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Reviewer: Selene (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
Keep up the great work! I anxiously watch for updates!! Don't keep me waiting. LOL!
Author's Response: I'll try not to keep you waiting too long!
Reviewer: Selene (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
Keep up the great work! I anxiously watch for updates!! Don't keep me waiting. LOL!
Author's Response: Will do--and it shouldn't be too long for a new chapter!
Reviewer: stephnachia (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
Hi. I'm one of those readers who hasn't been leaving FDK. Sorry! I just wanted to tell you that this story is amazing. I've always wanted to read a story like this one. You are an amazing writer. Please hurry with the next chapter. I can't wait for Bella to be a vampire and see how she reacts to Edward. Keep them coming!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to leave feedback! I appreciate your comments!
Reviewer: t-reader (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
Loving it so far. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Kiri_sora (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
This story is amzing! Please update soon! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: oneinamillionz (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
omg!
PLEASEEE YOU NEED TO UPDATE NOW!!!
its been a whole day! and ive been checking!! lol hurry huryy!!!
Reviewer: oneinamillionz (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
omg!
PLEASEEE YOU NEED TO UPDATE NOW!!!
its been a whole day! and ive been checking!! lol hurry huryy!!!
Author's Response: Ah! I hope to have a new chapter in the next few days. I'm writing two at the same time, and have been trying to alternate between regular updates for both...
Reviewer: antilleon (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
Sorry, i have been bad lately about not reviewing since I have been reading on the fly. Really liked this chapter. The conversation between Alica and Edward stood out as exceptional well done. I like that there is an appropriate amount of dislike between Jacob and the Cullens but not so much and so constantly in your face that it becomes annoying. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks for the thoughtful review.
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
I am so ready for Edward to get there! It changes the whole story from this point on seeing as Bella is a vampire! I cannot wait to see what you do with this plot twist in relation to Victoria and possibly even the Volturi! (Any conflict with them?)
And I cannot wait to see how Bella acts as a newborn and if she is anywhere close to the books or if you have her demonstrate new abilities!
Author's Response: Lots of things to consider--thanks!
Reviewer: thedramabean (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
Poor Bella... oh God, her awakening with Edward is not going to pretty at all, is it? He's going to be all angsty and ridiculous, and she's either going to be angry, heartbroken, or extremely forgiving.
:(.
Please update ASAP!
Author's Response: It'll be interesting any way it plans out, no?
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
Keep it going. You are doing a fantastic job with this story I know you get the love birds together.
Author's Response: Love your login name! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: amylouwho (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
Since you asked so nicely....:)
I love the suspense you've created. I can't wait to see what happens when Edward gets there and Bella wakes up. Love the Jacob/Rosalie banter. (They would hate their names being that close, wouldn't they?)
Author's Response: Absolutely they would! Thanks a lot!
Reviewer: Miss Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 4: Revelations
Just wanted to say I think this is a really interesting storyline!
I'm enjoying it :)
Author's Response: I'm glad--thanks!
Reviewer: Nadya (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
great story, can't wait for the next update :D
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Twilightlover4ever (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
ok plese plese please please please please plsease please please please please please please please please update...normolly i would write like a paragraph of reviws but im just tired so al i can say is goood story and please please please please plsease please please please please please please please please update
Author's Response: Ooh, I love it when you beg! I'll see what I can do!
Reviewer: KelBellaCullen (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
This is an amazing story! I am hooked! Cant wait for the update...
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: singingstacy (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
i love this!! can't wait for the next update. i wish there was less language though...
Author's Response: Thanks--sorry you're not enjoying the language. I just try to write what feels emotionally real to me...
Reviewer: Mallers (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
This is an awesome story!!!! I wished someone would write a fanfiction on what would happen if Laurent got to Bella!!! And i'm even more happier that the person who wrote it is very GOOD!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I know--it seems like such an obvious 'what if' to me! Thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
I can't wait for the next chapter. This is great!
Author's Response: I'll get it up within the next couple days!
Reviewer: lionandthelamb80 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
I love this story....very exciting so far and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
Good chapter. All the characters are well written. I especially like that Edward is his typical emo self. :) Update soon!
Author's Response: Yes, Edward just can't help himself.
Reviewer: Lee Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
This is a wonderful story! Please keep updating, I love how you characters seem so very themselves. Edward, hurry!
Author's Response: Thanks for that!
Reviewer: Sci_TwiSucker26 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
More! I love it. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks! Stay tuned!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
I'm just going to put this out there: this is one of THE most intriguing stories that I'm hooked on. I'm sorry that more people haven't been reviewing.
I really like this story =D I'm seriously wondering what's going to happen when Edward shows up. I mean...will Jake still love Bella despite her being a vampire? Will Edward be forgiven (I hope he is but he should probably get the crap kicked out of him in principle)? What will the other Cullens do?
I'm seriously on the edge of my seat for next chapter. More soon?!
Author's Response: I really appreciate this review. Thanks.
Reviewer: twerd (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
i love this story, i have been waiting for updates since it first came out, i like check it every day! it's beautiful!
Author's Response: Wow--thanks. The validating has gotten worked out now so chapters should post sooner after I submit!
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