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Reviewer: twinut (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
I just found this story and I'm hooked after only the first chapter!
Author's Response: I'm so glad!
Reviewer: Euphoria (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Awww! Such a touching moment. I need more! Believe it or not, your're writing is very, very moving and beautiful. Its really reals you in. You're a genius.
Author's Response: Wow--thanks so much for the writing comments. Greatly appreciated!
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
OMG! I can't believe you just left it there! That was horrible of you, lol. I'm so anxious to see how the rest of the reunion goes now and poor Jacob....I really felt sorry for him in this scene. I'm hoping you post a chapter soon detailing his pov from this scene. I'm actually kind of surprised that I felt sorry for him even though he tried to hurt Edward with those memories. Anyways...I loved this chapter (even though it did end with that cruel cliffy!). I thought the Alice pov was great and how Edward felt at being reunited with his family. It was interesting when Bella couldn't remember anything at first, but still a nicely done vampire awakening bit. I really, really can't wait for more! Please update again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a thoughtful and detailed review! Sorry, though, I don't feel toooo bad for the cliffy!
Reviewer: antilleon (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Note to self: do not read a chapter of this story while cooking. You will get sucked in and burn the hamburger meat.
Lesson learned.
Author's Response: That is hilarious! And MY husband thought I was addicted. If I brought my laptop into the kitchen with me so I could eke out an additional 10 minutes to read Twilighted stories he would probably destroy my laptop in the night! Glad you enjoyed, but sorry your hamburger became a casualty!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Awe! Now let's see how good her memory is, and if Edward can convence her he still loves her.
Author's Response: Much will be revealed in the next chapter!
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
I like this version of Bella's awakening. You have a very expressive style that translates well to the characters. I'm interested in what direction you are going to take Bella's power; it sounds intense.
Author's Response: I appreciate the comments on the writing--thanks!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Wow, I'm glad she is awake, I feel sorry for Jake and I'm excited to find out what happens next.
Now that I am caught up to everyone else you need to update ASAP!
Author's Response: Will do as soon as I can!!!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Yay Edward's back!! I almost had a heart attack when Bella couldn't remmeber who everyone was. But she remembered!! Thank God!
I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Yes, she remembered, but I really felt the trauma the change had inflicted on her body would cause at least temporary memory loss...
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Oh wow, I was so tense throughout the whole chapter! I didn't know what to expect at the end there! On the good side, Bella didn't try to tear Edward's head off. On the bad side, I'm confused on whether she remembered because her memory came back, or if it's some sort of gift thing. But I can handle being confused for now! Not a problem. Bella's awake and that's great news to me! Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Hmm...stay tuned for a fuller explanation of the nature of her gift!
Reviewer: PawntoQueen (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
I thought she might run away for a minute..So glad she didnt. (:
Love this story
Author's Response: No, no running here!
Reviewer: Newbie0100 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Sooo good, I love alice always thinking about appearences. So far everything seems to be going good for B&E I hope it continues. I wonder what Bellas power is going to be now that Jasper cant get a read on her. I can't wait for more!!! Keep it going I absolutely love this story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Newbie0100 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
OH this chapter was so good, I love jacob being protective of bella its cute. I hope Edward and Bella have a good reunion. I hope she welcomes him back! Keep it up I love it
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: roadkill2105 (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
damn cliff hanger much?
hope you update soon,
don't make her tooooo angry,
x x Cassie
Author's Response: Had to do the cliffie! I didn't want to short change the conversations that are about to follow!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Wow. Great update. I love that she woke up not remembering anybody. I can't wait to read what her reaction to all of this will be. You do a great job with the characters! I can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback--appreciate it!
Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
yay and aww.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: lizzybtmn (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
WOW!!!!!!!! that . . .was . . .AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!! I adore your story to no end!Please update soon!
LizzyBtmn :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much for letting me know!
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
I m so happy! This is the sweetest chapter! I cant wait for Bella to see herself! I wonder what her powers will be and if she will differ greatly from the book! I look forward to your next chapter! They have all been so well done thus far! You are a good writer.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback on my writing! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: Mallers (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
A-MAZ-ING!!! cannot wait for the update!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! More soon!
Reviewer: Aimee (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
i loved it, now i wanna see what she has to say to edward for leaving her lol.
Author's Response: Next chapter!
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Aww I'm so glad she's changed! So now I wonder if she didn't lose any of her human memories when she was changed, because of her last words in the chapter. Can't wait for more! Great job!
Author's Response: Stay tuned for a fuller explanation!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Thank you for the update! She remembers everything, well, that could be interesting......lol. Looking forward to next chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, could be very interesting!
Reviewer: laughingspider (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
This is an excellent New Moon AU. So far the characterizations are spot on. I've noticed that you've chosen to stray from canon a little with Bella's vampiric power (Jasper can't sense her). I'm interested to see where you go with that, as I find that most authors who do this go waaay overboard with how powerful they make her. I'm very much looking forward to your next chapter.
Shawn
Author's Response: Yes, her power will be a little different. But she's not going to be the most powerful vampire of all time or anything!
Reviewer: Wishingforlove (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Awsome! I just started this one tonight and I'm really impressed with your writing. It moves along quickly, but doesn't feel rushed and unrealistic like some fan fics can. I'm really interested to see where you take this story. It's a great choice for a different time line of events and I like how you've managed to keep very much to the original feel of twilight at the same time. Please update soon, I'll be watching for the next chapters :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much--great review!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Wow. That was freaking awesome. Seriously. I was kinda weary b/c so many stories of Bella's change are exactly like Breaking Dawn. But this was different and believable. Good job. :) Please update soon. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback on her change!
Reviewer: cocoajunkie (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Yay! Bella's awake!
Author's Response: And that should keep things interesting!
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