Reviewer: Lilpxidst (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
Welcome back!!!! You have been missed, but you've returned w/ a vengeance. This was a fantastic chapter...favorite part was Alice giving Carlisle a kiss on the cheek...Nice touch!!!!
Emmett hugs & Edward kisses,
Lili
Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
So glad this story is back and that we finally have a resolution to the Victoria thing. Can't wait to see what else you have in store in the last 1-2 chapters!
Reviewer: Tasty (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
Ooohhh, I am soooo elated that you decided to pick this up and finish it!! I had missed it terribly, and I loved seeing Bella's powers in action in the fight sequence. Congrats on the award nods, and you'll have my vote for sure!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
Oh wow that fight was EPIC! It went well and not so well. My heart breaks that they still lost Irina. I am thrilled that Rose and Jake were able to take out the garbage. *breaths a sigh of relief* It is over...loss will be felt but the start of a new day looms before them...
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
I've always been very intrigued by Bella's future-telling dreams in the series. The first time I read the books, I was sure that precognition would somehow end up a part of Bella's powers, given the number of times in the four books she had dreams that ended up coming true.
I also picked up on this and was also surprised this wasn't one of her powers, so when I read this in your tale, it brought a huge smile to my face. AND by the way, I'm especially loving this story - for your writing and imagination - not to mention those special moments between Bella and Edward are quite arousing! Awesome!
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
The fight was awesome. It contained the right mixture of violence and action. I loved how Bella utilized her shield to turn the newborns' gifts against them. Their powers were kind of cool. I like that Tanya, in the end, participated with Alice and Bella in disposing the last of the stunned newborn army. Awesome girl power! Alice's little kiss on Carlisle's cheek before leaping off him was sweet. Edward stopping Bella from exacting her revenge against Victoria by showing her what Carlisle said to him about revenge when killing James was a great use of canon. It was great then that Rose brought Victoria to Jake and the Pack, so they could dispose of her.
Thanks for updating! I'm so happy that you are finishing this tale.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 8: Reunions, Part III
excellent..
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
its about time Bella lets edward know exactly what he did to her. I wish she would've told him in Sms books...so thank you
Reviewer: JeannieRoss (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
So happy your back that was worth the wait!
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
great action! loved it.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
I love Bella...I wish Jacob couldve stayed....he deserved to stay with them.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
I love it....brilliant......
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 4: Revelations
I love the fact that you have everyone involved. I love Jacob's compassion for bella.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
great chapter
great writting
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
Whoa! Just when I think it's well and truly dead, resurrection! Seriously though, welcome back. I'm so glad to see you finishing this up. Bella's gift is pretty nifty. I'm not sure if I could have stopped from killing Victoria, and what does that say about Rosalie and her attackers? Nevertheless, I'm glad she didn't do it.
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Dragonflygrl (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
Ive really missed this story. Worth the wait! I love vampire Bella :)
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
i was really scared for a minute there haha.... but i'm really glad that everythign is going to be ok!
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
it was very good
can't wait for next chapter
ps don't really remember what happened in the beginning of this story but rememeber the last chapters you summarized
well until next time
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
"We had fought for our lives, our loves. And we had won." Woo Hoo!!!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
Great fight scene.
Reviewer: Katara97 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
beautiful.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
I adore alice...she is my favorite cullen....well thought out
Reviewer: Twerd4Life1609 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
omg yay! I loved it truth be told this would make an excellent ending here exept mabe a epilouge of Edward and Bella's wedding anyways I love it all the way this chapter was amazing keep writing you have an awesome talent
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
I love the fact that its jacob with her...Jacob who never runs from her or leaves her...
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
i've always thought about this as an option. What if Edward couldn't stop someone else from changing Bella....haha edward the joke is on you.
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