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Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
Wow! This is so good! One of my favs!!! I am so anxious to see what happens! I know that Edward and Bella love each other but it would be fun to see Bella really let him have it a few times since she is a newborn!!! I really enjoy your writing....update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: girliegirl (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
Oh man, I love this story I can not wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks! Soon!
Reviewer: bekahsaurus (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
Oh man, you can't leave it there like that! Gah!!
Author's Response: Mwuhaha! Don't worry! More soon!
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
LOOOOOOOVVVVEEEE IT! Im only on the third chapter so i dont know if you do or not, but i would love to see emmetts point of veiw
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
SO FAR SO VERY VERY GOOD! im on the first chapter so im gonna shut up and read more
Author's Response: Glad you found and are liking my story!
Reviewer: Chicke (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Miss_Me_ (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
WOW!!! What else is there to say??!! WOW!!! Need to read more ;)
Author's Response: 'Wow' works for me! Glad you liked!
Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
i love where this is going! More please!
Author's Response: Great! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
hehe all i can say is MORE MORE MORE
Author's Response: Soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: palsyjohn (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
I am printing this story out and am returning my other SM books. THIS is how I wanted the Twilight Saga to end. Perfect. Loved it. Well thought out, this ties up many loose ends, no stupid Renesmee, no gory birth, no stupid BD b.s. Thank you. What books did you write? I'll read them. I especially appreciated how every character communicated much better, more completely, and because of this I could tolerate them. It got to be very annoying in SM's "version" (if you will) when the characters where so much themselves that they didn't adapt, didn't grow during the story. In this story, there's adaptation, reasonably change, and it makes the progression of Bella becoming a vampire more acceptable and exciting and happy. When she changed in BD, it was sad, cold, and complicated. This was in keeping with the original Twilight book, where Bella was a high schooler and the mood in the book was exciting, new, fun.... You're story rocked!! It made me wonder, why the f*** couldn't SM have found this path. Yours made so much more sense and was ultimately more satisfying. Granted, having SM's 4 part series gave your story the encylopedia to reference to (that fellow Twilighters know), but if that information had not been fleshed out with SM's series, you would've done that here. Love your work!!!
Author's Response: Wow--this is an awesome review and so thoughtful and generous. I agree with a lot of your characterization of SM's later books, love them as I do. Twilight remains my favorite for some of the reasons you enumerated. The lack of character evolution in general was something I regretted. Thank you so much for reviewing!!!! (I just finished my first novel in November and am trying to get it published--not an easy thing to do...; I also just submitted it for a breakthrough novel contest on amazon--I'll know whether or not I made it through the first two round on March 16. I have three other novels started, one of which I intend to focus solely on as soon as I get this fanfic stuff out of my head....
Reviewer: bells123 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
Oh, you left us hanging!! Looking foward to more!!
Sexual tension aside, I love the plot of this story.
Author's Response: Had to do it! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
=D Perfect. Amazing.
Please more?
Author's Response: Soon!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
Bella's newborn mood swings are excellent. Especially when she attacks Edward's face. Nummy.
By "I told him so" at the end - with her actions? with her thoughts? with words?
I liked that she went with McCarty - especially after it was followed up with Alice schooling Edward for being an idiot. :-)
Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see. The next chapter will pick up immediately where this one left off!!
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
I LOVE reading about how Bella is handling this! It's so great to see her change in a new light. I especially like her choice of name. The way Emmet regards her is so cute and I love the fact she still wants to marry Edward. XD
I hope you continue the story in Denali, but it'd also feel right if it ended when they left..... even if I do wish it'd continue. :) Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one now that I've caught up. *sigh*
Author's Response: The story will definitely follow Bella to Denali. That much I can say for sure. Glad you liked the name choice and her reactions in general.
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 8: Reunions, Part III
Brilliant as usual! I love the fact it's still not hunky dorey. But poor Charlie, having to think that Bella died, bless him. I loved the reunion with Jacob as well, that was handled really nicely!
Anyway, geat chapter! Looking forward to reading more. :) Do you have an idea of how many more chapters there's going to be?
