Great chapter!  I really liked that Bella pulled into herself to reflect on all of the changes happening in her life...  Your balance between the real and the extraordinary is wonderful.

Thank you!  Please write more soon!

Another great chapter.  The contast between this story and your other story is amazing, but I truly love both of them equally. 

I desperately want there to be a showdown between newborn Bella and Tanya now...  haha!  I know it would be a little OOC for Bella, but Tanya has it coming.  And I kind of want to smack both Edward and Bella for their lack of communication. 

Anyway!  Great work!  Please keep writing this story.  It must be difficult to write two such different stories at the same time.  We love you for it though!!

Took me a little while to remind myself of the story again as it was so long since I had read it. 

Things are moving along nicely and its lovely to see the old fashioned edward want a date ;-)  The little incident with Tanya has given them the kick up the arse they needed to start admitting their feelings.

Now I need to get back to studying...blast it all to hell.  I'd be quite content to read updates and daydream instead.

whew... I found myself hissing at the computer when Edward excused himself to go see Tanya... that was never going to end well.

But at least Bella and he have talked already and are all set for a date now :)

I'm really enjoying this story so far.  The only thing I found distracting was that the fifth wolf was Jared, not Quil.  Other than that, very good.  I'm going to read the remaining chapters you've already posted now.  I just had to point that out!

Author's Response:

You're right.  I just reread New Moon last week (weeks after writing that first chapter) and noticed my mistake.  I just haven't gone back to fix it.  Thanks!

So glad you are back.  I admit I went back a few chapters and reread to regain the story's momentum.... and to hell with these separate bedrooms!  Please write more SOON.

AAAGHHHH!!!! Fucking Tanya always fucking things up!!!! I hate that WOMAN!!!!

But i love this chapter lol.Sorry,i was just venting hahaha.

I would have liked for Bella and her to confront,but who knows what would have hapened(although i think Bella would have kicked her ass lmao).

But it seems that thing are getting back on track,i love this new powerfull Bella and i hope that she is the one who gets to finish off Victoria in the end.

Hope u update soon, love this story(but LOVE The List best)

I love this line:-)  "I wished I could be what I am and still have them in my life.  But that would have been unrealistic."  Because, yeah - keeping Charlie in her life in BD was completely unrealistic. 

Yippee for Rose kinda saving the day here. 

I love that they're going to date - for the first time ever, basically.

Author's Response:

Caught that line didya?  That was, in fact, a complete diss at BD.  Sorry BD lovers.  I *like* BD, but don't love it.  And one of the things I disliked was how Bella didn't end up having to sacrifice anything.  It was just, well, unrealistic, to me.  Thanks for reviewing!

Good chapter! I hope Bella gets her chance to let Tanya have it! I'm glad her & Edward talked it out! God knows they needed to! Can't wait to see how things play out with Victoria and especially Bella & Edward's relationship!

Thanks for updating!

I am SO loving how things are progressing.  Wonderful update.  I hope this means they will start communicating to each other.  I loved when Bella referred to Edward as Her Territory.  I loved that he heard that and liked it!  More, please.  I want more!!!

Great chapter. I'm so glad they worked things out. I had a minor freak out and thought Bella would leave them. I like the idea of a date. It's really sweet.

"I hoped and prayed that nothing ever would again." Foreshadowing?

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Waah!  There's no next button.

Excellent writing!  You managed to draw me into the story every bit as well as the original author did.  Personally I prefer the way you went with the story line.  Although I think I would have liked to have seen Bella show a little bit more indecision towards Edward, and the sex came too soon.  The sexual tension between the two could keep the story line going a long time.  Thank you for sharing your talent.

When I think of a date, I think dinner... movie.... first date sort of thing... but if they go out for dinner, it will be deer, moose or bear... LOL and sexy vampires eating... yum. :)

Great job on this, and I'm so glad you updated this.