just can not stop reading it. What will Bella do next?
Reviewer: Edward_love (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
This is an interesting take on New Moon. Very original. You have sucked me in. (No pun intended) Thankyou Ms. Cullen!!
Reviewer: SunnyKitten (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Another wonderful chapter! I'm glad you brought up Bella'sprecognition... I also expected it to come up after her change. I'm excited to see where thiss story will go!
Reviewer: rgb (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
Awesome!!! can't wait to read on.
Reviewer: SunnyKitten (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings
This chapter was wonderful!
Reviewer: Twilightie (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
this is a really awesome story!!
I hate tanya I knew she would have done something like that. I hope she does something wrong so they can kill her!!
Reviewer: Abbabble (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
Wow. Passionate reunion scene here--this is the big plea/begging session I'd been waiting for in NM that barely came. Nicely done.
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