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Reviewer: SuthernAngel78 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
I wish Bella had ripped Tanya's head off...or at least punched her in the face. The woman has no shame.
Reviewer: wilkesmom2 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
I absolutely love this story!! I can't wait to read more!! Hope it comes soon!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
I like possessive Bella too! That was awesome!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
LOVED Bella's reaction to Tanya. That skank.
I can't wait for the date! I wonder what they could be doing....
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: mrsjjjcullen (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
OMG i love it .. bella being all possesive of edward-- VERY SWEET!!
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Edward's slip of the tongue led to a great discussion about whether he believes that he has a soul. I loved how Bella focused the conversation on her then flipped the script. The entrance of Tanya into Edward and Bella's home was very entertaining. It provided some great scenes like her introduction and Bella leaping in front of Edward to stop Tanya's mental images. I can't wait for Edward and Bella's date and impending intimacy. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
LOVED it!!! "Bella, the family...do you care?" and she said no, I was cracking up. You get yours Bella!!! Lol ... & I hope Bella gets a hold of Tanya atleast one time ... She doesn't have 2 kill her cuz thats too dramatic, but just get a few punches in, cause she deserves that much!! :) and I wouldn't mind reading it. lol. Can't wait for the next chapter. I love that you updated so fast!!!! =)
Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
That was great!! not the beat down i imagined but awsome nun the less..i cant wait for your next updates on this and the list with btw i am waiting for please hurry i wanna read some more.
Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
This might sound strange, but the thing that is sticking out most to me as I'm typing this review and thinking back on your story is the way it took time for them for them to truly get their relationship back. I think it fell into place for me with Bella's statement "You and me...I...I feel like we're ‘us' again." I like that about your story and it really makes more sense to me that way. Anyone that has ever been lied to, abandoned...or betrayed in any way by someone they love, know that no matter how much you might love that person and want to forgive them, it takes time to get past all the negative feeling and rebuild that trust. Maybe I am overthinking it, but I really liked that about your story, and that was what I luved most about this chapter...that they are finally there.
On a lighter note, I also like the way that Bella handled Tanya...lol. That girl so gets on my nerves...grrrr. Rosalie speaking up made me happy too. I think the Cullen girls need to have a little "talk" with her, til she finally REALLY gets it. Anyway, thanks for writing. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for that. I don't think a month is a long or unreasonable amount of time for Bella to finally get to a place of forgiveness for him leaving her and lying to her. But I also didn't want it to be a month's worth of fighting and bitterness--they get to a place of friendship again and that rebuilds the foundation for their love and trust. I'm glad you saw all that here. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
I really liked this chapter. I'm glad they're figuring out the full extent Bella's abilites.
Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: ncchris (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
LOVE it!!!!
Reviewer: PawntoQueen (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Sweet!
Reviewer: lovetwilightforever (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
i liked it! tanya is such a bitch! shes worse than lauren!
i love this story.
Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Another great chapter.... and don't worry about responding to reviews!!! I'd rather see updates on this story and "The List". Both stories are excellent!
Reviewer: stupidlamb79 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
I wish Bella would have kicked Tanyas ass! Great chapter!
Reviewer: KS123 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Two updates in one week?? What did we do to deserve this? :)
I loved this chapter so much (even though she didn't get to kick the shitout of Tanya... Maybe in a later chapter?). Anyway, I love the idea of Bella having more than one talent and where you could run with that idea. I'm so excited to read about their date!
Update soon, please!!!!!!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Sooooooooooooooo.....
write more.
PLEASE.
Reviewer: silverfaire (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Thank you for that. I appreciate the quick succession of chapters and realize it must take up quite a bit of your time. Thank you for doing this!
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
that was fun. look forward to more! love possessive bella!
Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Thank you for the quick update. Excellent chapter from an excellent writer. I like possesive Bella. I also liked Rosalie calling Tanya out. Can't wait to see what Edward has in store for this date.
Reviewer: Bopstar (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
I like that there finally happy together again but i'm curious about what will happen next. Will there be another bridge they have to cross before there absolutely and completly happy or will it just be good times from here on in?
Anyway it's an excellent story!
Reviewer: Bled Dry (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Loved fierce Bella. I wouldn't have minded if she got a shot at Tanya though :)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Great chapter, I hope Bella does get to hit Tanya in the future
Reviewer: sunsunhot7 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Damn, I really wanted Bella to smack the dog shit out of Tanya! Tanya probably would have kicked her ass, but that first hit would have stunned the shit out of her. Next time she would think twice about messing with Bella's Edward. (He's My Edward Too, but I'm learning to share ;D)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Squeal Date nite!!!! I am so looking forward to this!!! I can't wait for her to finally hear Tonya and when she does I hope she rips a pice of strawberry blonde hair out of her pretty little head!!!!
Post again soon!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE give me a good Bella Tonya fight scene!
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