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Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
GO JAKE!!!
Reviewer: moewerts (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 17: Together, Forever
wow! amazing, very well written! just right
Reviewer: moewerts (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings
that was smokin hot! i love this bella... not taking anyones shit!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
I'm eager to read more.
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
I'm glad Bella woke up early.
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
Lovely writing.
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 4: Revelations
Nice cliffie.
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
Ooohhh.....APOV, yay! I was wondering if you were going to include that.
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
Poor Bella
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
Dramatic first chapter.
Reviewer: loulouau (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 4: Revelations
You read the last line and you gasp...........what more can you want in a good/great story.
Reviewer: TeaWithLemon (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
I know you've finished this story and I don't even know if you will still get this review, but I can't not review! THis is great. I don't know what else to say given that it's finished, except that I'm torn btw begging you to write more stories and begging you not to, so that we can all go out and read your original work someday.
Author's Response: I definitely still read my reviews! So glad you liked and thanks for your nice comments!
Reviewer: sillyvamp (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 17: Together, Forever
I really enjoyed this story! I found this one after reading The List.
I especially liked the dream of Charlie. That made me cry.
I look forward to more of your writting. :)
Reviewer: joy1177 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
It was ok I guess (I did not like the outcome)
Reviewer: joy1177 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
I love Jacob and I hope you make sure JAKE gets Bella! Love it love it.
Author's Response: Sorry! I am not a Jake fan! Thanks for giving it a try and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Lui1313 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 17: Together, Forever
First of all - thank you for this great piece of work. I write stories too, so I know how much time you spend on this. It's a great fan fiction with everything that's needed in it. There is love, friendship, drama, hope, pain and every element of life. I especially adore the way you describe feelings. I also liked the new powers that were your ideas. I think it's one of the best alternative endings of New Moon (better than book itself). You thought about issues that Bella and Edward had and in your story they really worked on them. You have really good style of writing and I would love to read more of your works.
Hugs and lot of love,
Lui :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words!
Reviewer: Glam (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 17: Together, Forever
Awwww! That was so, so, so awesome!! Thanks for writing such a great story. I looooove your spin on the tale- so much! I read through this in a few hours and was enrapt the whole time!!
Great work!
Reviewer: Alby Mangroves (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Yes, I completely agree! I really thought that her ability would be more on the precognitive side. I was really disappointed that SM did nothing to explore this; it almost seemed like it was a random insertion into the books with no real thought about the implications. I also thought that Edward's inability to hear her would have something to do with it, like her brain out of synch with everyone else, like it was a step in the future or something, so he couldn't hear her 'now'. Does that even make sense? I really like your story, and I loved that Eddie copped a couple to the face, he had those coming! And I really hoped that it would take her a while to get past the hurt; she seemed to just brush it off when he came back. The stupid passage in the books where she 'thinks she's dreaming and she'll wake up and he'll be gone'.. God, it was so annoying! As if. This is a grounded, down-to-earth girl. She would definitely take everything he said with several grains of salt, but her behavious in the book madeher sound like she was 12. I really like your approach much better!
Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 17: Together, Forever
Great great story your an amzing writer dont know how and why i did not fond it sooner. Your in my favorite authors list for goodness sakes. Best of Christmas to you and your family hope the kinderdartener is having a ball. Its the best time for them really.
Reviewer: JessEdholm (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 17: Together, Forever
Sooooo good. I can't even express how much I enjoyed this story. I am also grateful that I got to read it straight thru! No waiting for updates! Squeeee!! You are a phenomenal writer. Best of luck in your writing career. I anxiously await the sequels!
Jessica
Reviewer: JessEdholm (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
I also thought bella would be able to see the future after her change. All those prophetic dreams! I love what you are doing with the story. So well done. That tanya has to pay. She hasnt paid enough for me so far.
Reviewer: JessEdholm (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
Oh dear...this is just like Twilight. Was that your inspiration? James lured her away. Now victoria is trying to.
Reviewer: JessEdholm (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
That chapter was magic. Truly. The proposal. Probably the most beautiful I have read by Edward anywhere. Stephanie really dropped the ball there didnt she...Bella swan I will love you forever, every single day of forever" was what she wrote. Don't quote me there...I'm going on memory here. It pales in comparison to yours. Especially since he spoke of his mother and all. I'm bracing myself for the drama. I sure hope theres some serious Jake jealousy on edwards part. Does he know how close they really got while he was gone???
Reviewer: JessEdholm (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
I am loving every socond of this and I sure hope she can read minds too somehow.
Reviewer: JessEdholm (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 11: Alaska
Honestly, you threw me for such a loop when this chapter started. !0 days had gone buy since they arrived in Denali and they weren't spending all their time together? It seemed such a leap from the previous chapter. then I saw tanya enter the picture and I can see where you were going with it. I look forward for another confrontation so bella and "mark her territory" so to speak. *rubs hand together* I can't wait for that!
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