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Reviewer: Ruka (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
>.< Are you ever gonna update this story? GAH!!! It's a really great story, so I would REALLY REALLY like to get to the next chapter :'(
Reviewer: lollipoppup (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
I am prett new here so I do not know if there is a way to tell if the stories are still active to know if you will still be reading reviews from this....but, I just had to write to thank you for such a lovely proposal. I had always felt a little let down by Edward's proposal in Eclipse. just seemed a little anticlimatic, wouldve thought he to be capable of so much more than that. This was just as I imagined he wouldve gone about it. Kinda sad that she is hesitant, I understand that is her, but boy that wouldve been great had she fully accepted & the passions that followed. I am quickly falling in love with your work. I just read a short story you wrote & The List over the weekend. Great work!!!!! Me personally I like FF that you feel could actually fit in with the stories & teh charachters are true, yet going places the original series didnt. You satisfy all of that perfectly for me. Keep up the good work!
Alicia
Author's Response: Hi Alicia--thanks for the review and glad you're enjoying. I will be finishing this story after I finisht The List. I'm back to work now after a long hiatus for health-related reasons, so it's been too much trying to juggle everything all at once. Stay tuned though! Laura
Reviewer: _Tamy23 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
MORE MORE MOREEE!!!!
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Those kids still have some growing up to do, but I like how they seem to recognise they both are at fault here over the letter-gate issue. Tanya is a PEEEEEEEEERRRRFECT villan, I'm not sure I'd trust her even now. The proposal scene in front of the family brought a tear to my eyes! Dammit Edward you are very smmmooth.
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
oh nooooo Bella, its the whole Ballet Studio scenario all over again....won't you ever learn?Next
Reviewer: Miss Maree C (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
This is amazing. Really. You've done a wonderful job!
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
wow love the pics. I'd love to see that too...
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 12: Us
"When you stood in front of me to...defend me...from Tanya. God Bella...." He lowered his forehead against mine.
"What?"
"Bella, that was...it was so sexy."
I LOVVVVE jealous Bella and lusty naked Tanya! and I adore Bella 'rescuing' poor old Edward....he's right its very sexy! Bit surprised no teasing from Emmett ..yet?!
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings
very hawt.
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
you, as always, have such exciting syories, noone wants to pause to review...they just want to read the next chapter!!
Reviewer: airekel (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Hi, I'm really enjoying your story. I haven't reviewed before, because when I find a story that has a lot of chapters already written, and I like it, I have to read all the way through before I can stop and review. Sorry about that.
I see that you haven't posted a new chapter since 11 June, and I'm hoping you will finish this story. I love the premise, and have often wished a good writer would take the idea and tell the story, so thank you.
I love the date! It was perfect. Watching the Northern Lights! How romantic! And I *love* reading from Edward's POV. You write him well. You write all of them well, but I am partial to reading from Edward's POV. I think that might be because in the books all we get is Bella's POV. I really hope Stephenie finishes 'Midnight Sun', so we can hear from Edward.
And *really* I hope you finish this story. I also hope that, before you are done, besides the demise of Victoria, you will give us a wedding and at least a wedding night. :)
Thanks again for this story. I look forward to more chapters, and will review when I have read more.
Now I'm going to go read 'The List'. :)
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
just found this story - i love the list - keep up the great work!
Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 11: Alaska
fantabulous!!
Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings
now i just knew the author of The List would produce a passionate reunion, and wow did you not disappoint..
Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
awww poor bella, i can just see them sat in the sunset looking out over everything she's sayig goodbye too..
Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 8: Reunions, Part III
excellent reunion. I love stories where newborn bella confounds the cullens with her control..
Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
now THERE's the reunion we wanted in New Moon. Proper anger followed by passion!
Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
awwww, that almost had me in tears... Gorgeous..
Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
Come on Edward get yourself back to Forks, you got some serious making up to do..
Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 4: Revelations
Great ending to the chapter, this is really good, enjoying it immensely!
Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
ooooooh,that was super clever, making Jake the reaosn why the visions came in and out like that. Run, guys, run, save Jake..
Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
This certainly an intriguing premise for a story, and as well written as ever! Poor Jake, and poor Bella having to go through it without the rest of them..
Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
The List is one of my favourite fanfics ever so I had to come check out your other story. Crertainly going to be a different type of story from the looks of it ;-) but the quality of your writing shines through..
Reviewer: VivianDelongpaw (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
Lovely chapter. So visual. Thank you.
Reviewer: Spaccas (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
I like the way you've made so many of the Twilight twist and turns much more dramatic...and badass! Can't wait to read the rest.
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