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Reviewer: aim2misbehave (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow

I'm enjoying this and looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

I'm glad--thanks!

Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

Excellent update!  I am very anxious to see what Bella's mindset is like when she awakens as a vampire.  I so hope that she remembers Edward and that she doens't completely hate him!   Is she going to be able to control her human bloodlust?  Can't wait for the next update!! 



Author's Response:

All good questions!  Stay tuned!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

I'm really enjoying the story. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: katydid (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

You asked...lovely update, Jake's stance awaiting the Cullens was great.  I'm wondering how the rest of the pack will deal with Jacob, Bella, and the return of the Cullens.

Thanks for the update-Kate



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ACW93 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow

oh man... i hope Edward makes it to bella in time before she changes... that way when she "wakes" up he will be there! good job on the story!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot.  Check back to see if he makes it in time!

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

Ugh, Edward could run faster to Forks than that stupid random flight.  Poor Bella, at least she's got Alice to comfort her now.  Not that Jacob was doing a bad job or anything, not to knock what he was doing for her.  But the smell and all...

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Yes, those flights were a killer!

Reviewer: McKenzieMac (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

Great Update! I hope Edward doesnt go all guilty trip and try to stay away from her now that she is changed



Author's Response:

Yes, he can be annoying sometimes that way, huh?

Reviewer: elleglo (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

I'm really enjoying the story!  I just hope Bella doesn't just forgive Edward right away!



Author's Response:

Ha!  Everyone likes the idea of Edward having to pay a little bit!

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

I'm hoping Bella will be angry at the Cullens; that they will pay a little bit for leaving her. I'm glad Jake told them what she went through.



Author's Response:

Yeah--no way Jake was going to let them just waltz back in like nothing had ever happened.

Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

I do like your take on the whole Laurant-biting-Bella story. Now I'm wondering if Eddie makes it home in time for her awakening and how pissed Bella will be when she sees him.



Author's Response:

All to be revealed soon!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

Yay Edward's coming back :D

I'm glad The Cullens and Jacob are all there to help Bella. Can't wait for Edward to arrive. What'll happen to Charlie?

Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Charlie will make a reappearance shortly!

Reviewer: hanther (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

omg!!! i love it! update sooooon!! pretty please!!!!!! :D

and i cant believe that ppl arent commenting! you totally deserve more!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I appreciate that!

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

I love this story!!!  Please post more soon!!! 



Author's Response:

Will do!

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 4: Revelations

This is very well written!!! I hope you post more ASAP!!!!!



Author's Response:

I appreciate your feedback--thanks!

Reviewer: nicole37 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

Awesome story so far, I can't wait to see what happens next!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Rahveryn (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

Quite the intersting read.  I'm looking forward to your future updates :).

I have to admit, I also wondered what would have happened if the pack ahd waited till Laurent bit her first.  I'm excited to see your take on this.  I enjoy that you used this situation to break Jake off the Pack, and that he went to hide out at the Cullen's.  Love the chapter where Alice sees the Change.

Yup, looking forward to future updates.



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 3: Visions

Awesome!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions

This is GREAT!!! On to the next chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: megzie22 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

I am absolutely loving can't wait for more.

Thank you so much for taking the time to write it



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I appreciate that!

Reviewer: roadkill2105 (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

update!

x x Cassie



Author's Response:

I will!

Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

That was great   I am adding to my favorites now.   I cant wait to see how this plays out with Jacob and Edward there and Bellas unplanned change.   Amazing work  keep it up



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot, and thanks for favoriting!

Reviewer: girl with a pearl j (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

Holy crow, this story is amazing. Very well written, killer plot...I'm anxious to hear more and see where you take this!



Author's Response:

Great review--thanks!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

MERCY. This is going to be amazing. Please post more asap!

Author's Response:

wow--thanks!

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

This promises to have a lot of dynamic clash between Edward and Jake. I am also anxious about how you are going to treat the reunion of Edward with Bella. Is this going to be a forgiving Bella, or will Edward have to win her heart back? Looking forward to reading your story.



Author's Response:

All good questions!  Stay tuned!

Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

ahhh I cannot wait for Edward to get back to her! As always, GREAT story!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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