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Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
I think I really like this fic. I like Jake in this story and although I don't think he would have let her live in the books I think this is why this is a good AU, because not only how Bella would react, how Jacob would react differ from the book. I really wanna see where this is headed. I'm hoping that Bella is like the Bella from BD thouugh, because then maybe one day she could go back and visit Charlie. I feel so bad for him, more so than anyone else. Come back with more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for your thoughtful review. These are all some of the questions/issues that got me interested in this premise in the first place. Hang in there for chapter 3--it's been submitted!
Reviewer: Kiri_sora (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
great story
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
What an interesting plot! Cannot wait to read what else is coming.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
WOW! You've gotta update this. This might be a new favorite.
Author's Response: Very encouraging review! Thanks!
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
Interesting! Nice opening. Would like to see where's it's going to go!
Reviewer: Ophelia (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
WOOHOO this is awesome...well, obviously it is painful right now, but you should keep it going!
Reviewer: singingstacy (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
wow... so good!! i can't wait for the next update!!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
EVIL Cliffhanger.
but I'll accept it...as long as you update SOON. We're talking really soon.
Holy. Monkeys. I can't believe that she's changing and Edward isn't there? I hope that she still skips the newborn bloodcraze and that Jake doesn't kill her. She has to find him (him being Edward). She just has to.
=[ Please update quickly. PLEASE!
Author's Response: I'm going to take "evil" as a compliment! Thanks for the encouragement and ideas. Chapter 3 has been submitted!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
I did a quick read because my son is tearing apart my bathroom right now the only way a 2 year old can, but I'm so intrigued! I can't wait to see where you take this!
Author's Response: Thanks! Stay tuned--chapter three has been submitted!
Reviewer: Lizzyliz (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
It's a really good story so far. I can't wait to see where you take it
Reviewer: Powered by 23 Kicks (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
Looking forward to where the story goes...
Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: TheEdwardEmmett (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
Good work, I think I will like this one.
Author's Response: Thanks! And, hang in there everyone; chapter two was submitted about two weeks ago...I'm sure it's just caught in the holiday backlog!
Reviewer: Kiri_sora (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
Very nice I like this story a lot
Reviewer: thedramabean (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
Wow, Jake saves her? I mean, I knew that he would, but I figured that being a vampire was worse than death for him. But I AM glad he saved her, and I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update asap!
Author's Response: You get to see more of his struggle in the next chapter. My thinking here was that he was completely caught off guard and in the heat of the moment, this is his reaction.
Reviewer: antilleon (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
I really liked it, very well written. I have added it to my favorites list so I look forward to an update.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Chapter two has been submitted and will be up in a few days!
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: December 24, 2008 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
Great start, I'm interested to see where it goes!
Reviewer: McKenzieMac (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
Uh Oh
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
I love this so far. I can't wait to read how this all unfolds. Great, great job. Please don't abandon it!
Author's Response: Chapter 2 is in the submission pipeline!
Reviewer: Lenzi (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
so far, so good. :)
Reviewer: chicabonita51983 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
Interesting... I like the idea. And as much as Jacob sometimes annoys me, I can see him being this protective of Bella.
Continue soon, please.
Reviewer: MrsC (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
It was a good first chapter. I've read other stories with a similar premise so I am intrigue to find out how yours will play out. When will she meet the cullens? Will she remember them? Did alive see her get bit and think she died? Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: All good questions--stay tuned!
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