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Reviewer: VivianDelongpaw (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings
Oh that was good! Thank you.
Reviewer: VivianDelongpaw (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
Really great. Thank you.
Reviewer: VivianDelongpaw (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Lovely. Your writing gets more and more compelling. Please don't stop.
Reviewer: ambersky (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
liked that chapter
i never knew of those lights in denali before looks really beautiful thnx for posting the pictures :)
Reviewer: msnettie (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
I have always noticed the same thing, she had visions in her dreams but nothing was ever said or done about them. except to help her with figuring stuff out as a human, I have always wondered why it was never noticed before, I have read alot of fanfics and have never had anyone notice the visions before as part of her gift, I am glad you put it in the story, lets me know I was not the only one eho noticed!! love the story, cant wait for an update!!!
Reviewer: eje (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
again, in several ways better than the original
Reviewer: eje (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
great
loved the pics. great touch
you know, responses to reviews are probably appreciated as much as you appreciate the reviews!
Reviewer: eje (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 11: Alaska
Hello Ms Laura,
Obviously I think your writing is among the best on the site; because, here I am (again) reading your stories.
And other than that word again a couple of chapters back, this story is very enjoyable. I'm the one that cringes at the harsher profanity . . . not necessarily ALL profanity . . . (Please, I don't want to sound harsh...don't be offended.) And, by the way, your editors missed that you don't run fingers "threw" your hair, but rather "through" your hair . . . :) . . . .
Anyway, to get to my REAL point, I'm enjoying this story very much. I think you may be taking it in a better direction than SM did the original.
I hope my review pleases, and does not offend.
Reviewer: Victoria Maundrell (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
YOU'VE DONE IT AGAIN... CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
Reviewer: KrazieKathryn (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
I Liked It Plz Write More Plz!!!
Reviewer: Victoria Maundrell (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 12: Us
LOOOOVEED IT!
Reviewer: Victoria Maundrell (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE READING YOUR WORK. BIG FAN AS ALWAYS YOU ROCK! ALSO COULD YOU ADVISE THE TITLE OF YOUR PUBLISHED WORK. HEY, A TRUE FAN MUST READ IT ALL. LOL ONCE AGAIN AS ALWAYS YOU ROCK !
VENUS- AKA- VICTORIA MAUNDRELL
Reviewer: my_edward_87 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
loved it spent all daying reading this... cant wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: crazyfanmom (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
THAT is how SM should have written the confrontation! So glad you gave Bella some balls!
Reviewer: trishachristine (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
will there be any updates soon??!!!!! we need more!!
Reviewer: de24601 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
Very very romantic and exciting... Thank you!
Reviewer: de24601 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Love Bella's gifts and her forgiveness of Edward (I couldn't stay mad at him either!). Love the story (all your stories!) Looking forward to updates.
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
I feel like I've been on a rollercoster! I love the direction this is heading! I sincerely hope that the girls (Bella and Rosalie) get to do some major ripping and tearing to Victoria! Please don't keep us waiting too long for an update :)
Ooh! And I hope you're planning on taking us thru the wedding and some honeymoon with our favorite couple! ;)
And is there a farewell to Charlie in the future somewhere? (Wish I was a pre-cog now!!)
Nothing but LOVE!
Reviewer: de24601 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
Sob!!! I'm loving this! I'm glad Edward had to fight for her and that she was so mad/scared.
Reviewer: de24601 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
I love reading "changes" and this is a great one! You know fanfic is good when it makes you cry... you've captured Edward's voice especially well. Thank you and looking forward to more.
Reviewer: cathprice (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Hello, I love this story. I have read loads of stories on this website but this is the first review I am sending. I cant wait to read the next chapter! P.S I also am loving The List!
Reviewer: Saturday-Savior (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
ive read a lot of fics that have laurent bite bella and this is def. the best one congrats on the job well done....REAL VAMPIRES SPARKLE!!!
Reviewer: AkilahD (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Wow- this story has me completely hooked! I can't wait for the next chapter...
Reviewer: AkilahD (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
Yay! Gotta love a hot reunion kiss... :D
Reviewer: AkilahD (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
WOW... I loved SM's awakening, but that was so much more intense! I love this chapter!!!
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