Even tho i am a complete team edward, loving the jacob scene :) nice job so far..

What a rollercoaster of drama! Fantastic, addictive, and all absorbing. LOVE IT!

I am always in awe of how well you write, what a force of creative imagination. WOW!

I have nothing but positive praise to lavish on you! It is evident that you are a professional writer, and I would love to know what novel you have already published so I could read more of your wonderful work. Obviously, you have stayed true to the integrity and core of the characters that SM created. You have a very natural way with language and dialogue between the characters. I love what you've done with expanding on Bella's abilities, and it seems more accurate somehow, given that so many of her dreams were of a precognitive nature. So, big, huge claps to you. You rock my socks, and I can't wait to read the final chapters, and anything else you write.have written. Cheers!

I'm sorry for not reviewing on a chapter before this! What can I say, I got sucked in and forgot all else besides bella and edward.

Love, love, love this story. I definitely wondered what would happen if Laurent had bitten her and I'm so glad you were wondering, too! I also like how you are writing in more than just B&E's POV. It works really well for this story. Alright.. onto the next chapter. What am I going to do when I've read all your fanficition? Go back and read it again, I suppose!

smb.
xo

Simply perfect!! Thank you, once again, for your writing prowess!  

 

 

yeah i must say at first i was pissed i wanted her to kick edwards ass then run to jake open a window for the smell and make him howl but i will keep reading maybe there is still hope

...genius interpretation of Bella's special power(s).  Enjoyed it immensely.

This was a great story.  I really enjoyed reading it.  I especially liked how you explored Bella's power, and how she could use others powers with her shield.  Also especially how you connected her precognition power.  I saw this too in the books and thought for sure that somehow this would be an enhanced power of hers and I was surprised that it wasn't.  So thanks so much for using this in your story, I loved how you did this.

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story.  It has been emotional and romantic.  Those Reunion chapters are brilliant and they continue to impact me.  Excellent story.  I hope you continue to write!!!

I just had to go back and read some more of your stories after reading back to us. this chapter is simply so achingly beautiful! thank you

this story was so amazing! i completely fell in love with The List a few months back and was so sad when it ended. i came across this story a couple days ago when i was looking through your other stories. i couldn't stop reading it! i was staying up late reading it, reading it while in class, reading it instead of doing hw, etc. lol. i read it in under 3 days. i LOVED it! you are a wonderful writer and i love how well you capture our beloved twilight characters and their personalities. the whole dream scene with Charlie made me bawl. it was so sweet and sad at the same time. thank you so much for staring your stories on here! <3

Author's Response:

Really glad you enjoyed--thanks for giving it a try!

hot hot hot!!!

I am completely immersed in Laura Cullen literature - reading three stories by you at the moment. I am tortured by wanting to devour them all at once, but know I have to go slow and really take each one in seperately.

As for this story, and this chapter! OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!!! It is soo good! Incredibly hot with such explicit descriptions! I want to list my favourite lines, but it would be too many. Just trust me, your writing is astounding.

Okay, how wrong is this? -I kind of want them to break up again, just to have another reunion scene! H-O-T! But we need the drama, and you work a geniune storyline seemlessly, making everything richer.