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Reviewer: Nadya (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
wow this story is awesome, can't wait for the next update :D
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
Oooohh! I would think that Alice would tell Edward what she saw at this point. I mean, is she see Bella as a vampire, then why wouldn't Edward want to know. He would feel responsible for Bella, that he did this to her by leaving her unguarded. I would hope that he would want to take care of her and that Bella would feel that he was there only out of guilt or obligation. This was a great chapter! I can't wait to read what happens next!
Author's Response: Don't worry--Edward will be making his first appearance...soon!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
Poor Alice, she's always pressured to know everything despite the inaccuracy of her visions. But I'm glad that she now knows (and all Cullens except one) that Bella has been turned. I can't help but think that is a good thing. I wonder if they'll hesitate to call Edward and tell him...
Author's Response: Stay tuned to find out!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
Very cool! Who is Bella going to kill?? You must update soon! :)
Author's Response: Hmmm...wonder who Bella might be tempted to kill upon waking up!?
Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
This is really getting good. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I should have chapter 4 submitted either 1/12 or 1/13
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
MAN! I'm on the edge of the couch! I almost wish this was how NM really went. I see so many possibilities with this story. Keep going...and update soon! I'm dyin over here!
Author's Response: WOW! Huge compliment! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
Awesome! Please update soon! This is a great fic!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
Good story.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: antilleon (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
Ohhh. nice. I like it. And you left me with a cliffhanger too.
Author's Response: Just a little one!!!!
Reviewer: sarunokona (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
wow! this is really incredible! i've read a lot of other fics dealing with a slightly similar plotline but none of them capture so well and so realistically the true feel of the twilight series. really really great job, i can't wait for an update! don't keep us waiting too long!
Author's Response: Wow! Huge compliment! Thanks! I'll be submitting Chapter 4 on 1/12 or 1/13--hopefully it won't take too long to get validated!
Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
Dang yo, dang. I like it so far. Keep it coming! :)
Author's Response: Thanks yo!
Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
Dang yo, dang. I like it so far. Keep it coming! :)
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
Even though I already knew Bella was changed...my mouth still dropped open in shock.
So is Alice having a hard time seeing Bella because Jake is with her? Assuming that Alice doesn't know she can't see the werewolves yet that is.
I wish this chapter had been longer!!!
...I really can't wait for your next chapter-so please make it soon. Mainly because cliff hangers are evil and you know it =P
Author's Response: You guessed correctly! I think the chapters will probably continue coming in at about 2000 words, or about 6-7 Word pages. Just so I can try to keep updating regularly.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
great chapter. i cant wait to read more. looking forward to reading about the cullens going back to forks and seeing bella.
Author's Response: Yes, this will be an interesting reunion now, eh?
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
love it! on the edge of my seat! update again soon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: singingstacy (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
so enthralling! please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
I loved the way you wrote this it was so detaled! I l hope you update soon! I am hooked!
Author's Response: Thanks! I felt like this scene would be very intense. Chapter 3 should be up any day now!
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
Holy Shit!
Author's Response: LOL!
Reviewer: antilleon (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
So far I really like it. Everything flows well. I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 3 should be up any day now!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
great story. keep writing!
Reviewer: EmmBonn (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
This is sad! But so good too. I don't think Jake has ever been so sweet.
Reviewer: smiles (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
Can't wait to hear more!!!
Reviewer: LuckyCat3 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
Can't wait to see what you decide to do with vampire Bella. Canon nitpick: Quil wasn't a wolf yet at that point.
Keep writing! :D
Author's Response: Hmmm...oops! and thanks for pointing that out...now I have to go back and look who the fifth wolf was in the clearing because it's going to drive me crazy...Sam, Paul, Jacob, Embry, and???
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
I am so intrigued by this story. I can't wait to read how it develops. More, please!!!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
I'm enjoying the story so far and am glad that you remembered that venom is poisonous to werewolves (hence, Jake throwing it up). Looking forward to seeing this story progress and hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, he had to give it a try though. I could only imagine how revolted he would have been.
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