Reviewer: itsyblue (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Excellent! Love this as much as The List! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: renda1girl (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Wow, I thought I lost this story I couldn't remember the name or even where I read it.
It has been driving me crazy!!!! Then I was checking to see if "The List" had been updated and looked at your profile. You are in my author favs so that's why I didn't add the story. Love your writing. I am very into alternate storylines following Edward's departure. I hope you will complete this story once you finish "The List".
Reviewer: julesames (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
Ooh! I love the idea of this so much! I can't wait to continue reading it. :)
Reviewer: kaiyla (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Just finished reading this story.. It was very interesting! I really enjoyed reading every bit of it and can't wait for the rest. I read The List and found this story by you as well and figured since I liked the List so much I'd give this story a shot as well.
I really like the fact that Bella can tap into others powers when she expands her shield. That's very creative!
Great Job! I will look forward to more chapters!
Reviewer: RavenFlyer (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
<3 love <3
just cant wait for more
write soon!!!
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Definatly getting better. I cant wait for the rest.. Blessings to wards your writing and life.
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
oooo ok I forgive you for the no Tanya Bella fight... Victoria and Bella.." grabs a chair and her popcorn to watch the show" WOOHOO GO TEAM BELLA..lmao
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
God those pics u have up are beautiful.. If you have a free minute, could you send me the pictures to Haven1211@yahoo.com. I grew up in Wi and miss seeing them as I live in the Twin Cities now. Thanks so much
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Oh c'mon... Tanya needs a good whupping.. u should have let Bella take her down a peg or 12.. "sigh": oh well..lol
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
Definatly getting interesting
Reviewer: justagirl1237 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
is there going to be more to this story? I'm just checking because it's been a really long time since updated and I want to know if I should just remove from my list. Thanks!
Author's Response: I will return to writing this story next week! Needed to finish my other story, The List, first! Thanks!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
I have read the entire story so far and, wow! I love your writing style. I only have one person in favorite authors and it's you! Thank you for your stories and UPDATE SOON....PLEASE!!!!!!!
Reviewer: 17KCullen (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
I conpletely missed her dreasm as being precogs. Good catch. Sadly, I have read Twilight msny number of times and did not pick up on it :-(
Excellent story!
Reviewer: nmm267 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
I never really noticed that Bella had future-telling dreams. I've only read the series once and I never made that connection. I like how you've developed her powers; the way you describe her shield makes much more sense to me than the way SM did. I can't wait to read the next chapter - I'm sure Victoria's going to get hers!
Reviewer: 17KCullen (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 4: Revelations
i love the idea of this. Bella supported by Edward's family...
Reviewer: nmm267 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
wow! after reading The List i wanted to read your other works, and you don't disappoint! This story is so different from The List, but I still love it! I'm dying to know what happens; I'm only on chapter 5, but it looks like I won't be getting very much done today because I'm not going to be able to stop reading anytime soon!
Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
Heartbreakingly beautiful.
Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
Heartbreakingly beautiful.
Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
This story is beautiful.
Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Holy sh... this was an Alice-Resident-Evil moment! Aweeesooome! ;)
Reviewer: 5rockstars (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
this story is so good! you are a very talented author!
Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
i like it, i's great, xx
Reviewer: Victoria Maundrell (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Wahhhhhh! Fine, but only because YOU ROCK!!!! I wait. LOL
Thanks for entertaining us with your fanfiction stories. YOu know I loovee it!
Reviewer: alyssalove (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
I just read straight through this whole fan-fic in one night! I love The List, and now am loving this fic, as well! Keep it up, you are awesome!!
Can't wait for more :)
Reviewer: twime (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
Wow!
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