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Reviewer: azitram (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions

I love it can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: azitram (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow

I your twist to Twilight.  I look forward to see what happens next.  I love that Jacob is standing by Bella.



Author's Response:

Thanks--this possibility always intrigued me.  A good 'what if'.  Glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: dms (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings

it was so wonderful. i've anxiously awaited updates on "the list," and now realize i have another story to pine for. this was so well thought out, so well written. you are talented!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for giving this story a try too!  Glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: GoldenSun (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings

hot damn, give me more



Author's Response:

:)  Thanks!

Reviewer: jenniven1009 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions

SUCH and amazing story!!! RIVETING!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: bookedwardisbetter (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings

please update soon! love the story



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Marie-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow

Looking for something to read while u update The List(to wich i am totally adicted by now)my friend told me(glad she did) u have written something else,not as intense as The list but prety good too,so i was like ok cool something else to read.

Needless to say just like w The List i was instanly HOOKED!!!!

I think i've already reviewed on The List like 6 times now,cant get enough of it!!! This is my first one here but more will come... promise!!!

I love this new twist to what could have hapened in new moon after the encounter w Laurent.

I also love the fact that u gave Bella a chance to vent her frustation,her anger not only towards Edward but to the rest of the Cullens.Edward really had it coming.

Besides make up sex is the hottest and sweetest sex there is great job!!!...again!!!

Please update soon!!!

P.S. If u ever get published...wait let me rephrase WHEN u get published cause i know u will.U can be sure i will buy your work :-)



Author's Response:

This is such a sweet review--thanks so much and I'm glad you found and liked this story too!

Reviewer: erato12 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings

I really enjoyed this story!  Very well written!  I hope there's more to come . . .



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  There will be more!

Reviewer: emotionisalive (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

ok, I'll review- mainly because I adore your writing skills, and this story is so addicting- I love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I appreciate it!

Reviewer: Scarlett_Letters (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings

Great story so far! I love that the reunion was "realistic" and that Bella was able to express her anger/hurt to Edward. Nice lemon too - so glad you didn't make Edward a big prude. He is 17 for goodness sake! :)

Looking forward to their time in Denali and Bella's fighting lessons. i hope she gets to make good use of them.



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Wendyloohoo (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings

Love this story! Very satsifying that Bella didn't forgive him immediately and as Emmett so aptly put, "handed his ass to" Edward for leaving her without making her part of the decision. Great tension throughout - sexual and otherwise ;-). I'm soooo glad that you didn't let Edward give into his "morality" regarding sex with Bella. (Another satisfying scene). I know you mentioned to another reviewer that Edward may have some second thoughts about it later. I think it would be interesting to play out the marriage proposal and Bella's disinterest in the whole need for something so official. Could be interesting dynamics between the two after the fact. I'm very interested to see how Bella deals with the Denali sisters as well. I love that Edward can hear her thoughts when she is apparently vulnerable to her emotions (rage, desire, etc.) as her shield seems to "lift" in these instances. Nice twist. I'm also impressed that Edward feels the need to respect her privacy in that matter. It's a good step for him. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this. Please update soon!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for all these specific comments.  I really appreciate it.  I'm glad you found and enjoyed my story!  More soon!  Writing two stories--I'm pretty sure I remember your name reviewing the other one two--and it's sometimes difficult to keep up with updating them both quickly...thanks again!

Reviewer: SheriePattinson (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings

Excellent!!!!

Cant wait for the next installment..

Im getting hooked on your stories, and its killing me to have to wait for them..



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: Bella_De_Luna11 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings

wow girl you nknow what you are doing lol



Author's Response:

XD Thanks!  Glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Selene (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings

Good Reunion! LOL!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: twilightgirly12 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings

That was seriously one of the best stories on here! I loved it! You should deff right more stories. =)



Author's Response:

There's more on the way and I have one other story on Twilighted.  Plus at least one other idea in the works....thanks!

Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings

Okay, so I was looking for something new to read while waiting on some of my favorite fanfics to be updated *cough* "The List" *cough*, and saw this story.  Because of the awesomeness that is "The List", I had to give this story a try, and you have delivered once again.  You convey the emotional roller coaster of Bella really well.  My favorite part so far was when Edward told her that she needed to take him off that pedastal she had placed him on.  That needed to be said, so well done.  I eagerly await the next update.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for giving this story a try.  I'm glad you liked it.  The List, ahem, should be updated shortly.  Chapter 14 was submitted on Saturday.  And I'm already at work on 15.  Thanks!

Reviewer: kassy723 (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings

Absolutely amazing story so far! I love that Bella is so strong in your stories--its about time!! Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting on Bella.  I much prefer her strong and not meek.  She was at times too meek in the actual books.  I actually preferred her characterization in the movie for that reason.  Glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: twifans (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings

this story was great.  just like your others.  is there going to be more?  I love that you didn't have the moral struggles that Edward always has when it comes to sex.  Love how you had him just go for it.



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying.  Yes, there are more chapters to come on this story.  I decided to forego the moral struggle here because Edward didn't raise that particular objection with Bella until Eclipse.  Before that it was always just a matter of her fragility.  So, while I'm not saying he won't have some of those thoughts after the fact, he was too caught up in the moment to think that much about it.

Reviewer: twifans (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 3: Visions

good good I was taken to another place



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it!  Thanks!

Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings

I was a little curious as to why there was no mention of Edward's previous reservations about waiting for sex until after marriage...



Author's Response:

Edward didn't really raise those particular objections until after their reunion in New Moon.  Beforehand, all of his objections, when he would even discuss anything sexual, were all related to his fear of her fragility.  So those conversations hadn't occurred between them in the chronology relevant to this story...

Reviewer: HisTopazEyes (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings

honestly, i like this so much. i hope you bring the volturri in and give us the fight we all wanted in breaking dawn. i know that's asking a bit much lol

i love your interpretation of jake too, the sweet jake yay

 

awesome job. please update soon! :)



Author's Response:

You're looking for a fight, eh?  We'll see!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting

This is great... I can't wait to see Vampire Bella.



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 2: Decisions

Wow! I really like the concept. :D



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you found and are enjoying my story!

Reviewer: New-moon-rising (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow

Hi have actually now read the whole thing, was brilliant your a great writer, i hope theres more of this story to come.



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying the story!  More in a few days!

Reviewer: porche911turbo (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings

great story

 

next update??



Author's Response:

Thanks!  A few days out!

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