Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
Great chapter. I'm glad the Cullens, wolves and Denalis managed to defeat Victoria. I like the power you gave Bella. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: jesyka_haha (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
So glad to see an update for this story. I am in love with everything that you write because you do it so well. I liked this story and almost peed myself when I saw the update in my inbox. This was a great story and Bella in this story is one of my faves. She has always been very independent, but even in the face of such tragedy, she keeps pushing to be who she really is. Tanya is more often than not painted in a not so nice way. I am glad that she tried to redeem herself in this story. Even if she did some messed up stuff. Thank you for posting this and I look forward to reading anything else that you share with us.
I voted for your book. I was asked to do so also from some friends in the Twilight world. We got your back girl. Good luck!
Author's Response: That's awesome--thanks for the review and the vote!
Reviewer: killeen (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
I'm so glad you brought this story back! I had to skim back through things but you're one of my very faves and thanks for not forgetting about this one. :)
Reviewer: SpaCullen (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
this chapter was totally worth the long wait (just don't let it happen again, lol)! great job!
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
Yay! I missed this story!
Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
Great chapter! And loved how Bella got to save the day! GO YOU!
Reviewer: de24601 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
Worth the wait!! Very action packed. Thanks!
Reviewer: mrspipkin (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
OMG it was sooo awesome, thanks for catching this story up!!
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
Glad your back! Love Bellas powers, and glad Victoria is gone!
Reviewer: LucyLu (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
Missed you! I went back and re-read the entire story, it is sooooo good! I love everything about this storyline, and that is pretty rare. You do have a great vampire Bella - her turning and abilities are completely believable and very well thought through and developed. I also really love the proposal, the wait and finally the acceptance, very well done. Tanya's deception is a great twist! I hope Bella will eventually get to say good-bye to Charlie.
Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: scrider (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
Glad to see an update! I hope the last chapters shows them just being them. I am glad they are finally going to be happy. Thanks for writing!
Sarah
Reviewer: msnettie (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
awsome fight!!! I love a good vampire fight! yours was awsome! great chapter and welcome back!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
I have really missed this story. I was thrilled to find that you had updated it. Finally, Edward and Bella can simply enjoy being together. Wonderful update. I loved the way Bella was able to freeze everybody!
Reviewer: shecater (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
I have been waiting for this story to update and was so happy to see it was!!!!!!! You write so well that, once you start you can't stop reading . I think you are by far one of the best fanfic writers out there!!!!! You make the characters really come to life!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: fadingembers (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
Welcome back!
Reviewer: airekel (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
Thanks for another great chapter. It was worth the wait. :) I loved that Bella was able to be a huge part of winning against Victoria and her minions.
I hope before you end this story, you will give us a wedding, and a picture for Bella to put in her locket.
And just so you know, I voted for this story in the categories it was listed in. :) I'm eager to see how you end this piece, but not eager for this story to be over. Hopefully, you will provide another adventure for Edward and Bella once you have finished this one. :)
(BTW -- I *loved* 'The List'!)
Reviewer: bismarckfairy (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
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Very exciting. Thanks for updating.
Reviewer: sandy810 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
OMG WOW I LOVED IT I REALLY HOPE U UPDATE SOON ITZ A REALLY GOOD STORY=)
Reviewer: herdnerd (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
Thank you so much for the update!!! this story is awesome!!!!
hernerd
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
love it! i loved the list too!!!!!!
Reviewer: littlemonstercpb (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
I was so excited for an update on this that I almost didn't believe it. I decided to go back and start from the beginning and it was even better the second time through! I can't wait for the rest. And I completely agree about bella's powers. Now I'm second-guessing about breaking dawn.
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
yay! an update. love it!! can't wait to read the rest.
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
I'm glad you updated. I really enjoy this story and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: rfreeman16 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: insanecellist (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
I try to avoid WIPs cause I'm always left hangin on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update but this story just sucked me in and I can't wait for the rest of it. It was totally unique. Love the whole thing with tanya and her getting hurt was just icing on the cake. So happy that victoria's gone and none of the wolves or cullens got hurt. and I totally didn't put it together until I read the last chapter that bella did have precog dreams in the books. I've only read the series once and maybe that's why it didn't hit me when I was reading them but when I read your explanation of her precog dreams I was like OHHHHH yeah...that did happen in the book but they never mention it when she's a vampire. I like that you took her already existing powers and completely expanded on them. The mimicing thing was a wicked cool idea. This is an awesome story and I can't wait for more.
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