Author's Response: Not sure on total number of chapters yet, but glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: Porcelain Mortal (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
Update soon, please!! :o)
Author's Response: Shouldn't be too long!
Reviewer: Porcelain Mortal (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
OMG!!! :-DDD
Author's Response: XD
Reviewer: Porcelain Mortal (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
Oohh... not quite the Edward reaction I was anticipating, but still good!! Another fantastic chapter, especially Jacob dealing with Carlisle and the rest of the family.
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: Porcelain Mortal (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 4: Revelations
Amazing chapter!! I loved the part where Jacob realized that Bella, even looking like a vamp, is beautiful to him. LoVeD that part. Normally I don't like a story where the POV is constantly changing, but here I don't mind it. In a story this frantic and fast-paced, it seems to work. The only thing I thought was a little off was Edward reaction to the news that his whole family is returning to Forks - I'd imagined he would be utterly furious, and yelling at Rosalie. But the fact that he turned off his phone right after was perfect - what I wouldn't give to see his POV when he gets that phone call and right after, I can only imagine it would be incredibly heartbreaking. I'm so glad that the whole family has gone to be with Bella after she changes, that's the only way I imagine they could keep her from killing someone. I wonder if they'll have to leave Forks altogether - it makes sense, but will Bella simply go missing from town or will they stage her death?? I'm soo intrigued, I absolutely love this story. :o)
Author's Response: Glad you're feeling like the multiple POVs works. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Porcelain Mortal (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
YES!!! Awesome.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Porcelain Mortal (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions
Another great chapter!! You didn't skimp on JPOV this time, and I absolutely loved the way you wrote him watching her change. I actually forgot at first that at this point in NM, Bella didn't know Jacob knew the truth about the Cullens, so the way you wrote her realizing she was revealing too much was perfect. You have got BPOV practically down to a science, you write it so well. I'm so anxious to see what's going to happen - and I can't wait to see how Edward will react when he finally sees Bella again!! I hope that part's not too far off - it seems like Alice should have seen this, even though Jacob is there. At some point Bella will be alone and Alice will know, right?? Ahh I can't wait to keep reading. :-D
Author's Response: Glad you're liking my characterization of Bella. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Porcelain Mortal (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
I absolutely loved BPOV!! The way you wove the lines from NM in with your own writing was so fluid, I barely noticed where Stephenie Meyer's words ended and yours began again. You wrote the beginning of Bella's change very well, too. Bravo on the first part.
JPOV felt a little bit rushed, but I totally understand why you wrote it that way. I knew what was going to happen between the wolves before it took place, of course, so I wasn't real interested in reading the details of it. I was a little bothered by the change of POV at first, but I know why you did that too, because it made perfect sense. I'm totally hooked and I can't wait to see what happens in future chapters.. how Bella's change will affect her without her having the time to prepare for it first, and how they dynamic between her and Jacob will change. Great first chapter!! :o)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Glad you found my story and are enjoying it. There's more JPOV to come!
Reviewer: wren (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
oh no! A cliffie! You're so delightfully evil to us :)
I want...no, NEED more of this story soon!!!
Author's Response: "Delightfully evil"--I like that!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
Squeal!!!! I can't wait to see where the story is going now still want the fight between V & B!!!!
post again soon can't seem to get enogh!!!
Author's Response: Don't worry, Victoria's still out there somewhere...!
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
Awesome chapter there....the first part with the werewolves was good. I always wondered why they didn't just do that in BD after it had all calmed down. I loved that Bella chose Emmett's last name and how Emmett kept calling her little sis and Carlisle's speech and giving Bella her own Cullen crest...it was all just too sweet! And Edward...bless his heart, he was being pretty dense there fore a minute. I'm so glad Alice kept him from making a fool out of himself, lol. Then Bella accidently expanding her shield was an interesting twist on that. And I love that Bella and Edward have at least started down the road to for the recovery of their relationship, but there is definitely a lot of work still to do. He was totally Sweetward there for a while though. I wonder how things will progress once they all get to Denali? I'm sure Tanya and her bunch will probably make an appearance soon. Can't wait to find out; awesome job here!
Author's Response: Thanks for so many specific comments. I'm glad you enjoyed!
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