So good.  Thanks for finishing!  Now, I want to go back and read it again since it's been a while. You're a truly talented writer and I am grateful that you share your talent with us.

Greenie

Okay, so now that Edward has gotten in ass on a plane I feel he has deserved his proper name back. But he is on probation.

Carlisle's POV was perfect. He is so hard to get right, even I don't exactly know what "right" is, but whatever you did, you've nailed it.

I also love how you continue to incorporate Jasper's talent into the dynamics. When he told Carlisle that he only picked up feelings of protectiveness over Bella from Jacob, it just gave the whole thing so much more context and depth into the story, especially in regards to the animosity vampires and werewolves have for each other.

And for comic relief, maybe I am strange, but I greatly enjoy Jacob and Emmett bickering.

Amazing!  I'm so sad the story is ending but I really enjoyed this!  Thank yuo and have a happy thanksgiving :) 

 

-- Jenn --

Whoooo! Great ending! And I am sooo impressed with you. Two very large stories done woithin a few months of each other and both of them are great. Very, very good job. Kudos to you :)

great ending !!! =]

Wow!  I'm so glad you went where you did with this chapter!  I, too, wondered what would have happened with Bella's precog dreams.  As usual, you are amazing.

Stunning!  The pictures you provided are exactly what I saw in my mind's eye.  And I am overwhelmed at your natural talent!  I love reading every word you spin, it's truly a pleasure. 

I love, love, love this chapter!  Oh, Tanya...what are we going to do with you?

Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. It has been one of my favorites since I started reading fanfiction. You're a beautiful and brilliant writer. This ending was beautiful and perfect and I started to get a little choaked up! 

I hope you'll write something new soon. I have enjoyed your writing immensly! =) 

 

I had to go back and reread this from the beginning, and honestly it brings a tear to my eye to see this end.  It's been a lovely ride, I absolutely adore your thought processes with Bella and vampBella.  I had noticed the dreams too in the books and was disappointed as well when it lead to nothing later on.  I also loved how your Bella expressed her hurt with Edward instead of just automatically forgiving Edward.  Thanks so much for writing! 

That was amazing. Too short in my opinion, ;-)

Thanks for a great story.   I thought it was a great way to have Bella changed, and how everyone reacted to it.